heretostay123 - Great sign up so far! Really like Rodrick's history, however I'd love it if you could maybe add a bit more detail in that section - perhaps elaborating on his duties to the Princess or something along those lines.
YellowGardevoir - Similar feedback for you, almost there but try elaborating further. Perhaps you could expand on Kouryu and Imito's relationship as Bagon/Shellgon.
Sir Bastian and hiinotama - It's really up to you! I would say though, although inspiration has come from Game of Thrones there is actually no direct connection. I may throw some parallels up in my event posts but the story will be based on this region, rather than Westeros.