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Old September 17th, 2013 (08:44 AM).
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Totally amazing work you have here! The way you phrase, your pronunciation and the way you can capture the reader's attention is truly inspiring! It makes me realize how much my own work needs brushing up. ^-^"

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A moment later, he was just a face between the clawing hands of the old people, screaming wildly; a few seconds later, he had vanished entirely in a swell of cardigans and wrinkled skin.
This sentence is a humorous work of art!
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