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Flow of time

Ranken

change is good.
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What was the start of all this?
When did the cogs of fate begin to turn?
Perhaps it is impossible to group
that answer no,
From the deep within the flow of time
We loved so many,
But hated much.
we hurt others and we hurt ourselves.
Yet even then we ran like
the wind,
Whilst our laughter echoed
Under cerulean skies.

=]​
 

Micro

770
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  • Seen Jul 24, 2009
Wow Ranken. I never knew you were in to poetry. That poem is pretty good :> I like it. Keep up the good work! :>
 

BHwolfgang

kamikorosu
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I like it. Is this your first?

I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?

It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?
 

ShadowLeader

because shadows follow...
653
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15
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BHwolfgang said:
I like it. Is this your first?

I just want to ask, but what kind of poem is this?

It's too short to be a sonnet, so is this a free verse?
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poems dont have to be classified....but if thats the case it free verse....
but well written....i would say get up the good work but everyone else already said that so....i look forward to reading more of ur poetry..
 
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