echo; A KANTO JOURNEY (OOC)
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It looks fine! Except for two things. Pidgeotto will be at lvl 14 and you got a pretty obvious detail about dear lady professor Pine wrong. If you read through the SU description in the first post again, I'm sure you will notice it :) If you fix it, you will be accepted.
Excellent! I'll put your details up and I'm looking forward to the new first post ;)
BUT - you'll still have to change your SU to say Dewott instead of Ivysaur ;) Please. http://www.pokecommunity.com/showpost.php?p=7508638&postcount=38
Yes, Swablu is fine! :) It will be on lvl 14.
I only meant that I am curious as to how he ended up with the pokémon in the first place and it would be interesting to get to know that at some point ^^ But you are not required to write that in the SU, so it's fine as it is.
Oh, that's... a bit strange, I think. But alright, as long as you don't write about him doing anything with a pokémon, it's fine.
Hm, really? Not in that way, I think :3
That would work! But Pine is still the one sending you out on your journey, so maybe the other professor will have Topaz pretend to participate in Pine's study just to get a chance at a good pokémon and maybe spy on her work? :) Or something~
Great! Just start in Pewter and pretend that you've already written other chapters ^^
Yes, it says rather clearly in the SU template that your character has an appointed time with professor Pine in the POKÉMON CENTER of Viridian City, not some lab. :3
So, all in all, I can accept you if you:
- Change Tropius into Swablu
- Change Topaz' caretaker from Pine into someone else
- Change that lab into the Pokémon Center
Yeah, that is true (except for PresentPastFuture) and the reason I'm not telling them straight up is that I want to have players who can read and follow instructions in chapter posts ^^' Being hasty never helps.
@ gimmepie, I'll go reread it ^^
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I honestly wonder how it can be so difficult ^^; Both the second sentence in the intro text of the first post + the RP sample instruction tells you that she is a woman, and there is even a little sprite beside the text showing a female wearing a lab coat.
I guess I have to be even less vague in the future.
Anyways, you are accepted, gimmepie! :) Feel free to start posting. I'll likely post again after someone else has posted ^^
@ deathbymanga - Alright, you are accepted! And free to start posting in Pewter City on chapter 3. The info post for the chapter can be found through the first IC post, as you may have noticed.
Even though you still confused Pine with Root in some parts of the RP sample and you haven't edited your starter choice to say Servine instead of Snivy... but as long as you try to be more careful with details in your IC posts, I'm content. The best way is to read over a whole post when you have finished typing it, before you post it. That way you can usually catch any spelling errors or inconsistencies.
It wasn't due to your vagueness I got confused Red's. I'm pretty sure I read someone else who had Pine as a male character which made me wonder if I had missed something xD
There was absolutely nothing wrong with your instructions.
I'll start work on a post soon.
There was absolutely nothing wrong with your instructions.
I'll start work on a post soon.
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Haha ok sorry ^^
Yeah, I realize Pine is a quite overused professor name xD I chose between Palm and Pine and Cherry and whatnot treenames.
EDIT: Also, gimmepie, do you want Marshtomp to forget a move for Mud Shot? And do you want Heracross to forget a move for Aerial Ace?
Yeah, I realize Pine is a quite overused professor name xD I chose between Palm and Pine and Cherry and whatnot treenames.
EDIT: Also, gimmepie, do you want Marshtomp to forget a move for Mud Shot? And do you want Heracross to forget a move for Aerial Ace?
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@Red's - Well I meant an SU but yeah, I figure we are going run out of trees that can be names soon enough. Also, I'm glad you didn't choose Palm cause I wanted it xD
I have started on my post and should have it up soon enough.
Edit: Can I have the code for the banner and spacers?
I have started on my post and should have it up soon enough.
Edit: Can I have the code for the banner and spacers?
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Sure! What color hex code do you want? http://www.colorpicker.com/
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um, just a question, sorry if it is answered already, are we aloud to just choose whatever Pokemon we want to battle and then fight and capture them as we like? It just seems like that is what the rules say
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chapter x; PART X
Corvin White // area name here
Corvin White // area name here
YOUR POST TEXT GOES HERE
((just quote this post, gimmepie, and take away this part and edit what parts you want, like chapter name and what number of post it is in the chapter, and what the area is called and what pokémon you have and such. Just replace the http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/f/fa/Ballfull.png with the image url from an icon on this page http://sprites.pokecheck.org/
Also, make sure to not delete any of the [/cd] things or anything, and to keep the
around it all. Keeps it neat :3 ))
@ deathbymanga. Yes, pretty much. Look at the chapter descriptions to see if any special quests can/should be made in the area, and what pokémon are available. Then you are free to make any of those pokémon appear and capture it in any way you want.
@ deathbymanga. Yes, pretty much. Look at the chapter descriptions to see if any special quests can/should be made in the area, and what pokémon are available. Then you are free to make any of those pokémon appear and capture it in any way you want.
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Can I have one of those things as well? I'd like it in Lime? I can't tell what those numbers mean or where to translate the word to numbers
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Lime it is. I tried a few different shades and I liked the darker ones better. Unless you want it with black text instead and a lighter lime color? :)
YOUR POST TEXT GOES HERE
or
YOUR POST TEXT GOES HERE
To use it, just quote my post and take away the
chapter x; PART X
Topaz // area name here
Topaz // area name here
YOUR POST TEXT GOES HERE
or
chapter x; PART X
Topaz // area name here
Topaz // area name here
YOUR POST TEXT GOES HERE
To use it, just quote my post and take away the
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Ooh! Ooh! Could I have one too? I want mine to be BLACK!
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I'm guessing spots are full now :( I've just about nearly finished my coursework assignment and have a whole lot more free time. If a spot opens up lemme know RHCP (unless you can sneak me in...)
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Naww. It's coo. Could I have orange then? If not, vermilion orange?
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wait, why are we done? We have two free character slots and five free pokemon slots. So what is going on with them?