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Old April 2nd, 2008, 10:41 PM
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Well, this is my first game and im making it using the pokestarter kit of Poccil
(Thanks Poccil!)

Edited: (LOL I edited all the page xD)
1-The story
2-Features
3-Characters
4-Pokemons

Pokemon The Magma Stone

1-The Story of the region Phagen
Ten years have passed since the world was saved thanks to Dawn and Lucas from the legendaries Dialga and Palkia... but in those days, an ancient, legendary wake up from its dream, also called as the magma dragon...
A year later from its awaken, from the depths of the ocean, millions of volcanos were rising and erupting, covering the ocean... A new region was created...
People start to move to the new region that was called Phagen (I dont know why i called Phagen ')
The people live for 9 years in a laidback life... until when there were a lot of earthquakes, breaking the ground and the mountains... the region was starting to sank...
People were trying to escape but nobody had come to rescue them.
The most experimented professor that moved to the region with his son/daughter know what was happening, the Magma Dragon was awaken...
The legend said that when the creator of the land wakes from his dream, the "Dreamers" have to awake from its large dream to stop the destruction and put to sleep the creator of the land... but for that, a noble person have to get a mystic stone named Magma Stone and take it to the only awaken dreamer... but wait, Where is the last dreamer awaked? well, an evil organization had stolen it for using in some experiments and trying to collapse the time and space to call the god pokemon... ¬¬ what a trouble!
Now its the turn of the son/daughter of the professor Arthur to rescue the last dreamer, get back the magma stone (hehe, you have to beat the elite four for get the stone, cause is the prize when you beat them xD), awake the sleeping dreamers (are 3 and they wouldnt be happy when you awake them) and confront with the Magma Dragon to prevent region Phagen destruction...
Can you do it? (im not... im lazy X3)

2- Features
-A new whole region
-A bunch of new pokemons! more than 350 made by me.
-Some features? (i will see that later ¬¬)

3-Characters
-Thomp
(No... thats a bad name xD... its a temporal name xD)
A 12 years boy with a stubborn personality, 'cause of that, he always is in trouble and can be killed one day... just kidding xD
He and his father are from the Sinnoh region, he move to Phagen when he was 5 years old...
He loves pokemon and he is anxius to get his first pokemon... or maybe the last one...
-Daten (Why i chose odd names for my characters ¬¬)
a 13 years teenage girl, her crazy personality makes her be a little naughty and adventurous, she loves to get in trouble and climb mountains.
She wants a pokemon for go with her to the tallest mountain in Phagen... but...
it looks she has another task to do first...
-Arthur (I was thinking in my cousin arturito xD)The most professional professor in whole Sinnoh has moved to the Phagen region with his son and daughter to study the pokemon...
until one day he get a pokemon named Lordeon from an old friend. When he was going to his hometown, was attacked by a green haired woman and a large coat man, then they stole Lordeon...

4-Pokemon
In the region Phagen, you can start with one of 5 pokemons:
Ticky (grass), Whimp (fire/ghost), Stylox (water), Hondew (electric) and Akiba (ground)
(I sux at drawing T.T i dont like how they looks!)

001-Ticky

note: ' it looks bad!
special: Defense
Type-Grass
Kind-Pitcher
A pitcher-form pokemon that loves to be near rivers
evolutions:
-002-Dekot grass/rock
-003-Dedante grass/rock

004-Whimp

note: this pokemon looks edited in photoshop ¬¬ looks so bad the coloring!
special: Attack
Type-Fire/ghost
Kind-Torch
A torch-form pokemon that is scaried of dark
evolutions:
-005-Firowom Fire/ghost
-006-Smylfirom Fire/ghost

007-Stylox

not: looks kind of bad its coloring
special: Speed
Type-Water
Kind-Marine fox
A marine fox pokemon that sleep only 2 hours.
evolutions:
-008-Slydoom water/steel
-009-Sacredox water/steel

010-Hondew

note: Im so lazy to draw it...
special: Sp. Attack
Type-Electric
Kind-Round
A round pokemon that has a big mouth
evolutions:
-011-Brathe electric/dragon
-012-Brokadew electric/dragon

013- No named (any idea?)
(I have changed the starter cause it looked horrible ¬¬)

special: Sp. Defense
Type-Ground/normal
Kind-Cub
A small cub with sharp claws to open hives and get the sweet combee's hive
evolutions:
-014-No named too! ground/normal
-015-No named too! ground/normal

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well, the story its large but i kind dont like it xD but well...
comment please!
i need to know if its ok...
(uff! im tired ¬_¬)
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Old April 3rd, 2008, 12:23 AM
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Why is it a prize for the Elite 4? Why don't they go and put the Pokémon (some weird kind of Groudon? The thing in your sig has Groudon's hand) to sleep themselves?
If you go here, and scroll right to the bottom, you'll see that there is a Magma Rock in D/P. Maybe you could involve that in the game?
And your Pokémon names aren't the best - they don't have much to do with the Pokémon itself. And there's a Hondew Berry already :P
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Old April 3rd, 2008, 11:48 AM
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Location: Rosie, Arkansas
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I am Casey Jones, one of the creators of Pokemon Zenith. Thank you for looking at our post and also for your comments. Since you were good enough to look at ours, I thought I should do the same for you. I was quite surprised to see your game, with it's story line and it's 350 new Pokemon, it is quite a jewel. If you should need any help, my friends and I would be happy to assist.
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Old April 3rd, 2008, 03:41 PM
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StrawyBlood
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Originally Posted by Wichu View Post
Why is it a prize for the Elite 4? Why don't they go and put the Pokémon (some weird kind of Groudon? The thing in your sig has Groudon's hand) to sleep themselves?
If you go here, and scroll right to the bottom, you'll see that there is a Magma Rock in D/P. Maybe you could involve that in the game?
And your Pokémon names aren't the best - they don't have much to do with the Pokémon itself. And there's a Hondew Berry already
I dont even know why the main character have to get that stone for to wake that legendaries (i was sleepy and tired... math homework is just terrible ¬¬)
And yeah, that pokemon looks like groundon, i made it 2 years ago... a few months i found the drawing and want to make a game with that crappy fakemon (just for fun )
I already know about that there is an already rock named magma stone (i got Heatran last year) but when i chose the game title, I forgot that was already a rock named like that xD but it looks a great idea to involve that rock maybe Heatran? (i dont know... Im stupid with anything about writing stories
mmm... You're right, my pokemon names dont even matches with them O_o ticky is a pitcher-form pokemon... it was supossed to be like a tribal or hawaiian mask but i drew it like a pitcher xD
And about Hondew is cause i like the name (i already know about the berry)... but you are all right!! then i'll think better names for all characters O_O
Thanks for the comment xD you really help me :3
mmm... maybe i'll need some changes in the storyline xD

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I am Casey Jones, one of the creators of Pokemon Zenith. Thank you for looking at our post and also for your comments. Since you were good enough to look at ours, I thought I should do the same for you. I was quite surprised to see your game, with it's story line and it's 350 new Pokemon, it is quite a jewel. If you should need any help, my friends and I would be happy to assist.
Thanks! if i really need help im going to ask you ok?
thanks again
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