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Check to see if your roleplay has been accepted! v.2

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Starfuzzy's Eeveelutions RP is declined!
Nowadays, roleplays here require a storyline, a rating, a sign up sheet. We don't have simple roleplays like that here anymore.

-DeepImpact-'s OOC is accepted!

milktankRancher's The God's Plaything is accepted!
 
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shinysweety's (and ShinyDiamond's) Animal DNA Project is accepted!
Haha this is totally not inspired by Tokyo Mew Mew, is it?

ShadyVXKuriboh5's Pokemon Gikinka Academy is declined.
This is obviously a copy and paste from the Gijinka Academy that died in September. All storylines must be your own, not copied from someone else.

milktankRancher's OOC is accepted!

Detonias'... thingy is declined.
As I said, you need more than that! You need sign up templates, you need a rules section, a rating, grammar and stuff.
 
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ShadyVXKuriboh5's Digimon: Digital Academy is declined.
The idea is on the right track, though you don't spend a lot of time explaining what this new 'evil force' is or what exactly is this special DNA or the other small stuff. Spend less time worrying about the subjects and more time worrying about the back story and storyline, ok?

Conjurer's The Fal Evets is accepted!

ladyshiro's Akabara Chronicles is declined.
Your storyline is simply not enough. Who is this Horned King and how did he rise to power? Bad guys just don't pop out of no where! Who's the Mage King? Why does the Horned King want to kill everyone? You need to go more in depth!

Tauros14's Pokemon: Darkness Arising is declined.
Again, storyline. Why and how did all those teams join up? What exactly did they do to deserve an apposing alliance? When writing these things, keep asking yourself the same questions! Who, what, when, where, why and how! Also, you don't have a rating.
 
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Tauros14's Pokemon: Darkness Arising and OOC/SU is accepted!
I would suggest you look over it though, as the coding has broken in many places and using the iOS app makes it seem not what it really is. Try opening it in Safari, logging in and looking at it properly.

dajman1996's Digimon System X3 (Phase 1) is declined.
It's very good so far, you're just lacking one thing; what do the characters have to do with the plot? You have to explain how your player's characters will be implemented into the roleplay and what role they actually play. If you fix that up, it's all good to go!

Conjurer's OOC thread is accepted!

MasterLink742's A War on Magic is accepted!
I closed Lost Memories since it was still ok to be revived by you. We can't have the same roleplay running at the same time, can we!

mzmingle's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon - Winter Wonders is declined.
It's lacking in storyline. How did this crobat get this power to call evil pokemon? Who did it call? How was this portal created? Please go into more detail!

PokemasterX's The Rise of the Olympians' Champions is declined.
Unfortunately, this is all too similar to Aura Rift's Percy Jackson roleplay. Unless you can think of an extremely original storyline, I'm gonna say no to this.

Slowprincess18's ... thing? is declined.
In these boards, all roleplays must be at a certain standard, including original storyline, ratings, rules sections, sign up templates and just have good grammar and punctuation. Your submitted roleplay pretty much has none of these. If you want to submit a roleplay in these boards, you'll need to read the rules and review other roleplays to get a good idea of what to do.

Stingray's First Contact is accepted!

Breezy.'s The Whirl Cup is accepted!
 
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SeekerOfDarkness' Legend of Zelda: Orchestra of Heroes is accepted!

miley810's Legendary Rebels 2: The Human's war is pending.
Just to make sure, you finished your last roleplay so I can close it and its OOC? I read the last few posts of the IC but I wasn't sure if it was finished for reals.
accepted!

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' *Foreigners is accepted!
 
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Supervegeta's IC thread is accepted!

Breezy.'s IC thread is accepted!

PokeGirlJade's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Legend and Song is accepted!

Blaziken15's A Life Time on the Run REVAMPED is accepted!

ShadowExcadrill Pokemon Warfare: The Brotherhood rises. is declined.
The storyline so far is fine, you really just haven't specified where this is set. In a new region? In a previous region that's been renamed since some kind of cataclysmic event? Specify, please!

miley810's I feel like a monster is declined.
The overall storyline is fine, you're missing background information though. What school do these people go to? How did this gas leak in? Who made this gas? How do they know they only have a year to live? Please go into more detail!
 
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shinysweety's IC thread is accepted!

mzmingle's Pokemon - Gym Leaders Adventure is declined.
The storyline is rather vague. No such thing as a 'The Best Trainer', yet they still had a Pokémon League? It doesn't make much sense at all. Who made the idea of the gym leader? Who organised everything? There's a meaning to everything! The idea of fighting for the position of gym leader is a good one, you just need a decent enough storyline to back it all up. Oh, and it might be good if you fixed up your grammar/punctuation.

Teawanee's Pokemon of pinwheel forest is declined.
You have no sign up sheet for one! That, and your storyline is... borderline acceptable. You need to add on it and grow more, like explaining how negatively it affects everyone, who organised the shindig, etc. Put more detail into it!

miley810's IC thread is accepted!

miley810's Team Rocket's Emerge is declined.
Oh my GOD! That is... haha, rather brutal for a PG14. You'll need to adjust that rating. And maybe make it a lot less morbid, or if you want to keep it that intense, have a reason why Team Rocket are so harsh with the children. But sheesh! You don't have to be so... whoa, yeah. Tone it back a little, remember there are kids younger than 10 who hang around here and roleplay (and join roleplays despite rating).
 
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TheFinalWatchman's OOC is declined.
Unfortunately, since it has been over two months since the last post of the OOC thread, you'll have to resubmit as a new roleplay or a revive. You cannot use the same players as last time without them signing up again. Y'know?

zapdos926's Age of Power is declined.
It's good so far, you just need to clarify a little what is waiting for them on the surface. Have the robots evolved? If there's a war, it means the robots are not peaceful or have a reason for the violence? Just go into this a little more.

{Swan}'s OOC is accepted!

RyanRoksXD's The Pokemon Hunger Games is declined.
It's really good! All you need it a rating! Just VM or PM it to me.

The Pokemon Hunger Games is accepted!
 
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miley810's http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=269214]Rocket's Emerge thread is accepted!

zapdos926's Age of Power is accepted!

TheFinalWatchman's Darkness Rises Again is accepted!

drunk ¬_¬'s Digimon: Breaking the Ultimate Limit! is declined.
All the information is good, you are just lacking any kind of storyline. You need to tell the players what they're gonna be up to in the Digital World. What you've got here is the equivalent of a Pokémon Roleplay that explains a region. I know you may have a storyline planned, but you need to write a bit of it down, kay?

Stingray's IC is accepted!

ChrisTom's Solum is declined.
It's really, really good! All I really need is your own rules section and you're set!

TurtleKing's The Elite Army is accepted!

SomariFeyWright's Paradox is declined.
Sure, you have the universe all set up, but you really need more of this storyline. A mysterious threat pulls them together? Gonna need a little more than that. You need to explain to players what they are getting themselves into.

Black Hawk's Rise of Reshiram is declined.
Um... you need more everything. Your SU template is barely acceptable, there's no rules section, you need a rating, you need more of a storyline than THAT. Explain everything about how Reshiram knows about Arceus' crazy happenings. Y'know? Needs more EVERYTHING.

Nakuzami's Bah, Humbug! Tournament of Snow is accepted!
Get Christmas-ing, everyone!!
 
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Kiyoshi the Polar Bear's THE ROARING TWENTIES and OOC is accepted!

juniebug910's Pokemon and the Brush Gods is accepted!

SeekerOfDarkness's IC thread is accepted!

SomariFeyWright's Paradox is accepted!

Zerin's The Legend of Zelda: A Link of Dimensions is accepted!

Ethan Gold's Pokemon Scarlet and Azure is declined.
Setting sounds cool, you'll just need a little more storyline. I don't just accept your basic "travel-da-world" ones anymore unless the world is described amazingly. So either go into a lot more detail or create more of a storyline than that, ok?

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' the pokémon BET is accepted!

ChrisTom's Solum is accepted!

The Final Watchman's IC thread is accepted!

PokeGirlJade's Survivors of Mieko Island! is accepted!

TurtleKing's IC thread is accepted!

Nakuzami's IC thread is accepted!
 
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Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' IC thread is accepted!

WarGreymon-X's Echo of Time is accepted!

Pokemonmaster_draco's ...thingy is declined.
Nowadays, all submitted roleplays require a proper storyline, sign up template, rules, rating and yeah, an actual storyline. Not just a few sentences.

miley810's IC thread is accepted!

mzmingle's OOC thread is accepted!

PokeGirlJade's IC thread is accepted!
 
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SomariFeyWright's The Dark Heroes is declined.
You need more of a storyline. Not just "you are a bad guy", you need to reflect on what kind of universe they are in, the setting, the time, etc.

miley810's X-men: Denied Souls is accepted!

Delcatty123's The PokePirates! is declined.
I... want to accept it, but it is lacking in storyline. You should really explain why Team Rocket have captured people and why flying types specifically. Really expand on the universe.

MrKyurem's Experimental is declined.
It's good! Just needs a rating.

TurtleKing's Digimon Heroes is accepted!

The warden's Pokémon: Demons in Paradise is declined.
It's good! Just needs a rating.

poopy777's World of The Vampires is accepted!

HunterZero's Pokémon: Unova Legends! is accepted!
 
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MrKyurem's Experimental is accepted!

Vato's Pokemon: A Roletastic Adventure is declined.
It has potential, but your wording is all weird and hard to understand. Plus, you really need to dwell a little deeper. Who exactly did it take and why is the player a survivor? Just ask yourself a few who, what, when, where, why, hows and go into more detail.

TurtleKing's OOC is accepted!

HunterZero's IC is accepted!

Raveness's mountaineers is declined.
First off, you're missing a rules and a rating. Though, the main thing you're missing is storyline. The concept seems interesting enough for a first time roleplay but you really need to go into more detail. Like I said to Vato, more who, what, when, where, why and hows. Ask yourself them about your storyline, go into more detail then give it another shot.
 
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Manipulation's Pokémon: Sinnoh Revolutions is accepted!

Yagerbomb's Blockade is accepted!

mzmingle's Gym Leader's Adventure is declined.
Better, but you need to elaborate a little more on storyline. Why did people stop battling, or did they never start? What compelled the Aurora League to begin or to make a Gym Leaders' school? Ask yourself a whole lot of whys and yeah, more explanations, please!

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' Arcanum and OOC is accepted!

§acred†Beo!'s Path to Light and Darkness: Sinnohs Swan Song is declined.
It's fine, you just need a sign up template!
 
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