okay i'll try to be as nice as i can. one your storyline stinks, theres pretty much nothing in it but the same old pokemon, defeat the eval team theme. the features, meh, theres nothing new there. your tiles, okay im proud of you for making your own tiles, but the houses seem to bland you need to add more shading to them. the fakemon starters, oh where do i begin. the water cub just looks to plain and not pokemon like, you should add some stuff so it doesnt just look like a recolored bear, and it looks to much like an evolution, starters are supposed to be small and cute, not big an fierce. the other starters are drawn horribly, i dont even know what they are. well thats all i have to say for now.
flamemaster~