[HotW #58] Pokémon Torzach: The Legend Begins (We're back in action, people!)

[minchan]

Cool sprites!! It's wayyy better than my first scratch. 0.o You don't wanna see how bad it was. XD

when are you putting my userbar i made on the front page of the thread? ust wondering.

[destinedjagold]

their palletes are a bit unpleasing though, but they're really nice.

wish ye luck with this hack project though~

[MegaMaccer]

Originally Posted by 現実として巨大なもの

Not bad for first time but the best way to go is edit normal pokemon sprites, edit pikachu to make the orange and blue pokemon or edit pichu and etc. The ones in your sig don't look bad though The middle sprite is very good though you should work on the tail shading a bit

Alright, I'll work on those things

Originally Posted by Westrmistr

Well, the first one looks strange. Mostly in the face. The second one looks awesome except that it looks a little blocky in places. Then the third one is awesome too, but a little blocky around the head, and the left (our side) foot looks like it isn't attached to its body.

But over all, they're pretty good!

Thanks, I'll try and fix up those errors

Originally Posted by minchan

Cool sprites!! It's wayyy better than my first scratch. 0.o You don't wanna see how bad it was. XD

when are you putting my userbar i made on the front page of the thread? ust wondering.

Thanks And, could you send me the img code for it? I'll get it posted straight away then

Originally Posted by destinedjagold

their palletes are a bit unpleasing though, but they're really nice.

wish ye luck with this hack project though~

Well, I'll look into the Palettes, they may need changing, I'll hopefully be improving on those today :D

[Lumino]

Well, those sprites you made are decent, Mac. The only problem I find is the outline. You need black outlines other than just completely colored ones. So, uh, you'll need to add a few black colors to the outline of your sprite.

I think no one understood that. :/

[Tropical Sunlight]

Originally Posted by Lumino

Well, those sprites you made are decent, Mac. The only problem I find is the outline. You need black outlines other than just completely colored ones. So, uh, you'll need to add a few black colors to the outline of your sprite.

I think no one understood that. :/

I think I did.. xD
Maccer, you should do what he's saying. Maybe I could do some...

EDIT: Something like this...
Or you could keep your own unique style.

[MegaMaccer]

Originally Posted by Lumino

Well, those sprites you made are decent, Mac. The only problem I find is the outline. You need black outlines other than just completely colored ones. So, uh, you'll need to add a few black colors to the outline of your sprite.

I think no one understood that. :/

I'll try that, thanks

Originally Posted by ~Watermelon

I think I did.. xD
Maccer, you should do what he's saying. Maybe I could do some...

EDIT: Something like this...
Or you could keep your own unique style.

Yeah, I'll have a go at it, maybe later on today :D. That would be awesome if you could do some for me PM me and I'll get you the download link

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Alright, so here we have another sprite for rating, its done by our latest member, CasyCoati, an amazing spriter
I present to you, Lulleep!

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[Westrmistr]

Cool! That one's really good! It looks just like a real sprite from Fire Red!

It looks like we're getting a lot of sprites done!

[Spookyghost]

Originally Posted by ~Watermelon

I think I did.. xD
Maccer, you should do what he's saying. Maybe I could do some...

EDIT: Something like this...
Or you could keep your own unique style.

Uhm, it would look better if you sued black noyl in places where there'd be lots of shadow. Putting it around highlights makes it look bad. D:

Just a tip. :)

[Destrozone]

Originally Posted by Spookyghost

Uhm, it would look better if you sued black noyl in places where there'd be lots of shadow. Putting it around highlights makes it look bad. D:

Just a tip.

Lets chill here people. I will edit Ruashield when I get to it.

[MegaMaccer]

Originally Posted by Westrmistr

Cool! That one's really good! It looks just like a real sprite from Fire Red!

It looks like we're getting a lot of sprites done!

Yup, we are This guy has officially joined the team, which is great :D He is now in production of more sprites, so you will be seeing a lot more work from this guy in the future!

Originally Posted by Spookyghost

Uhm, it would look better if you sued black noyl in places where there'd be lots of shadow. Putting it around highlights makes it look bad. D:

Just a tip.

Good idea, we'll take that into account and do that

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So, more C&C on all the sprites, and just general thoughts about the hack would be good to, it all does help us improve

[Tropical Sunlight]

I know, I improvised...
Idk how to sprite (or maybe I do...)
Well, GL!

[Destrozone]

Originally Posted by MegaMaccer

I'll try that, thanks

Alright, so here we have another sprite for rating, its done by our latest member, CasyCoati, an amazing spriter
I present to you, Lulleep!

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Oh my. Casy, I think I owe you a standing ovation *clapclap* Very well done. I should edit Ruashield....

[Tunaboy88]

Alright, so here we have another sprite for rating, its done by our latest member, CasyCoati, an amazing spriter
I present to you, Lulleep!

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*ClapClapClap* to CasyCoati on making the soprite of Lulleep!!!! :D

[Tropical Sunlight]

That's a nice baby sprite!
GL!

[MegaMaccer]

Originally Posted by ~Watermelon

I know, I improvised...
Idk how to sprite (or maybe I do...)
Well, GL!

Originally Posted by Tunaboy88

Alright, so here we have another sprite for rating, its done by our latest member, CasyCoati, an amazing spriter
I present to you, Lulleep!

Spoiler:

*ClapClapClap* to CasyCoati on making the soprite of Lulleep!!!! :D

Originally Posted by ~Watermelon

That's a nice baby sprite!
GL!

I'm sure he'll be thrilled to have all those comments
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So, I have some mroe un-inserted sprites, hopefully these are being inserted right now, but just have a look at them and say what you think: Lulleeps Backsprite, by CasyCoati

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and Mimity

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by Westrmistr. Don't forget to rate

[minchan]

Aww that new sprite is so adorable!!!

[Westrmistr]

Wow! That back sprite of Lulleep is awesome! But I see just one little problem. The arm... It's so far down. It just looks strange. But if it's moved a little higher then It would be perfect!! Awesome sprite!

[Sricule]

So far all the Sprites are awsome

[blikosaur]

lulleep looks very proffesional, actually it could probably be mistaken for a real pokemon sprite if someone didnt know it was fake. mimity is well done but there are a few sharp edges on the ears, head and body which need to be rounded. the backsprites for both are very well done.

[Vallander]

cool new sprites mac! ur really gettin it goin :D

congratz to mac's team too great job guys. get out there and show em that fakemon are the future! lol. yay pep talk

[NHMQ]

Pokemon Torzach looks definitely sick! I can't wait to play it! I love the idea of 250+ Fakemons!
Im totally supporting this and wait until it comes out!

[destinedjagold]

Lulleeps really look great, but Mimity looks a little pale and it lacks some black outlines?
But still, both look nice.

[MegaMaccer]

Originally Posted by minchan

Aww that new sprite is so adorable!!!

I know, its great eh :D

Originally Posted by Westrmistr

Wow! That back sprite of Lulleep is awesome! But I see just one little problem. The arm... It's so far down. It just looks strange. But if it's moved a little higher then It would be perfect!! Awesome sprite!

Alright, I'll talk to him about that, or I'll try and do it myself

Originally Posted by Sricule

So far all the Sprites are awsome

Thanks

Originally Posted by blikosaur

lulleep looks very proffesional, actually it could probably be mistaken for a real pokemon sprite if someone didnt know it was fake. mimity is well done but there are a few sharp edges on the ears, head and body which need to be rounded. the backsprites for both are very well done.

Alrighty, those edges are being rounded off now

Originally Posted by Sitrow

cool new sprites mac! ur really gettin it goin :D

congratz to mac's team too great job guys. get out there and show em that fakemon are the future! lol. yay pep talk

I know, the team is awesome, they are really getting things done

Originally Posted by NHMQ

Pokemon Torzach looks definitely sick! I can't wait to play it! I love the idea of 250+ Fakemons!
Im totally supporting this and wait until it comes out!

Thanks

Originally Posted by destinedjagold

Lulleeps really look great, but Mimity looks a little pale and it lacks some black outlines?
But still, both look nice.

Yeah, I thought they needed bringing to life a bit, so I brightened the palette slightly, I didn't want to overdo it and blind everyone I also added some black to the outline, so tell me what you think of this one

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[blikosaur]

yeah mimity looks alot better like that,but that line in between his head and left ear looks unnatural

[MegaMaccer]

Originally Posted by blikosaur

yeah mimity looks alot better like that,but that line in between his head and left ear looks unnatural

Ok, I'll try and fix that up. Now, some more sprites for C&C. Now, I'm not trying to turn this thread into a sprite rating thread or anything, I'm only doing it because I want the sprites to be as good as I can get them. Anyway, here are 2 more sprites for rating, by the latest spriter to join the team, Blikosaur. Remember, these are his 1st 2 sprites ever, and he drew the original concept art as well, so all crit will be appreciated :D

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There is Humon (Pink and Purple) and Raptwig (The other one ) So, look and rate people :D