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View Poll Results: What pokemon should Malachite have?
Fakemon? 812 50.78%
Existing Pokemon? 787 49.22%
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Old November 15th, 2008, 01:14 PM
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well guys I tried my hand at sugimori art and well here it is. I know I still need to work on the style but I also need your opinion so here. Also I think I'm doing fakemon.
I really feel like I am being mean here, but that's pretty bad. It looks like it was done in paint, it is all choppy and the shading for the white to black transition is an eyesore. I will add to what Blazers08 said while agreeing that it looks like nothing but an ordinary penguin. All of the black is a bad idea I think, because you cant tell where the body parts end or begin.

I love the work you're doing with this game and the others as well, but if it were me in your place, I would pick something else and try again.
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Old November 15th, 2008, 02:03 PM
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^The light around the window. That's what I mean. How'd you do that?

The screenshots are okay. I don't think it's a good idea to keep putting "Coming Soon".
lol the screens only say that because there is not a finished story and the story eventing hasn't even and wont start for a while.
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Is this suppose to be a fakemon?
Cause it doesn't look like a pokemon at all..
It just looks like a penguin.
lol I did say it sucked ant agin it was my first try...
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I really feel like I am being mean here, but that's pretty bad. It looks like it was done in paint, it is all choppy and the shading for the white to black transition is an eyesore. I will add to what Blazers08 said while agreeing that it looks like nothing but an ordinary penguin. All of the black is a bad idea I think, because you cant tell where the body parts end or begin.

I love the work you're doing with this game and the others as well, but if it were me in your place, I would pick something else and try again.
Your not being mean.It was my first ever try and it was in photoshop which I haven't really used either.and thanks for the opinion it was much more understandable than that last one since you actually said what was wrong with it.Pick something else and try again? what do you mean by that?
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Old November 15th, 2008, 02:20 PM
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Well OI..You should know this from the, 4, 5, 10? games you've created, that you're going to be criticized on your work.
We are aware it was your first try, that's why we tell you, to do better.
Don't post if you don't want that feedback..
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Old November 15th, 2008, 02:24 PM
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Well OI..You should know this from the, 4, 5, 10? games you've created, that you're going to be criticized on your work.
We are aware it was your first try, that's why we tell you, to do better.
Don't post if you don't want that feedback..
lol this my second pokemon game funny joke though.I know i'm gonna get criticized its just you didnt really help me out you just said the obvious its sucks and thats it.You didn't really say how to do better.
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Old November 15th, 2008, 02:30 PM
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You should second look your work. and ask yourself, Does this really look like a pokemon?
My good friend Atomic_Reactor helped me with that....
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Old November 15th, 2008, 06:42 PM
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You should second look your work. and ask yourself, Does this really look like a pokemon?
My good friend Atomic_Reactor helped me with that....
ok lol I'll do that next time....who knows if I even do fakemon.
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Old November 15th, 2008, 07:04 PM
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Yeah, I was telling Blazers, just look at the drawing. Does it look like an actual Pokemon? or does it look like a hideous deformity of the hunchback of Notre Dame... or in your case, just a normal penguin with a normal Goatee.

Make the eyes.. the same basically. they're a tad bumpy.
Give it more originality to, that always helps. switching its colors can make it so much more different.

It was a decent first try.
Goodluck with the others.
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Old November 15th, 2008, 07:16 PM
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Pick something else and try again? what do you mean by that?
What I mean is that the penguin has been done already, piplup and its evolutions. I don't know how you could change the penguin so that it won't ever be compared to piplup.
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Old November 15th, 2008, 07:42 PM
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What I mean is that the penguin has been done already, piplup and its evolutions. I don't know how you could change the penguin so that it won't ever be compared to piplup.
If he was to not do a Fakemon because Nintendo already did an one similar, that's closing a lot of doors for him.
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Old November 16th, 2008, 09:32 AM
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Yeah, I was telling Blazers, just look at the drawing. Does it look like an actual Pokemon? or does it look like a hideous deformity of the hunchback of Notre Dame... or in your case, just a normal penguin with a normal Goatee.

Make the eyes.. the same basically. they're a tad bumpy.
Give it more originality to, that always helps. switching its colors can make it so much more different.

It was a decent first try.
Goodluck with the others.
Um...alright the damn thing was never going to be in the game anyway it was just something I could test sugimari on. Thanks anyway.
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What I mean is that the penguin has been done already, piplup and its evolutions. I don't know how you could change the penguin so that it won't ever be compared to piplup.
^same as i told A_R^

lol I've decided that in the game the only fakemon in the game will be the starters and maybe a legendary
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Old November 16th, 2008, 09:44 AM
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i was telling you in general, when you do drawings, take that advice.

then i was telling you how to fix your drawing.

i never said anything about it being in the game...
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Old November 16th, 2008, 10:28 AM
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If he was to not do a Fakemon because Nintendo already did an one similar, that's closing a lot of doors for him.
I agree with Trace, just because It's been done once dosen't mean It cant be done again (maybe even better) I'd personally like to see both fakemon, and original pokemon in the game...It adds a little flavor...and I have a sugamori art tutorial if you need it OI...

Good luck with your games .
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Old November 17th, 2008, 07:14 PM
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This is looking good Pokemonoi. The screens look great.This looks like it'll tur out to be another good game from you.with some scripting this should be awesome.
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Old November 18th, 2008, 08:51 PM
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What I mean is that the penguin has been done already, piplup and its evolutions. I don't know how you could change the penguin so that it won't ever be compared to piplup.
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I agree with Trace, just because It's been done once dosen't mean It cant be done again
I agree with Floating monkey pirate; they have more than one dog pokemon, more than one cat pokemon. . .besides in real life there's not just one type of penguin, there's a whole variety of penguins. Maybe OI can base his penguin off the Southern Rockhopper Penguin, they have cool hair
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Old November 18th, 2008, 10:16 PM
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Well, if it was your first try then its okay.
To be honest, the little penguin don't look like a Pokemon as they said.
I agree with ~Night, there is a lots of type of Penguin, you may pick some special one.
:3
Or, you can recruit someone else to help you to draw or sprite.
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Old November 19th, 2008, 05:40 AM
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The tree shadow on the sand is supposed to be brown, not green :\

Anyways, the screens are great!
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Old November 19th, 2008, 02:31 PM
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Well, if it was your first try then its okay.
To be honest, the little penguin don't look like a Pokemon as they said.
I agree with ~Night, there is a lots of type of Penguin, you may pick some special one.
:3
Or, you can recruit someone else to help you to draw or sprite.
great idea. I'll try it.
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The tree shadow on the sand is supposed to be brown, not green :\

Anyways, the screens are great!
mhm I'll look into it.
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Old November 19th, 2008, 07:26 PM
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Am I in your team?
I don't see my name on the first page?!
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Just kidding. XD
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Old November 19th, 2008, 08:02 PM
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Am I in your team?
I don't see my name on the first page?!
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Just kidding. XD
Lol there I added you.I'm gonna try doing fakemon again.So here goes try number two,wish me luck.
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Old November 20th, 2008, 04:26 PM
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Well i'll definitely be looking forward to it
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Old November 20th, 2008, 05:43 PM
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Well i'll definitely be looking forward to it
Mhm....I'm also working on story and ideas for the features
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Old November 20th, 2008, 07:33 PM
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Mhm....I'm also working on story and ideas for the features
Um....so are you doing fakemon pokemonoi? XD!
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Old November 21st, 2008, 07:23 PM
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Um....so are you doing fakemon pokemonoi? XD!
mhm...still no comfirmtion of a whole new region of pokemon ore just some. I will also like to state that the story is coming together well and it will be very interesting.
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Old November 22nd, 2008, 05:05 PM
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lol i saw ur penguin...and i think its pretty good for a first try!
anyway, i am a pretty good concept mapper/fakemon creator.
u need my secvices? lol
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Old November 22nd, 2008, 06:53 PM
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lol i saw ur penguin...and i think its pretty good for a first try!
anyway, i am a pretty good concept mapper/fakemon creator.
u need my secvices? lol
I could use another fakemon creator.could you please Pm me some of your work?
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