ok i edited it. anything else need changing?
btw on the first post, it still says my eidolon is alexander.
Appearance: Ezra is just above average height and topping his lithe body is a head of dark brown waves with copper undertones. His textured waves swoop to the side, giving his hair a very carefree appearance. Under his eyebrows rest a pair of wide, almond-shaped orbs that are often mistaken for being black. In actuality though, his eyes are just dark brown. In the middle of his face lies a small, button nose that compliments his milky white baby face very well.
Adorning his body with a baby blue button up, a brown leather vest, and dark denim skinny jeans, Ezras clothing is fitted to his body, putting his swimmers build on display for all to admire. When traveling through dangerous fronts, the teen wields a rather large firearm that takes both hands to shoot. When out of combat, the gun is slung across his back, held in place by a holster that’s strapped across his chest. While the teen has no tattoos or controversial piercings, he does have both his lobes pierced with small silver studs that are barely noticeable.
l'Cie Brand: His brand lays on his upper left arm, slightly hidden by the sleeve of his shirt.
Personality: Ezra is his own best friend. Spending much of his childhood alone, he is most capable of fending for himself. Many of his weekends were spent bickering and bartering with the cities shopkeepers, trying to squeeze out the best deal. He would often buy apparel and unnecessary trinkets, trying to fill the empty void in his heart. This was done mostly for fun, as many of his purchases had little to no value.
Although he is almost an adult, Ezra still holds the lonely grudges of his childhood. He holds his body straight up, looking through passerbys that are unimportant to him. His body language is distant and detached, which can sometimes come off as cold. While many things come easy to him, he takes joy in divulging in certain tasks, such as manipulation and exploration. His lust for the unknown is untamable, only dampened by his cautious personality.
History: Born in New Bodhum, both of Ezras parents were politicians and show great enthusiasm for their work. From a young age, Ezra was left alone with his older brother quite often, who would often neglect him and showed little affection for him. Growing bored of his stagnant style of life, he began to sneak out of his house behind his brothers back regularly, mainly going to visit the coastal markets of the city.
Ezra became fascinated with the shops and loved observing the various interactions that occurred between the merchants and the buyers. Sometimes they would haggle, other times they would argue, but each time, Ezra would keep a mental note of the situation and the outcome. Arming himself with a set amount of gil, the brunette snuck out once again and decided it was time to make his first purchase. While he was a bit of a pushover, age hardened his exterior, allowing him to be more stern and manipulative with his words.
By the time he was seventeen, his brother had moved out and his parents were growing old. Ezra would often go out by himself and scout the neighboring lands that engulfed New Bodhum. Traveling farther than he ever had before, Ezra happened to find an abandoned city that was void of human life. It was there when he was marked as a with the others as a l’Cie.
Paradigms: Ravager, Saboteur, Medic.