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Sephiroth Shadow [1/???] from Final Fantasy VII

Syousuke

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First Draft
SephirthFirstDraftShadow.jpg

Comments: I think it turned out okay. I haven't faked in a very long time. I havent revised FK's tutorial as well. Point out errors, I know there are plenty mistakes here and there. Be kind XD

Second Draft

Clean Draft[Clean Edit]

Final Edit
 

Blennix

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there are some slight errors in the card like the plus symbol should be down more
the hp should be moved over the psychic symbol should be inline with the e in resisitance and the card number looks odd make it 1/1 so far coz u don't have a set yet
 

QFred

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Yes, I think those (the mistakes) are true!

Also, the HP is very small and the + symbol is too huge!

I think I saw the name Masamune in Civilization III Conquests... Wasn't it a Japanese Damiyo??!!

Any way, great card, and not very bad mistakes!

Hope the second draft is better!
 

Syousuke

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Sephiroth2ndDraftShadow.jpg

Here is the 2nd draft.
Thank for the nice comments.
Masamune is Sephiroth's sword, yes, the longass sword.
The name of the card isn't supposed to be not-seenable but it is supposed to be silver so I cant do anything about it. =\
I've fixed the 40 damage error, and the + symbol has changed slightly.
I made the HP font bigger and moved it a bit to the left. I also moved the Resistance psychic symbol a bit to the right. Blennix, sorry but I dont know what 'e' is it.
Tell me if this is better tho.
Thanks..
 

Syousuke

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Oh my god i can't believe it.
Sorry ._.
A remake of the 2nd draft will be here soon >>
 
LishaKara

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Hooray! My bishie has his own card!! ^___^ Nice work. Looks sweeter than sweetness itself. Athough- are you going to color the picture?
 

Syousuke

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Lishakara: Recoloring huh? Good idea ;) Although im not really looking forward to it (im not good at computer art xD) I would give it a shot.
Thanks for your comments.
QFred: It shrunk? X_x I'll look into it.
Blennix: Tutorial? I have no time for tutorials. The reason why I post cards instead is not for the sole reason to show off. Its for people to tell me what errors I made, and what to do to fix the errors, I want don't want to know faking at the back of my hand by reading a tutorial, thats all i want you to know. There might be major errors, or just little errors, I dont appreciate people coming up to my cards and saying "Read a tutorial." Thanks. You might disagree with me or something, but I like my own kind of constructive criticism.
 

Gokey Shuckle

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Very nice card you have there. the name font looks cool!!! You have a nice way of using your resources. I do have a small tip. Change the line spacing in between each line of the effect text to one number lower than font size. 9/10 for that draft. Good work.
 

Blennix

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er look at the tutorial person, and don't get smart with me, if you look at the tutorial you can produce cards like King Shuckle
^ with the 50+<--- the plus symbol is what im about, it looks odd and sorry for my outburst it will not happen again
 
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