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The night beckons...

Shadow

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Weird Gengar. Tired. Have headache. Couldn't find non-dark duals (not on PPN) or else this would've been grass/psychic like my old Gastly and Haunter. Why do I care? I'm a helicopter!

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Good, but the term "after this turn" can be taken as a permanent affliction, which is definitely illegal. It should probably be something more like "Your opponent cannot flip a coin to wake up their pokemon until after their next turn" or something more specific like that.
 

Frostweaver

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"after this turn" should probably read as "for the next in-between turn." Normally, there's 2 coin flips for the opponent to try to wake up until it is your turn again. I think that you're trying to reduce this 2 coin flip down to one... I think "for the next in-between turn" should be the right way of saying it.

The title mistakens me to be a Dreadlord card from warcraft 3 again or something O.o; afterall, "the night beckons" is one of his quotes...
 

Gokey Shuckle

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Mistakes have been pointed out. Good work! Another star card from you! You are one of the best newcomers i've seen faking! 9/10. Yeah, sometimes wording gets to me too.
 

Shadow

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frostweaver said:
"after this turn" should probably read as "for the next in-between turn." Normally, there's 2 coin flips for the opponent to try to wake up until it is your turn again. I think that you're trying to reduce this 2 coin flip down to one... I think "for the next in-between turn" should be the right way of saying it.

The title mistakens me to be a Dreadlord card from warcraft 3 again or something O.o; afterall, "the night beckons" is one of his quotes...
If I have wings, why am I always walking?

Fixed!
 
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