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Old March 4th, 2006 (03:27 PM).
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Thanks Frosty! Much appreciated it and you know grammar is my worst enemy out there... the Standardized Tests here say that I'm weakest in detecting grammar errors... XD
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Old March 4th, 2006 (04:02 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Chibi Pika:

In chapter 9, there's a quote where Chibi says that he only beat Team Rocket as a fluke because he was filled with Pichu's electricity. When I first wrote chapter 3, I was focusing on Chibi's uber-power, but then I started focusing on his weaknesses later. If he only won becuase he had Pichu's power, then there's no real reason why he had to be the one to use Discharge. Pichu could have just done it the second Ajia got there. And there's no way to just say that Pichu couldn't do Discharge, 'cause she had to be able to in order to channel her energy to Chibi. *_* I asked all my readers to help me fix it, but no one could come up with anything.

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Old April 28th, 2006 (08:32 AM).
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Hi Frosty! Please review Sandshrew hunt - thanks!
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