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Old July 1st, 2013 (05:23 AM).
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I think you did well in conveying the feeling of coding frustration, something I can relate to well. (Also the frustration of working with someone who doesn't understand what you are meant to do or the like. ) I also think that this perspective for the character you were perusing is a decent one, so go for it! I didn't get confused by the terms, but that's probably because they're familiar to me in some way.
Suffice it to say, Jana was frustrated.
I am not sure if the 'it' there is necessary. Probably could go without?

Nothing else to point out like the above. Overall I liked the piece. =)
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