[FlashFiction] Digimon 2390 Snippet
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July 1st, 2013 (05:23 AM).
I'M AN ANGRY SCIENTIST!!
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Central Coast - Australia
I think you did well in conveying the feeling of coding frustration, something I can relate to well. (Also the frustration of working with someone who doesn't understand what you are meant to do or the like.
) I also think that this perspective for the character you were perusing is a decent one, so go for it! I didn't get confused by the terms, but that's probably because they're familiar to me in some way.
Suffice it to say, Jana was frustrated.
I am not sure if the 'it' there is necessary. Probably could go without?
Nothing else to point out like the above. Overall I liked the piece. =)
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