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Sacred Fire, Divine Water [OOC-SU] [T]

Which Family is teh bestest evar?


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Full Name: Lorenzo Caesar Andretti
Nicknames: N/A
Age: 25
Family: Divine Water
Career: Captain of the Guard
Appearance:

Lorenzo is very tall, and muscularly built. Lorenzo measures in at six feet, six inches tall, very tall for the time period and Lorenzo stands out amongst the rest. Lorenzo has short, brown hair which Lorenzo keeps ruffled in a stylish manner on top of his head. Lorenzo has a very sharp, chiseled face with facial features that blend in. Lorenzo's skin tone is slightly tanned, although very lightly. Lorenzo has dark green eyes, which gleam like emeralds in the right lighting conditions. Lorenzo's nose ridge is well blended into to his facial complexion and does not appear to protrude out very far. Lorenzo's chin is sharp and chiseled, and angles sharply in from his jawbones. Lorenzo also sports some facial hair, growing out small dark brown goatee.

Lorenzo's Clothes:

Spoiler:


Personality:

Lorenzo is your traditional macho, arrogant youngster. Lorenzo thinks quite highly of himself, due to his close relations to important members in the Divine Water family and his position as the Captain of the Guard. Lorenzo is quite absorbed about his image, and what others think of him, and he takes tons of time out of his day to perfect his image. Lorenzo is very arrogant, believing that he can do anything and will talk down anyone who says he can't do something, even if the task is out of Lorenzo's realm of knowledge. Lorenzo is quite charismatic despite his insanity, and can convince people to do things they would be opposed to. Lorenzo is a weapon by himself, whether it is through his tongue or by his sword. Lorenzo is a very skilled fighter, and is not only naturally talented with a weapon, but is tactical and cunning enough to place a smart blow. Lorenzo is quite egotistical, thinking very highly of himself. Lorenzo has gone insane with power and wealth over a short period of time, and Lorenzo's sense of beliefs are completely twisted. First of all, Lorenzo believes that he is destined to unite all of Johto, not for one of the families, but as his own Empire. Lorenzo isn't truthfully devoted to either family, although he does pull off acting that he devotes himself to Divine Water. Lorenzo's mannerisms are quite like a elitist mercenary, not only does he think very highly of himself, but he is very dishonest and not very loyal. But when it comes down to it, few are as a skilled fighter or diplomat as Lorenzo.

History:

Lorenzo Caesar Andretti was born to two nobles, who owned a farm and ran it in a feudal system. From a young age, Lorenzo was generally ignored by his parents, due to being the second child. Unlike his older brother, Roberto, who was being groomed to take over the family business, Lorenzo stuck to training to become a guard, liking the concepts that came with sword fighting and Lorenzo found himself quite talented at sword fighting. Lorenzo kept training in the art of sword fighting as he grew older, finding an excellent proficiency at the art. Lorenzo also was taught academically, as his brother was as well. Lorenzo succeeded in both trainings, as he started to grow in reputation. Lorenzo joined the guard force when he was 18, after training for most of his life the skills necessary to become a guard. Due to influence by his wealthy parents and his natural talents, Lorenzo quickly worked his way up the ranks and became one of Lugia's most trusted guards when Lorenzo was twenty, which also happened to be the year of separation. Lorenzo was present when the tower was burned to the ground, witnessing the deaths of the children, something Lorenzo has never lived down, due to the fact that he could have saved them and more importantly, looked like the hero. When Lugia and his followers escaped, Lorenzo went with them, looking for a way to escape everything that had been a part of his life. Once arriving in Lugia Town, Lorenzo quickly became one of the more influential people, even being named Captain of the Guard by Lugia, and is in charge of protecting Lugia. Once the tension between the two families began to escalate, Lorenzo pushed himself right into the action, ready to launch his own plan.

Skills: Lorenzo is quite a good fighter, and is quite charismatic when he is dealing with those he considers on his level.

Flaws: Lorenzo gets angered very easily, and will get very angry once angered. Lorenzo also tends to think that he is better than most people. Also suffers from megalomaina, as well as insanity.

Weapon: This Katana:

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Pokemon: Magmortar

Pokemon Name: Caesar

Pokemon Personality: Very much like Lorenzo, although Caesar is much more loyal and honest than Lorenzo.

Pokemon History: Same as Lorenzo

Pokemon Specialty: Caesar is a very skilled and tactical fighter, and that is about it.

Pokemon Flaws: Caesar is also very prone to snaps of anger, which will throw Caesar off balance.

Proof of Reading: The Director was proud of Ethan for defending the Kimono Girls.

Anything Else: Lorenzo is quite fond of spicy food, as is Caesar.

Will finish later, just laying ground work.

I do very so believe that my sign-up sheet has been completed to satisfaction. My sign-up is ready to be observed and graded by the Game Master, who will make the important decision whether or not my character, Lorenzo Caesar Andretti, is accepted as a part of this Roleplay or whether my sign-up is rejected.
 

Satan.EXE

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I do very so believe that my sign-up sheet has been completed to satisfaction. My sign-up is ready to be observed and graded by the Game Master, who will make the important decision whether or not my character, Lorenzo Caesar Andretti, is accepted as a part of this Roleplay or whether my sign-up is rejected.

You... Lack a history section entirely... And then your Pokemon History just matches it...

Otherwise it looks good.

So if you add History, your sign-up is accepted.
 

Lt. Col. Fantastic

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Full Name: Antonio Giovanni Fresh
Nicknames: Tony, Toni, Gian. 
Business Name: Mr. Fresh

Sex: Male
Age: 18
Family: Divine Water
Career: Bounty Hunter

Appearance: Tall, skinny, and not very muscular, Toni relies on skill rather than strength to win his battles. He has brilliant blue eyes, and blond hair. He is the oddball of the family, looking like neither his mother or father, as his brothers do. He always dresses sharp, in tuxedos or suits, indicating that business is well. He has no piercings or tattoos, but a scar on his shoulder and chest from a knife wound, that wound over his breast. 

Personality: Toni is very comical on the outside. He doesn't speak unless making witty comments, or when asked a direct question. Underneath his silliness is a serious and calculating nature though, he wants people to think he doesn't understand and uses that to his advantage.

History: Born into the Divine Water family exactly 18 years before this story begins, Toni has a lot to prove as a man, and as a family memeber. His father, Antonio Sr, was jealous of his uncle for being linked to a legendary pokemon. His own link finds this jealousy insulting, and the two don't get along as much as other links. Toni was always sort of an ousider, along with his brothers. He never played with the other kids, and his family lived on an island by themselves, which was inhabited by many ghost pokemon. Toni's father had a friend on the island as well, a middle aged, plain sort of man who lived off the land. He taught the boys the Kanto Karate Style, and each of them became quite skilled. But, his oldest brother died when Toni was 12, and his twin moved to the Orange Islands not too long ago, just after their father's death. Toni never liked his father, but he didn't hate him. The middle aged man is still their, but strangely shows no sympathy for Antonio's death. With only his mother left, he decides it is time to finally join the rest of his family, to protect them. He turns to bounty hunting to make money, and each time he takes a target he feels a part of his humanity dissapear. He is becoming more and more like the ghosts he calls his losest friends.

Skills: Very, very good at fighting. Learned the kanto karate style while he grew up, with mastery of hand to hand fighting. 
Flaws: Does not find trust easily, and can be paranoid. He is not strong by any means, so a stronger, even less skilled opponent could easily take him. He doesn't take orders well, especially from anybody he knows. He has a scar from an old knife wound, and his right arm freezes up when lifting heavy things.

Weapons: A calvary sword (stole it from the middle aged man). Also has a short katana, shurikan, knives, and a deep mastery of the Kanto martial arts. However, he usually only carries a knife and calvary sword. He keeps his "ninja" weapons hidden in his house. His sword may be flashy, but it is not very practical, or particularly useful for that matter.

Pokemon: Haunter
Pokemon Name: Valentino, or just Tino

Pokemon Personality: Tino is very goofy. Matching Toni well, he appears at inapropriate times and makes noises during intense or romantic times. Some say he has no heart, and they'd be right, physically and theoretically. He is a cynical being, making jokes about death and finding funerals "booooooring". The one person he cares about is Toni, and he'd die (theoretically) for him. He is always with Toni, visible or not. If you feel a sudden chill, Tino just "walked" through you.

Pokemon History: Tino was once a gastly, in fact, he only recently evolved. He has always been there for Toni, and gets along well with most pokemon and humans. However, many of Toni's elderly neighbors find Tino annoying. He doesn't know about any of Toni's family, as he and Toni were very young when they left.

Pokemon Specialty: Confusion, curse, and turning foes against each other. In a direct fight, Tino has a variety of psychic and ghost attacks, but usually goes for status effects.

Pokemon Flaws: Tino does not possess a lot of bulk, and he cannot take hits for long. But he also doesn't attack directly, so watch out.

Proof of Reading: Ethan fights a team rocket grunt. And the old guy calls him (the grunt) a gangster.

Anything Else: Toni has a very strong connection with ghost pokemon, perhaps due to the amount of death he has seen.
 
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Satan.EXE

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Erm... A few things you should fix.

  • Martial Arts originated in Eastern Asia, not Japan. You would more likely know ancient forms of Karate.
  • Your character needs to be a bit more flawed than that. While I'm always into the "Alternative Fighting" styles, you didn't make your character quite negative to make up for it. Paranoia can be a good thing, as well as distrust of many people, your flaw secton in general makes your character seem overpowered or slightly perfected.
  • revolvers... Do not exist here. Weapons are limited to basic swinging, slashing, smashing, cutting, impaling, type weapons, as well as certain forms of magic. You seem to have a lot of weapons listed also. Might want to tone it down to just a few.
  • Your Pokemon... Should have a name since birth. They aren't really named randomly at a later date.
  • ... Saloons?? I get the impression that you think this is a Western kind of story. If so, you are mistaken. This is ancient Japan, in the Pokemon World.

All in all, you might want to completely redo this sign-up, because it seems like you've got the whole idea way off.
 

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Niichan? Is it okay that my character knows ninjutsu then? :I

| Full Name: | Hikari Natsumi Dendetsu

| Nicknames: | Hinami-chan

| Sex: | Female

| Age: | 17

Family: | Sacred Fire

| Career: | Hikari is an ninja and helps out anyway she can, doesn't matter what it is, she will help with anything.

| Appearance: |
Spoiler:


| Personality: | Hikari is a kind hearted and caring young women with a passion for singing. She really likes to do this and exclaims that it releases her from the stress she sometimes have, or that it calms her down whenever she is upset, she has a really beautiful voice but doesn't sing in front of people. Hikari can be a little cold hearted too, but only against enemies, it sometimes thicks her off. She and Hinata-miu are often find in the forest, mostly Hikari is leaning against Hinata when she's sleeping on the ground. Hikari is very polite towards her elders, she sometimes must act like a princess because her mother told her so. She somehow shows the personality of an Entei, though, don't be tricked, Hikari can be very hyper, happy-go-lucky-like and funny sometimes. What is unexpected is that Hikari can also be very shy.

| History: | Hikari was very close wih her two years older brother since young age, it's not known why they are so close though. Ever since Hikari could walk and talk she pulled pranks on her beloved older brother, mostly she jumped out of trees and landed right on him. When she got older she stopped pulling pranks on him though and got more serious. Now she asks her brother for advice and such.

When the tower she and her brother and sister were staying in burned down to the ground, they died. After being brought back to life Hikari was quite scared for other people and was mostly found around her brother in hope he would protect her. A year after the event she turned back to her old selve and made new friends who she played with. After turning 14 Hikari became more serious and stopped pulling pranks on her brother, she still likes to do it sometimes though. Hikari was already good at ninjutsu since that she trained at age of 8, but she became better at age of 14.

| Skills: | Hikari is very good in ninjutsu and also can sword fight. She can sing very well and likes to draw.

| Flaws: | Even though Hikari is very good at Ninjutsu, her actions sometimes fail which makes her hit the ground. She's also not very good at cooking (she could learn it but it upsets her when she does something wrong).

| Weapon: | Katana
Spoiler:

and she knows ninjutsu.


| Pokemon: | Entei

| Pokemon Name: | Hinata-Miu (Mi-ew)(Hikaru usually calls her Hinata)

| Pokemon Personality: | Hinata is a very happy and caring Entei, she likes it to be around Hikari and when Hikari leans against her when she's napping. Hinata-miu is her actual name and she prefers have people to call her like this, but Hikari finds Hinata shorter so only Hikari is allowed to call her that. Hinata is protective towards Hikari, because she knows if Hikari dies, she will too, but the main reason is because Hikari is her best friend.

| Pokemon History: | Hinata-miu was always found around Hikari ever since she was a little girl, when the Lugia clan and the Ho-oh clan departed Hinata made sure for Hikari's safety by staying with her even at night, thanks to this she never really got the chance to make friends, so her only friend is Hikari and the linked pokemon of Hikari's friends.

| Pokemon Specialty: | Hinata-miu is a very good fighter and has alot stamina.

| Pokemon Flaws: | She can have a short temper sometimes and she sleeps alot.

| Proof of Reading: |
Spoiler:


| Anything Else: | Hikari is fast embaressed in situations such as love.
 
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Lt. Col. Fantastic

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Erm... A few things you should fix.

  • Martial Arts originated in Eastern Asia, not Japan. You would more likely know ancient forms of Karate.
  • Your character needs to be a bit more flawed than that. While I'm always into the "Alternative Fighting" styles, you didn't make your character quite negative to make up for it. Paranoia can be a good thing, as well as diystrust of many people, your flaw secton in general makes your character seem overpowered or slightly perfected.
  • revolvers... Do not exist here. Weapons are limited to basic swinging, slashing, smashing, cutting, impaling, type weapons, as well as certain forms of magic. You seem to have a lot of weapons listed also. Might want to tone it down to just a few.
  • Your Pokemon... Should have a name since birth. They aren't really named randomly at a later date.
  • ... Saloons?? I get the impression that you think this is a Western kind of story. If so, you are mistaken. This is ancient Japan, in the Pokemon World.

All in all, you might want to completely redo this sign-up, because it seems like you've got the whole idea way off.

Dang, I thought you'd say that. Alright I'll fix it. I tried to combine two things together and meh.....didn't really make all that sense.
 

Satan.EXE

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PinkSapphire,

All you need is to add some writing to your appearance and you're in.
 

Lt. Col. Fantastic

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Full Name: Antonio Giovanni Fresh
Nicknames: Tony, Toni, Gian. 
Business Name: Mr. Fresh

Sex: Male
Age: 18
Family: Divine Water
Career: Bounty Hunter

Appearance: Tall, skinny, and not very muscular, Toni relies on skill rather than strength to win his battles. He has brilliant blue eyes, and blond hair. He is the oddball of the family, looking like neither his mother or father, as his brothers do. He always dresses sharp, in tuxedos or suits, indicating that business is well. He has no piercings or tattoos, but a scar on his shoulder and chest from a knife wound, that wound over his breast. 

Personality: Toni is very comical on the outside. He doesn't speak unless making witty comments, or when asked a direct question. Underneath his silliness is a serious and calculating nature though, he wants people to think he doesn't understand and uses that to his advantage.

History: Born into the Divine Water family exactly 18 years before this story begins, Toni has a lot to prove as a man, and as a family memeber. His father, Antonio Sr, was jealous of his uncle for being linked to a legendary pokemon. His own link finds this jealousy insulting, and the two don't get along as much as other links. Toni was always sort of an ousider, along with his brothers. He never played with the other kids, and his family lived on an island by themselves, which was inhabited by many ghost pokemon. Toni's father had a friend on the island as well, a middle aged, plain sort of man who lived off the land. He taught the boys the Kanto Karate Style, and each of them became quite skilled. But, his oldest brother died when Toni was 12, and his twin moved to the Orange Islands not too long ago, just after their father's death. Toni never liked his father, but he didn't hate him. The middle aged man is still their, but strangely shows no sympathy for Antonio's death. With only his mother left, he decides it is time to finally join the rest of his family, to protect them. He turns to bounty hunting to make money, and each time he takes a target he feels a part of his humanity dissapear. He is becoming more and more like the ghosts he calls his losest friends.

Skills: Very, very good at fighting. Learned the kanto karate style while he grew up, with mastery of hand to hand fighting. 
Flaws: Does not find trust easily, and can be paranoid. He is not strong by any means, so a stronger, even less skilled opponent could easily take him. He doesn't take orders well, especially from anybody he knows. He has a scar from an old knife wound, and his right arm freezes up when lifting heavy things.

Weapons: A calvary sword (stole it from the middle aged man). Also has a short katana, shurikan, knives, and a deep mastery of the Kanto martial arts. However, he usually only carries a knife and calvary sword. He keeps his "ninja" weapons hidden in his house. His sword may be flashy, but it is not very practical, or particularly useful for that matter.

Pokemon: Haunter
Pokemon Name: Valentino, or just Tino

Pokemon Personality: Tino is very goofy. Matching Toni well, he appears at inapropriate times and makes noises during intense or romantic times. Some say he has no heart, and they'd be right, physically and theoretically. He is a cynical being, making jokes about death and finding funerals "booooooring". The one person he cares about is Toni, and he'd die (theoretically) for him. He is always with Toni, visible or not. If you feel a sudden chill, Tino just "walked" through you.

Pokemon History: Tino was once a gastly, in fact, he only recently evolved. He has always been there for Toni, and gets along well with most pokemon and humans. However, many of Toni's elderly neighbors find Tino annoying. He doesn't know about any of Toni's family, as he and Toni were very young when they left.

Pokemon Specialty: Confusion, curse, and turning foes against each other. In a direct fight, Tino has a variety of psychic and ghost attacks, but usually goes for status effects.

Pokemon Flaws: Tino does not possess a lot of bulk, and he cannot take hits for long. But he also doesn't attack directly, so watch out.

Proof of Reading: Ethan fights a team rocket grunt. And the old guy calls him (the grunt) a gangster.

Anything Else: Toni has a very strong connection with ghost pokemon, perhaps due to the amount of death he has seen.

Edited my Sign Up. If anything else needs to be changed, I'll fix that too.

And I don't know a lot about traditional Japanese culture, is there a website I can get a crash course on the subject? (other than wikipedia. I hate wikipedia and I'm boycotting)
 

Satan.EXE

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A few more things.

Legendary Uncle? Why exactly is this in here?

Tuxedos and Suits? Not in this era.

There's also no money or currency in this world (which I think I told you over PM before).




Hm... A lot of this still seems to be the same, you know?
 

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(Masashi is Mick Fizz's character)

| Full Name: | Hikari Natsumi Dendetsu

| Nicknames: | Hinami-chan

| Sex: | Female

| Age: | 17

Family: | Sacred Fire

| Career: | Hikari is an ninja and helps out anyway she can, doesn't matter what it is, she will help with anything. Mostly Hikari treats injured people though.

| Appearance: |
Spoiler:


Hikari has straight dark hair despite that her name is Hikari which means "light". Hikari has aqua blue eyes that perfectly fit her dark hair color and her personality, it shows her sweet, kind and shy side. She wears a tail in her hair with something that looks like a Shuriken on the top of the tail, attached with a red ribbon.

Hikari wears a shinobi outfit that still shows her feminine thanks to the colors, white, gold, red and a little green on the shoulders. Hikari is very skinny and has a asia tinted skin, she's not exactly tinted, but she's not pale either. She wears her katana on her left side, though it doesn't matter with which hand she takes out her katana cuz she both left and right handed.

Her katana has a aqua blue handheld with a dragon pattern on the end of the handheld and by the begin. The edge of the case of the katana shows a dragon too.

| Personality: | Hikari is a kind hearted and caring young women with a passion for singing. She really likes to do this and exclaims that it releases her from the stress she sometimes have, or that it calms her down whenever she is upset, she has a really beautiful voice but doesn't sing in front of people. Hikari can be a little cold hearted too, but only against enemies, it sometimes thicks her off. She and Hinata-miu are often find in the forest, mostly Hikari is leaning against Hinata when she's sleeping on the ground. Hikari is very polite towards her elders, she sometimes must act like a princess because her mother told her so. She somehow shows the personality of an Entei, though, don't be tricked, Hikari can be very hyper, happy-go-lucky-like and funny sometimes. What is unexpected is that Hikari can also be very shy.

| History: | Hikari was very close with her two years older brother, Masashi, since young age. It's not known why they are so close though. Ever since Hikari could walk and talk she pulled pranks on her beloved older brother, mostly she jumped out of trees and landed right on him. When she got older she stopped pulling pranks on him though and got more serious. Now she asks her brother for advice and such.

When the tower she and her brother and sister were staying in burned down to the ground, they died. After being brought back to life Hikari was quite scared for other people and was mostly found around her brother in hope he would protect her. A year after the event she turned back to her old selve and made new friends who she played with. After turning 14 Hikari became more serious and stopped pulling pranks on her brother, she still likes to do it sometimes though. Hikari was already good at ninjutsu since that she trained at age of 8, but she became better at age of 14.

| Skills: | Hikari is very good in ninjutsu and also can sword fight. She can sing very well and likes to draw.

| Flaws: | Even though Hikari is very good at Ninjutsu, her actions sometimes fail which makes her hit the ground. She's also not very good at cooking (she could learn it but it upsets her when she does something wrong).

| Weapon: | Katana
Spoiler:

and she knows ninjutsu.


| Pokemon: | Entei

| Pokemon Name: | Hinata-Miu (Mi-ew)(Hikaru usually calls her Hinata)

| Pokemon Personality: | Hinata is a very happy and caring Entei, she likes it to be around Hikari and when Hikari leans against her when she's napping. Hinata-miu is her actual name and she prefers have people to call her like this, but Hikari finds Hinata shorter so only Hikari is allowed to call her that. Hinata is protective towards Hikari, because she knows if Hikari dies, she will too, but the main reason is because Hikari is her best friend.

| Pokemon History: | Hinata-miu was always found around Hikari ever since she was a little girl, when the Lugia clan and the Ho-oh clan departed Hinata made sure for Hikari's safety by staying with her even at night, thanks to this she never really got the chance to make friends, so her only friend is Hikari and the linked pokemon of Hikari's friends.

| Pokemon Specialty: | Hinata-miu is a very good fighter and has alot stamina.

| Pokemon Flaws: | She can have a short temper sometimes and she sleeps alot.

| Proof of Reading: |
Spoiler:


| Anything Else: | Hikari is fast embaressed in situations such as love.
 
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Lt. Col. Fantastic

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Yeah, I think I'll just scrap this character. I'll do some research about Japan, and things.

And the uncle was Lugia's Link...I should have put that.
 

Dawn

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I apologize, but it seems I'm reserved and I simply cannot join another roleplay at this time without serious consequences.
 

-Grayscale-

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Spoiler:

Finished. Sorry it took such a long time.
 
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I'm sorry to say that my SU will be more delayed. Teachers at my school have decided to go on a test frenzy and I have little spare time because of that. I got a draft saved in my laptop, but it ain't gonna cut it.
 

Satan.EXE

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Spoiler:
Accepted.

Yeah, I think I'll just scrap this character. I'll do some research about Japan, and things.

And the uncle was Lugia's Link...I should have put that.
You... Probably shouldn't claim any relation to them or other legendaries unless you've completely gone over it with me. I don't entirely agree with anyone else having relations to the leaders other than their children.

I apologize, but it seems I'm reserved and I simply cannot join another roleplay at this time without serious consequences.
Your spot is now open for someone new.

Finished. Sorry it took such a long time.
Wonderful. Accepted.

I'm sorry to say that my SU will be more delayed. Teachers at my school have decided to go on a test frenzy and I have little spare time because of that. I got a draft saved in my laptop, but it ain't gonna cut it.
As long as it's up on here when you're done, I've got no problems.

NOTICE

The Zapdos Spot is now open for someone to take. BE WARNED, THIS SPOT IS VERY IMPORTANT! If you are planning to take this spot, you must be devoted to it, so you won't simply abandon the RP and leave the character lost.

Also:

I created my own character Tsurara Densetsu, along with Articuno. Does anyone think I should make him a sign-up sheet so that you may all see, or should I just leave it a surprise for everyone to find out later?


FINALLY:

For those of you who stuck a sign-up, and have yet to make your sign up or even post since then, your reservations will disappear within the next three days or so. If you're actually working on a sign-up, let me know.

Spots are on a first-come, first-serve basis. However, if the RP starts, any open spots will still be available; you'll just be behind everyone else who's already started.

Thanks for your time in reading this,
~Akio

 
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Lt. Col. Fantastic

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Okay I think I've finished. Here it is

Spoiler:


Oh...that Zapdos spot....must...resist...
 
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Sapphire Rose

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Oniichan, can i let SD make a SU over yahoo (he does that at school, his only chance) so that i can post it for him here? He still can't come on PC, and this till next week probely.
 

pokeman10000

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Secret!!! You must keep your character a secret, although we will probably find out about you character in your first post...uhh... Yeah, just make it a secret!
 

NightOfRemorse

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Full Name: Adeline Murray
Nicknames: Addie
Sex: Female
Age: 20

Family: Sacred Fire
Career: Medicine/Potion Maker

Appearance: Addie is very lean, appearing to completely lack any evidence of muscle. She is of about average height, standing at 5'4. Her skin is pale and doesn't tan very easily, just temporarily turning an unusually bright red when in the hot sun. Another side effect to sun exposure is that Addie will develop faint brown freckles running along the bridge of her nose and beneath both her pale hazel eyes. These freckles come and go, however, as hiding away indoors for a few weeks will get rid of them. Addie has a dimple on her left cheek when she smiles, and she's always wondered what the heck happened to the other one. Her wavy blond (nearly white) hair is very long, just reaching the arch of her back. She never styles it in any way, just leaves it down. Addie wears a plain black dress that buttons up on the front. The collar as well as the ends of the sleeves have a ruffled appearance. The sleeves are long and end a little bit before the wrists. The dress also has a small belt around the waistline.
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Personality: Addie is laid-back and indifferent to most things. Whenever dealing with difficult situations, she isn't one to freak out and worry about what should be done. It's obvious, of course. When in doubt, just get your Pokémon to kill it. Addie hates having to participate in physical fights herself and will only do so if it is absolutely necessary, or rather, when she deems it necessary. The reason for that is she isn't so great at fighting, and she's quite lazy as well. However, her excuse is always, "I can't fight you, I'll get all gross…" in the calmest voice possible.

If, for some reason, Calypso can't fight for Addie, Addie does have a back up plan. She has some telekinetic power that allows her to lift anything below forty pounds. She makes use of this power by lifting up her dagger or other objects behind an enemy and throwing it hard against their head in an attempt to knock them out or kill them. However, her eyes will glow a bright blue when she uses this power so anyone familiar with her wouldn't be caught off guard. Addie always wants to avoid having to make quick, rapid movement, not only because she is lazy, but she has exercise-induced asthma as well. Addie frequently tries to do things "the easy way"; shortcuts are her best friends. She has a tendency to act very sarcastic with people whose personality clashes with her own; people who seem to have too much fun with everything they do, and people who get way too angry over nothing. Addie has a strong dislike for most Pokémon (with the exception of Calypso), but she doesn't express that opinion due to the possibility of execution or banishment.

Addie and Calypso are very close and will do anything for each other. They rarely have an argument with each other because they have a tight bond and feel and think nearly the same way. Calypso often collects berries, plants, and other obscure ingredients so Addie can brew potions and medicines. Addie is very skilled at making them, but to her annoyance, people love to tease her by calling her a "witch" claiming she looks and acts like one, with the bonus of making potions.


History: Addie was born to her two parents as the middle child, in between an older sister and a younger brother. Her life was mostly carefree and she spent her time playing with her siblings inside the house. Addie was never allowed to go outside and run around because she frequently got asthma attacks and her parents wanted to remain cautious. While her siblings ran around and played tag outside, Addie's mom taught her how to make medicines and potions. Since Addie was inside so often, she became very skilled in making potions. Her father was almost always working elsewhere, so he rarely showed his face at the house.

Even though Calypso wanted to go outside and play with Addie's siblings and their Pokémon links, she stayed inside to keep Addie company. The two constantly experimented different mixes of certain ingredients and kept track of what the result was. They loved finding out what happened when their creations were consumed. As long as Addie promised she wouldn't run, she was allowed to go outside with Calypso to train her in battle. Addie hated not getting to move around much, but as years when on, she became used to it and is now quite lazy.

Skills: Making potions/brews/medicines, telekinesis, remaining calm
Flaws: terrible fighter, lazy, tries to do everything in the easiest way possible, is sarcastic, can't run or fight very well due to asthma, eyes glow when using telekinesis so it's easy to know what she's doing
Weapon: Addie has the power of telekinesis, though it is not very strong and she can't lift anything heavier than forty pounds. She carries around a medium sized dagger and frequently bounces it around in the air with her telekinesis when she's bored.

Pokemon: Absol
Pokemon Name: Calypso
Pokemon Personality: Calypso can be just as lazy as Addie, the only difference is that she is physically able to fight, and so she does. Calypso only fights when Addie tells her she may, or when the situation obviously calls for it. She is also very calm and laid back, for the most part.
Pokemon History: (Same as Addie)
Pokemon Specialty: Has very high attack, can remain levelheaded
Pokemon Flaws: Can't take many hits, is almost as careless as Addie is

Proof of Reading: *proves it* That guy smokes and has a wheezy voice! Smoking is bad for the environment, sir.

Anything Else: When Addie does happen to get nervous or tense, she cracks the joints in her fingers to try and distract herself.

((I'm sorry, I took forever -___- if I need to change anything, let me know. I have a feeling I must have messed up somewhere, hahaha.))
 
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