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N-XIGE

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*Applaud*

This one deserves one that comes as expected as thunder is after a lightning.

This poem goes first degree...I just can't do without a comment, it even happens to have what I love best...Rhymes, not rapping rhymes but poetry rhymes...

Hope you don't mind my rating this poem...

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Thumbs up!

Btwn: I'm yet to ever give anyone a 10.
 

Glitter Stain

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*Applaud*

This one deserves one that comes as expected as thunder is after a lightning.

This poem goes first degree...I just can't do without a comment, it even happens to have what I love best...Rhymes, not rapping rhymes but poetry rhymes...

Hope you don't mind my rating this poem...

Spoiler:


Thumbs up!

Btwn: I'm yet to ever give anyone a 10.
Hm... well, I'm not going to complain about a 9/10. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. Is there anything I need to be sure to improve on?
 

N-XIGE

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For now I'll just say concept...but there's not really much to that...it's all good, and your rhymes sure are...

The only place I didn't like was

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:shocked:

 
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