Birth of Legends (Rated PG-17)(OOC/SU thread)

Um, ok then. Few problems. I'm not sure if you forgot or you just haven't gotten to it, but you need to add a personality as well. Second, I said the Supernatural Tribe was reclusive. So, shy would the leader of them go out to save one lowly Espeon? He's got plenty of stronger warriors, so he really wouldn't need to bother himself to save one infant Espeon. And also, how the heck could a family of espeons live underwater? And you do know that espeons hatch as little Eevees, right? That hasn't been changed. Adress these, and finish up your personality. I won't say you're accepted or denied or pending until you're finished. Just letting you know.

60 posts (61 now) already? Wow, Nideous. o.O

I would totally join, but I'm in a lot of RPs already. xD Most of which, haven't even started yet, lol.

Well, Aquataris, as soon as you finish up, let me know. Do you have an idea how you want Xentea to act?

And Micheala, thanks for the compliment. And if you change your mind, I'll be here. XD

I edited it, for some reason I rewrite the History and Personality to be Romeo, just read it and you'll understand

Aquataris, your personality is still a tad bit lacking when you take out the line breaks. Add just a tad bit more, for example, how does he feel about Zeck and his schemeing? Which elder trained him, and how does he feel about that? For now, you are Pending.

I added more and stuff what you asked have a look I seem to begin to like this character... Oh every time I say I like the character I either get denied or barely missing a deny.

Zeck is the leader of the Supernatural Tribe. And Xentea seems to be a bit of a narcisist, if that's how you spell it. He seems to think everyone is trying to keep him and his love apart, when in reality they simply don't even know he exists. That's how it seems to be. Anyways, I digress, you are Accepted.

That's Exactly what I was aiming for Nidious! Well done! and Yay me!

Heh, that's fine. And so you know, my name is NidEous, not NidIous. Though most everyone calls me Nido, though I'm not sure why... Anyways, I'm going to wait until a few more people post to move on. XD

Done My first post! What do you think?

Guess who? :D I'd like to reserve a spot for your RP :D

Hm... A tad bit short for an introductory post, but it's fine.

And what's this? My stalker has shown up? XD Of course you are Reserved Megaman765.

Nideous said:

Heh, that's fine. And so you know, my name is NidEous, not NidIous. Though most everyone calls me Nido, though I'm not sure why... Anyways, I'm going to wait until a few more people post to move on. XD

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... Really? Really? ... Really? We both know why everyone calls you that, and that's because I started it. XP

Finally posted. :) Who should unknowingly find Geo? Should it be Zackla?

You already said that Shiny. And I was thinking of making Razor be the one. That should be interesting. :D

^^ Ok. It can be Razor. I'll look for who this Razor is on the first page.

Razor is my character. Though that decision has been removed from my hands. Ivysaur found you.

Posted. :D I feel proud of this post on the story!

Are there any spots left? I'm currently out of the house and can't really dedicate the time to working on an SU this second but I'd like to reserve a spot. ^~^

I'm also not sure what pokemon to pick, though I'm sure something will come to me later tonight. Ideas, though?

Sure. Like I said, I'm not too sure how many spots I'll have. Not too many more though... Anyways, PkMnTrainer Yellow is Reserved!