Love:3

Love is a word that I don't believe
Coz I think even without it I'll find relief
But this all changed since the day you came
You gave me love I'll never feel again.

You made it possible for me to believe in love
You did give me love as pure as a white dove
My life has never been the same
All have changed since the day you came.

You gave me hope and courage to face my days
So for these I wont ever give you rainy days.
I never felt this happiness all my life
So I thank you for entering my life

And now that I've already found you
I'll never want to lose and hurt you
I want to thank you for giving me love
And I want you to know you're everything I have.


So do you liked it?

well pretty good poetry=]

I think its quite good~
keep it up ^^

well all I can say is it's quite good.
I like it though so keep it up.

I like it
good job.

~*Ecto*

hmm...it's quite good and touching:3
keepup the good work!!!

it pretty good good job^_^

I liked it good work on that^^

Im not a huge fan of poetry but it seemed to be quite good :)

OMG! THat would make a great song! I Love it!

wow! it's brilliant! i like it! ^-^

I really liked it, but you could try to find more different rhyme patterns...I am not a friend of aabb.
there is nothing better than a love poem :3

iHeather said:

Wow that was really good. I almost shead a tear reading your poem. Keep up the great work! ;)

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Really? wow,..thanks guys =]