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Old September 25th, 2008, 05:34 PM
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Pokemon:Battle of the Elements
 
Join Date: Sep 2008
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Hey Everyone!
I'm starting a game called Pokemon Titaniun White.

Starters: Charpeg, Vernam, Leafpaw
Country:Innos
Starts: Town of Shersan
Proffesor Ake
Mascot of game(ex. Diagia for Diamond) Chartitlian
Ememy: Team Dyansty

So what do you think?

Update!
When your character get lost in a new town, he is taught the way of the pokemon. One the Epha Cube is taken by a mysterious force causing all the legendary pokem to cominde causing chaos
I'ts up to you to save the world!

Last edited by Game Master; September 25th, 2008 at 05:39 PM. Reason: Your double post has been automatically merged.
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Old September 26th, 2008, 02:38 AM
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Chartitlian sounds weird and the fire starter probably shouldn't start with 'Char-'.

Other than that, it sounds alright, I guess.
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Old September 26th, 2008, 12:54 PM
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Project Amethyst
 
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: North Herts, England
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Nature: Naive
"Legendary fight" isn't really the best plot... You might want to improve it. Why would the Epha Cube cause it? Has it happened before? And why is it up to you? Surely, more experienced trainers, such as Gym leaders or the Elite 4, would be the best choice... You could always use the "chosen one" plot device, but if you do, you'll have to go into detail. Lack of an evil team sounds interesting, though.
As a final point, you might want to rethink the names. The starter names sound too generic, and Chartitlian doesn't make sense and is too long (Pokémon names can be up to 10 letters long).
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Old September 27th, 2008, 05:37 AM
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Sean.
 
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mm, no. not feeling right now. no costructive advice. can't think.
this is practically a pointless comment but im not sure how to delete so sorry about that.
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Old September 28th, 2008, 11:02 AM
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Pokemon:Battle of the Elements
 
Join Date: Sep 2008
Nature: Brave
Starters: Pickacu(I cant spell it), Vernam, Leafpaw
Country:Innos
Starts: Town of Shersan
Proffesor Ake
Mascot of game(ex. Diagia for Diamond) Darrceu
Ememy: Team Dyansty

So what do you think now?

Update!
When your character get lost in a new town, he is taught the way of the pokemon.
The legendary Epha cube is taken. The Epha cube keep the world in Harmony. Team
Dyansty take it to Sky Pillar and summons Darrceu pokemon of time and space.
Mor updates later
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Old October 3rd, 2008, 07:23 PM
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aprentice breeder(maybe crazy)
 
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Location: hearthome city or wherever you are
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. do you mean pikachu ?
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Old October 10th, 2008, 08:52 PM
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yes and look at my new thread it is better...this is closed
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