And a New chapter is up! Please check the first post for the list of chapters
Here is the link anyway
Geez I took a while for this one. I tried to do all sorts of different stuff but eventually I chose to cut the story at the part where Curlean City is mentioned. Don't worry you'll get filled in with the details shortly after the gym battle but after tackling the scene with the two talking for a month and making no progress I just decided to forsake that idea and move on.
So the next chapter? Battle! Battle! Battle!....o and i'll explain why Brock has...well eyes.