[Dead] Pokemon Zero & One
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July 26th, 2013 (1:27 PM).
Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: The Hague
Screens are indeed very nice! However, there are quite some grammar hiccups...
First screen: Coming is spelled with just one m.
Second screen: It should be "I'm sorry
Fifth screen: shouldn't it be "choose between three", rather than "among three"?
sixth screen: You forgot to place another comma after "Wait"
You should be careful with the things you publish, after I found two spelling mistakes I spend more time looking for other grammatical errors than actually paying attention to the screens.
Anyway, keep up the good work, as this looks more than promising! =)
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