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Old May 19th, 2013 (01:45 PM). Edited May 19th, 2013 by Chalifoux.
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I don't think it's rubbish, Midnight! It's actually very good! Although you have some typos and need to assign her a height and weight. Once done I think It will be good to go :)

EDIT: Durr hurr I also had typos xD
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