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Old October 20th, 2007, 01:48 PM
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I'm not going to dispute it, really I'm not. Trust me on this. It's true I'm ****** off about another one of my fanfiction being forced closed (that's right, this is not the first time it's happened) but I know not to whine and argue.

It's just that... the mods on there didn't really give a specific reason why it was closed.

All I'm asking... is a SPECIFIC reason why it was closed, and what rule did I violate?

If someone, particularly the mod that closed my fanfiction, could help me out here, I'd appreciate it. Thanks.
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Old October 20th, 2007, 01:57 PM
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Um,...you already had an explanation given to you:

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It's hilarious how you attack us before we even come and critique, and evade your duties as the writer with silly excuses and search engine references-- The plot is weak, weak in terms of tangibility and conceptuality. Please don't tell me that's all you got... The title itself is dull. The dialogue is monotone, ordinary and too casual... In other words, boring. Very little plot development took place and descriptions are fixed in and unnatural to me. Punctuation is horrible.

ACC's points are strong too.
To sum it up simply and bluntly, it was turning out to be garbage.
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Old October 20th, 2007, 02:02 PM
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Yeah, you were given a specific reason.

Read the fanfiction rules, and the fanfiction writing guides here. They will help you a LOT if you bother to take to them seriously.
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Old October 20th, 2007, 02:02 PM
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Thanks Pekoni & dp786.

Again, just in case!

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It's hilarious how you attack us before we even come and critique, and evade your duties as the writer with silly excuses and search engine references-- The plot is weak, weak in terms of tangibility and conceptuality. Please don't tell me that's all you got... The title itself is dull. The dialogue is monotone, ordinary and too casual... In other words, boring. Very little plot development took place and descriptions are fixed in and unnatural to me. Punctuation is horrible.

ACC's points are strong too.

This is now closed as it doesn't meet the standards of PC's writing sections.
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