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Check to see if your roleplay has been accepted! v.2

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Dements' Pokémon Crisis is accepted!

TheSiranna's Kingdom Wars: Fight of Shadows is declined.
The first thing I noticed is that you lack a rating. However, reading through your plot, there are a lot of loose ends. What were the evil wizards you mentioned looking for? Why did the kingdoms go to war? A lot more explanation's needed; right now it's a fair case of "this happened and then this happened and then..." which makes for a hard-to-follow storyline.
 
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Luxia's Any rooms in the chat for rp? was declined. Not an RP thread, just a simple question. No, we don't have roleplaying chatrooms.

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers's ✜ CHECKMATE : redux (IC) and OOC was accepted!

AppleMan's Mysterious Thread was declined. Lacks any real plot, lacks a rating, no rules, doesn't even contain more than 50 words. Flesh it out with these things and try again!
 
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TheSiranna's Justified is declined.
You've got a potential plot right there, but you really need to explain just what Xe is. Not in specificity, but the history behind it. You make it seem like an old wives tale, so is that what it is? How known of a story would it be among characters? And why is it destroying the land? And who is this person that corrupted it? Is it common knowledge among the players? And just what exactly is it? An item? An imaginary power? You really have to let the players know what they are getting into in this roleplay.

TurtleKing's The Elite Army is accepted!

TurtleKing's Digimon Genesis is accepted!

ORegan's PokeSentai is accepted!
 
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PinkSapphire's Sword Art Online: Sanctuary is accepted!
I will need you to put either a black CSS background or change the colour of the text to automatic because it is unreadable for those with white background themes.

Ray Maverick's IC is accepted!

Crimson0191's Pokémon - The league stands strong is declined.
You have no rules section and no rating. Other than that, it's great!!

Greiger's Adlania : The Land of Change is accepted!
 
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Crimson0191's OOC is accepted!
Also, if you need to ask a question, as opposed to posting a new thread, why don't you just PM or VM me? :)

Greiger's IC is accepted!

Synthet's IC is accepted!
 
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YellowGardevoir's Fire Emblem: Reawakening is accepted!

Xilfer123's Pokémon Oblivion: Reality Collapsing is accepted!

SwiftSign's IC is accepted!

darkpokeball's PMD: Forbidden Ruins is declined.
You really need to describe what happened to these four, washed up Pokémon. Typically, PMD games are about humans who have turned into Pokémon. Is that the same instance here? Also, do try to describe your 'apocalypse' more.
 
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Fuyu's TAMER: STREAM is accepted!

YellowGardevoir IC is accepted!

Icefyr1928's Another Day in Equestria is declined.
You have nothing detailing on what the characters are doing now, only a back story. Also, please change your font colour so it is readable on all styles (change your background on the CSS to a dark colour perhaps?)

jov0006's Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Descent into Darkness is accepted.

mistermewtwo's The last pokemon league is declined.
All roleplays need to include a rating and a sign up sheet. Also, your plot has no motive or real indicator on why a character would join this tournament. Give the bad guy a motive on why he would do this and say why the characters would join (not just any joe blow would join this kind of thing; it would need to be elitists). Really go into depth with the storyline!
 
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IceFyr1928's Another Day in Equestria is declined.
It's now a whole lot more readable! Thanks! You 'current storyline' though like I spoke of last time still is lacking. It really doesn't give players direction or purpose. Go into a little more depth! Make it a little more exciting!

IceFyr1928's Pokemon: The Walking Dead is declined.
I noticed you wrote it was a revival, but your thread history doesn't say you ever posted one before. Are you reviving from someone else's idea? Because there is a rule stating that if reviving someone else's plot, you first must get permission, and if the person has been inactive for other a month and you cannot get permission, you can use the original concept but the plot must be different.

mistermewtwo's The last pokemon league is declined.
Your plot is fine, you just need to fix up your spelling, grammar and punctuation. All of those ellipses could easily be replaced by commas and full stops, you don't capitalise you starting of sentences, names of people or places, open with quotation marks... there is a lot you could fix.

TurkishDelight's Pokémon: Johto Reboot and its OOC is accepted!

jov0006's IC is accepted!

Jegretis' Heart of Soul is accepted!

Fuyu's IC is accepted!

TehFisharmahn's The Forgotten Smell of Freedom is declined.
Your plot is okay, you're just lacking a sign-up template, a rules section and a rating. Though, I would suggest some spacing between paragraphs, so it's easier to read. :)

Vexilum's Sinnoh's Mew is declined.
It's all swell! You just need a rating! You can PM or VM it to me if you like, or just submit again.
 
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EliteBeat's [DE] CODING and its OOC is accepted!

TwilightSparkleThePokemonTrainer's Canterlot Falling is declined.
Here, we do roleplays a little differently. If you read the rules, roleplays to be accepted needs a acceptable plot with proper direction and motivation, a rules, a rating and a sign up sheet to be accepted. If you still wish to post an RP, make sure you keep this in mind when you resubmit.

gimmiepie's Midnight: A Darker than Black RP is accepted!

TehFisharmahn's The Forgotten Taste of Freedom is accepted!

IceFyr1928's Pokemon: The Walking Dead is accepted!

Tokio's Pokémon Reborn: Synchronize is accepted!
 
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Retro Bug's IC thread is accepted!

darkpokemaster666's Nightmares is declined.
Your overall concept is ok, you just need to fill in some gaps in the history. You speak of a magical department, but what is that? Is this set in a modern day universe? Or an alternate one? I suspect some kind of magic appears, so has it always been obvious to human kind? Or been hidden? If you sow up the gap between this "magic" universe and ours, you should be ok!
 
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