Thread: FireRed hack: Pokemon Battle Brown
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Old October 21st, 2013 (10:24 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Varion:
If this takes place 3 days after a giant war.

You may want to change tiles alot, because at the moment it doesn't look post-war times.
Also, the story seems pretty good, let's just hope it turns out good in gameplay.

Also, you've not used the [Red_FR] command in XSE to make the font red from talking to a female NPC.
Also the name WINNIPEG sounds strange and not very town-like?
http://travel.yahoo.com/p-travelguide-482020-winnipeg_vacations-i

Looks good, I'll definitely try it out.
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