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Old June 27th, 2009 (06:09 PM). Edited June 28th, 2009 by Swampoleongaurdian.
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Okay so this is a crossover of Pokemon and Transformers(movie)
I am a bit surprised that there aren't more crossovers of this variety, and you people might not like it.

Summary:

Megatron didn't chase the allspark immediately, and it landed on the pokemon world. Now Ash and his friends are being targeted by Decepticons, Autobots, and not to mention Team Rocket! Now they are in the middle of a war and... Why is there two Dawns?

So basically, Bumblebee follows Ash around, Team Rocket has Allspark, and there's a Decepticon disguised as Dawn.


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oh dear god another one

Um . . . sounds good. As before, you give us little to go on, but it's a good idea. I mean, who ever said the Cube came straight to Earth, right?

Maybe for a little flavour, one of the other Autobots could follow Ash around, as opposed to Bumblebee. Otherwise, it might seem just a little bit too much like the movie. And Ash might need to be old enough to have a drivers' license, or that could take some explaining.

I always like Pokemon fics with guns, so + kudos for that. And the Dawncepticon thing is kind of cool. Can they scan and become other organic life forms now?
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I could just see Megatron crushing Pikachu in one hit XD

I don't think Pikachu's lightning could save him now.

Though if you do a fic like this, it would seem as though Pokemon would get the backburner and Transformers getting the forefront, as I assume the Pokemon (perhaps aside from the legendaries) couldn't do much about it...

Though being shot at with metal among other things certainly wouldn't help.
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Old June 27th, 2009 (07:25 PM). Edited June 28th, 2009 by Swampoleongaurdian.
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Quote originally posted by Sparkling Dragon:
oh dear god another one

Um . . . sounds good. As before, you give us little to go on, but it's a good idea. I mean, who ever said the Cube came straight to Earth, right?

Maybe for a little flavour, one of the other Autobots could follow Ash around, as opposed to Bumblebee. Otherwise, it might seem just a little bit too much like the movie. And Ash might need to be old enough to have a drivers' license, or that could take some explaining.

I always like Pokemon fics with guns, so + kudos for that. And the Dawncepticon thing is kind of cool. Can they scan and become other organic life forms now?
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Well, I saw Revenge of The Fallen the day after it came out and one unimportant character in it was a pretender. She (it) flirted with Sam, and straggled him with it's robotic (and somewhat organic) tongue. Now that's what the Dawncepticon thing is, And Pretenders were around before ROTF, In the old marvel transformers comics, and Scorponok was the one who created them (that is, in the marvel comics). But, the pretender in the movie based it's form off of an animatronic Alice from Alice in Wonderland, and this pretender is scanning a real life form. Ash has no license.

*throws voice to sound like Mudflap* And what do you mean by
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oh dear god another one
EDIT: No pokemon death! at least not written anyways... *rolls eyes*
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Old June 27th, 2009 (07:32 PM).
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Might want to cover that with some spoilers just in case
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Since I posted that, I have been to see Revenge of the Fallen, and you're quite right. Sorryy about that. In that case, go ahead

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As I sat and watched that bit, I was like, ah, Swampy was right after all.
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Old June 28th, 2009 (03:09 PM).
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So... do you have any advice for me?
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I'm out, I'm afraid. There was some in my first post, though.
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Old June 29th, 2009 (07:47 AM). Edited July 8th, 2009 by Swampoleongaurdian.
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Edit: Change in plans, no pretender.

Ash doesn't actually drive Bumblebee, and Blackout incidentally kidnaps Dawn, oh and Dawn goes to Jail. :D (Nope not gonna happen.) (Bumblebee just stalks him and his friends, like he did Sam (stalker ). I'm going to try and write a summary... now.

Stopped by his brother Optimus, Megatron is unable to chase the Allspark. As a result, Ash and his friends manage to stumble upon it. Autobot and Decepticon alike are after it, and Team Galactic has their own interests in it. But the battle will turn friends into enemies, as one will turn to the Decepticon faction. Due to the allspark's energies, Dawn is now a technorganic being, and the ultimate weapon. The Fallen will rise again, and time and space will be ripped apart where they meet. Ash Ketchum now has to save his friend and stop the destruction of his world. But will he be able to?

You might say it sucks, but I'm bad at summaries, okay?
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