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Stallions

Kelsey

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OK, this is a poem I wrote right after I wrote "Trapped", so I was still pretty depressed. Which is why this poem may not be as enlightening as my other works. ^^;;

Stallions

The stallion is a symbol,
Of a spirit gone free.
Just seeing them run,
Fills one with glee.

With their manes of gold,
And their hooves of steel.
Just by the sight of them,
You'd know how I feel.

They run like the wind,
While flipping their tails.
They move just as swift,
As a ship's great white sails.

Yet most are now gone,
Tired and alone.
Still they hope every night,
To one day return home.

Now, I am really straining myself to explain what this poem means. But advice from Finglonger says that I shouldn't explain my poems and just keep you viewers guessing. This poem is very choppy and doesn't flow very well, but, meh, bite me. ^_~ Enjoy this crappy poem of mine! XD

~Kelsey
 

PikaPal

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What an awesome poem!!!!
I'm horse crazy, and that poem rocks!
I wrote a poem on stallions before, too.
 

Kelsey

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Thanks Pikapal!! I should've known the biggest horse-lover in teh forums would've liked it. ^.^

~Kelsey
 

darkblastoise89

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i'm not a horse-freak, but i like this poem. it's not crappy. i can see the depressing mood at the end. simple and short. it get's the message across without a lot of useless cliches, and that is a good thing ^ ^
 

Kelsey

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Fwee! *huggles Matt* thanks for rating it. Yeah, right after I wrote "Trapped" I wrote this one, in hopes of the thought of horses getting me out of my depression. XD

~Kelsey
 

Kelsey

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Yeah, I adore horses, just being near them makes me feel so calm. ^_^ Anyways, this was just a spur of the moment kind of poem. =3 Thanks for reading it! ^.^

~Kelsey
 

Kelsey

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Awwww, you're too kind, Koga. And I am sure your poems are every bit as good as anyone's. Everyone is a poet, some just haven't found that poetry may be one of their strengths yet. ^_~

~Kelsey
 
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Kelsey said:
Awwww, you're too kind, Koga. And I am sure your poems are every bit as good as anyone's. Everyone is a poet, some just haven't found that poetry may be one of their strengths yet. ^_~

~Kelsey
That's true.How wise of you to say that.
 

Kyosuke

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That poem did flow well it just seemed to rhyme alot. I'm not a poetry expert or anything, but if you ask me it was really good.
 

Kelsey

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Awwwws, thanks Espy! Horses just have a certain majesty about them that just draws me to them. Horse-lovers like myself will truly know this feeling. ^_^

~Kelsey
 
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