Revelations Series - Kenta and the Hoenn League

nice start to a story

not many stories out there for these characters

Kenta and Marina are my favorite characters

putting them together with Junichi will make it an interesting story


can't wait to read more^^

are you gonna continue this story?

I hope to read more^^

pretty good for a short part

keep it up

Pls. continue it :D It's really nice

Very nice work!

I hope to read more^^

I like Kenta's comment on using a Great Ball "why waste your chances?"

very cool

YAY! I love your fics. I know how you might be busy... but Carry on!!!!!!!!! Puh-leez

I must say. This next part was very good! Its funny when Marina yelled at Junichi to come see the match. Typhlosion fought hard Very nice strategy on stopping the Faint Attack

Nice strategies! But I thought Flame Wheel is when Typholsion curls up and then he spins and attacks, oh well, everyone has their own version.

Keep it up!!! :D Hope to read more.

Yay! New Chapter! BTW are you a Questshipper or Backshipper? cuz it seems that ur a questshipper. WOOHOO!

You know Im the main Questshipper around here :) I have always said it was one of the cutest couples, but they are more perfect for each other by watching the special.
Very good part that time. Nice idea with the attraction. Lets get this badge Kenta!

Are you gonna continue this? Its getting good. I hope you do.


*sorry for the double post*

Awesome story! I've never seen the special. *Tear* But by the sounds of this fanfic and the way people talk about it, it makes me want to see it.

Another great part to the story! Cool! He has Tyranitar!
Keep up the awesome work :)

Great Fan Fic! I really like the character's personalitites. "It isn't your girlfriend!"

Now that part was very good! Hehe, Junichi telling her that. I bet she got pissed :laugh:
Kenta really showed Norman. Got his badge! Cant wait to read some more :)

Nice story Masato-kun.
I like the bit where the battle is so cool.

Wow! Another great chapter! I like the idea of using new Rockets.
I like how Kenta just ran off to go to the woods. He sure likes adventure.
This should get even more interesting when involving Latias and Latios.

Keep up the great work :)

Its getting even more interesting. Fighting off the back of a Skarmory. Very nice.
Cant wait to read more

More I need more writing...