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Old June 3rd, 2013 (09:55 PM).
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Caught your link from Twitter, thought I might check it out haha.

Have to say, this already sets up to be an interesting AU. Since you have Ash die at the very beginning, am curious your take on this and how much you planned out already. Do feel sorry for Delia there. D:

Overall, nice take on the reset prompt and an enjoyable read! I won't mind this concept being explored more.
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