: FireRed hack:
Pokemon Adventure - Red Chapter [Aethestode]
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June 3rd, 2013 (1:58 AM).
Join Date: Oct 2009
Looks very impressive. :) I've always wanted to do a manga-based hack and yours looks very well done. I'm not sure if you're aware of this or not, but there are quite a few grammar and spelling errors I can see just from looking at the screenshots.
For example, in this picture, instead of "What are you doing!" it should be "What are you doing?!", you've spelled thief as "Theif", Pok
mon needs the proper "é", and using three exclamation marks looks really odd. other than the errors, it looks very good though, and I'd love to give it a try after you release beta 3, good luck! ;)
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