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Old August 20th, 2013, 02:51 PM
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I think it's pretty interesting so far. I like the city and character names, and also the plot seems to be interesting, too. Hey, the more descriptive you can be, the better. Adding more detail always adds spice to any story, but I think you're fine if you want to continue writing the way you are! Also, adding pictures would definitely make the story ten times cooler. I think that's what you were planning on doing anyway, but just wanted to make that remark.

I want to read part 2! xD
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