Okay, what darkwiz said wasn't exactly appropriate, but this:
as i said its my first one i really cant help it
is not the right attitude! ;)
Now, I'm here to help you, as well as many other people are. And you
can help it: just listen to what we say, think it trough and try to modify your sprites a bit so that evetually, they're perfect!
First, the boy dressed in
red.
There's a lot of good things about this sprite. The colours, for example, are harmonic and realistic. Also the shadings are made with suitable colours and that's not always the case. The shadings are pretty well done and the outline is almost excellent. His left hand (the one that's on the right side) is a bit too thick on the shoulder, you should fix that and it'll look a lot better. Also, the cape looks a bit awkward, but that's nothing big. Try to make some more curves into it and I think it'll be fine, too.
The face, I have to say, is
excellent for a first scratch! Heck, I've done this for a lot already and I still can't do even acceptable faces. Thubs up on this one, mate. You could use multiple shades on the face, though, so that it'd look more natural. Again, nothing very big, but I can promise you the outcome will look better.
Then, the
fakemon.
That one has a lot of work to be done. For starters, it looks a lot like Scyther. originality for the win! Secondly, I don't think you've paid this enough time and effort. It looks like you rushed it: the shadings are a bit off, the upper scythe is too angular, its feet seem to be a bit snowman-ish and the face is a bit off, too. Judging by the first one, you
are a decent spriter, so I presume you have done this one in a hurry. Maybe you should revise it, think of another pose and add something to it. That way you could really have a better outcome. Balaczter kind of covered this already, so I'm not going to say a lot more.
Again, the colours are excellent: they are harmonic and realistic.
Keep practicing and one day you'll outsprite us all! ;)
