The Magic of Fazatopia

Hey im new at this and not very good so any way...
PLOT:A mystical Castle rose above the Deep sea and Mystical Creatures have been running around lately so whay you have to do is Create a Charecter and Get to work deafeating Dozens of Monsters.

Creatures:Abtrons: Giant Green Creatures that will come up from the ground and attack with no Reason.Recanods:Flying Creatures that look like vulteres Very Power full and Insted of Bird Poo... Bombs,Gernades ECT.Zawdrons:Very tiny but Very Explosive these creatures will only die from Water.

Chains:You will Have a Chained Braclet on your Wrist and Every time it glows go back to your hometown and you will get a new power.

Ok oif you want to be part of this fill out this (i will do mine on the form tht you have t copy)

Name:Zede
Age:13
Power Type:Ice
Looks:Long purple hair,Black Eyes,Green Skin,Very tall and very skinny,Ripped Jeans and White Under Shirt (Always Wears)
Hometown:Paredon
Other info:Very Power Ful

Yay! I'll join! ^^

Name:Angel
Age:13
Power Type: Fire
Looks: Long brown hair with red at the tips pulled back into a ponytail, bright blue eyes, always wears leather jacket with a red shirt underneath, leather gloves, denim pants, and a black bandana.
Hometown: Thear
Other info: She is dark and mysterious and usually keeps to herself. She likes to read and be alone, but she also likes being understood, and being with her friends.

Yaay when we get another Member we can start

okay great.

A friend of mine called Flower_Power_99 is gonna join when he gets on the puter.

Me likes!

Name:Sora
Age:14
Power Type:Evil things...like,Physcic
Looks:long purple hair,black tank top,black mini skirt with a chain,long black boots
Hometown:Levlias
Other info:is a very rude person, but is nice only to her friends,somewhat mysterious

Lets Start then

When Zede,SoraAnd Angle were at the Beach Right Before There eyes a Giant Castle rose above them Then a Magician Came and Explained To Them AnD Gave them Chains So They knew What They Had To Do

ic:Sora asked,"Are these chains for woppen butt?"

I squinted at the chain before putting it on my wrist. It felt slightley warm. But it was a total fashion don't. But instead of complaining I gave the magician a salute.

I turned to the others. "So, what now?"

Sora responded,"How should I know?"

We Should Wait Till We Get Powers And Hide
Ill Guard The Way While You guys hide I Can Take Em

"Hide from what?" I said.

That's when I heard something screech. I quickly look up and my heart pounded. Right above us was a giant black bird, with a real mean look in its eyes.

I screamed and ducked behind Zede.

"Whatdowedo? Whadtdowedo?!"

This Is Trouble Just Run As Fast As U Can Im A Good Fighter Run Run While U Can

ic:Sora ALSO saw the bird. She thought ni her head for a moment and then responded,"Cool!" (Because she's so rude,you know... )

I glared at Sora.

"You think this is cool? We'd better listen to Zede. C'mon!" I pulled at Sora's arm and ran off for some woods. Maybe we'd be safe there.

What Sora You Think Thats Cool,Suddenly The Bird Swoops Down And Flies OF With Me Sora, Angle Helpppp,Then My Braclet Starts Going And My Fists Got Icy So I Bunched The Bird And It Froe And I Fell Yelling Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ic:Angel pulled me to a forest and then responded,"What's the point in hiding?It's gonna find us sometime..."

"Stupid bird!" I said, kicking one of its talons. It screeched, but instead of dumping me like it did Zede it dug its sharp claws into my side, making me scream in pain.

ic:For this moment,I actually felt SORRY. I asked Angel,"Are you okay?"

Angle dont worry youll be outaa bpain in no time Soira just go to your home town and heal her it will be a faster way if you go to your hometown

Sora responded,"What?! But I'm not in pain! There's no point for ME to leave!"