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[Idea] Pokemon D.N.A. Version

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Yagerbomb

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Pokemon D.N.A. Version
Created by Yagerbomb​

Hello, I am Yagerbomb. You may or may not have seen me around here. I have an Idea for a game, Pokemon D.N.A. Version. Please give constructive criticism and ways to make my game better.

Background:​

Spoiler:


You:

Spoiler:


ScreenShots:

Coming Soon!

Features:​

-167 Pokemon!
-New Vitos Region to explore!
-Starters from other games obtainable!
-Buy Houses and Property!
-All New Champions League!
-Bike Races!

Gym Leaders:​

Chaplin Town: Grace,Grass type

Boulderbridge City: Rocco,Rock Type

Bellham City: Mason,Steel Type

Baronbay City: Matt, Water Type

Ring City: Gloria, Psychic Type

Toothridge Town: Hamilton, Ground type

Vincen City: Brent, Bug

Sansetto Island: Arnold, Flying Type


Team:​

Yagerbomb-Creator,Team Leader,Writer,Character Development,Mapper

Positions Needed:​

Spriter-
Scripter( Or someone who can teach me to script)-
Music(might not need)-

Questions:​

Is the Plot interesting?

How can I make the game better?

Is there anything else I should implement in the game?​
 
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Lord Varion

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Firstly it's a good story.
Secondly Some screens would be nice.

But I see a great future with this game. ;)
 

Beegu

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Questions:

Is the Plot interesting?

How can I make the game better?

Is there anything else I should implement in the game?
This game sounds very interesting and I would like to play this game.

You could make it better by maybe adding more detail to the plot. Not necessarily more information but a cliffhanger like "But will your intrest in the D.N.A. pokémon draw unwanted attention from team Nucleo?" Although a bit more information would be nice.

Yeah, more minigames besides bike races would be more exciting (although bike races does seem cool and original.
 
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I would love to help you with this game! I can draw fairly well if you need art! I can't sprite to save my life however >.<
 

Rashdi04

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That looks creative! Can't wait for more features!
 
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hi i was interested in making a team rocket hack of fire red where u can be butch and cassidy or jessie and james and meowth, but i need help making the sprites. could someone help me?
 

Master-Pixel

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Hmm; not the first time I've heard this kind of idea; but this one has been executed well :)
However I doubt been able to buy your own house or property would be appealing; as in the actual games you can have Secret Bases - so I'd re-think that idea.

Team Nucleo sounds cool, however try and event another way of making them evil - Team Plasma were trying to liberate Pokemon from trainers but did it through demonstrations; and stuff like it however you then have Ghestis's original plan - to rule Unova; maybe make a cover story that can tie in - instead of the Team being like Team Rocket or Galactic.

Bike races sound fun; be cool to enjoy the cycling road once more; maybe recieve a pokemon with Extremespeed at the end (like the Zigzagoon from Pokemon:Box)

I'd try and get some screenshot's up as everyone loves a bit of eye-candy; we can also help you more with them up :D

Moreover try and go a bit more indepth overall; instead of having drab descriptions which are quite empty.

Hope I've helped :D
 
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