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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:30 PM
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(This is an alternate parallel universe)
When the World of Pokemon began. Pokemon adapts to where they are as of now. The normal regular Pokemon adapted to Fire and Others. However the Original Source of the Fire wasn't caused by sparks of electricity. It was an eternal flame where the ice and water Pokemon coveted and made it become frozen. Even though Flames die out. This one didn't one bit its a shard that has fire in it and still continus to burn in the frozen encasing it is with.

-Prof. Oak
Oh my gosh! In the next few days, it's your 15th Birthday! Prof. Oak gives you access to a ferry with your mother to go into a region. However its permanent. You have a nice house near the beaches of SunShine. The Town is called Oakland for many reasons. Prof. Oak gives you a clone of Charmander as a gift. It is the same as any other Charmander and perhaps not much time to live. Mother has come in the lab and says that she doesn't mind him going around the region. Once outside, Green confronts you with a satisfying look and teases you for not having a Pokemon. The joke's on him when you take out Charmander and look with an convinced eye. The Battle Begins. Green is shocked and leaves the area in a disappointed grumpy manner. Next to your journey is the injured Mewtwo levitates around the region trying to find something and confronts Team Rocket and literally defeats all of them barely due to him being injured when fighting against Mew.(Alternate Universe Battle.) Prof. Oak also reminds you that he is in need to for you to find some chemical reactions and collect data of Pokemon.

In a Detailed Letter.
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Dear [player],
I wish of you to help me with my quest in collecting Pokemon Data.
Indeed, i know more than hundreads of Pokemon Exist in this world. It is such a mystery.
I will entrust you with this Charmander because of your eyes. They impress me; I know you won't fail me.

-Oak.

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->386 Pokemon There is no D/P Pokemon.
->Green and Silver as a Rival.
-> 4 Gym Leaders, 4 Rocket Executives each give you a badge/symbol.
->Help Protect The Frozen Flames against Team Rocket who wishes to bring World Chaos if the flame was erased or destroyed.
->New Characters. (Obviously)
-> Cameo Characters. I am Accepting the first 5 people to PM me with Overworlds and what they want to be in the game. (Trainers Only)


Exia Factor


Overworld Cameos List:
1. Meowth
2.
3.
4.
5.

Neon Factor


Special Items are generated and gives you the ability to port to A Secret Legendary Pokemon. There is no explanation of the Neon Factor. its a shard of Luminous Neon which is a bright neon that has part soul of Every Single Legendary Pokemon and allowing you to capture them. (No D/P)

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Still in progress. I'm going to add a Charmander OW. Do not Worry


Credits


->Poccil Starter Kit.
->Meowth - Gave me some ideas
->Avatar/Somebody - For the overworld.
->Flood/TY(FMP) - Without You Buddy. I would have given up months ago.
-<WesleyFG - Tiles

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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:31 PM
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First post: Looks awesome!

good storyline, too.

Sending OW through MSN.
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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:32 PM
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the story seems interesting
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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:33 PM
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This looks very good, I like the tiles you are using can't wait to see more.
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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:36 PM
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Frozen Flame... That sounds like something from the game Chrono Cross... Oh well, the game seems good to me! Good luck with it!
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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:41 PM
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There are grammatical errors, but not bad. Why are you using Professor Oak and Team Rocket? Why are there only 386 pokemon?
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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:44 PM
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First post: Looks awesome!

good storyline, too.

Sending OW through MSN.
Alright.
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the story seems interesting
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This looks very good, I like the tiles you are using can't wait to see more.
WesleyFG's Marnian Tiles. You could use them if you look at his tiles thread.
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Frozen Flame... That sounds like something from the game Chrono Cross... Oh well, the game seems good to me! Good luck with it!
Shhh... nobody knows this.
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There are grammatical errors, but not bad. Why are you using Professor Oak and Team Rocket? Why are there only 386 pokemon?
Im not adding Diamond and Pearl Pokemon. And Prof. Oak is temporary. Team Rocket is here due to Johto is so close by to this Region.
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Old June 26th, 2009, 04:55 PM
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Wow, awesome hack game dude! (I was joking about it was a hack XD).
Anyway, it's going great, I like the tiles and the map seems OK.
I wish you luck on this!

Games have a lot more possibilites than a hack. (Talking about tiles, music and palettes, etc...)

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Old June 26th, 2009, 05:02 PM
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"There is no explanation of the Neon Factor. its a shard of Luminous Neon which is a bright neon that has part soul of Every Single Legendary Pokemon and allowing you to capture them."
I guess that means all non-DP legendaries.
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Old June 27th, 2009, 05:01 PM
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Wow, awesome hack game dude! (I was joking about it was a hack XD).
Anyway, it's going great, I like the tiles and the map seems OK.
I wish you luck on this!

Games have a lot more possibilites than a hack. (Talking about tiles, music and palettes, etc...)

~Erick
Thanks! :3. More possible ways to create mini games.
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"There is no explanation of the Neon Factor. its a shard of Luminous Neon which is a bright neon that has part soul of Every Single Legendary Pokemon and allowing you to capture them."
I guess that means all non-DP legendaries.
It already says no D/P.

I have new screenshots. It is nice and all.

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Old June 27th, 2009, 05:11 PM
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Nice screens! :D Looking great so far.
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Old June 27th, 2009, 05:24 PM
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I like those tiles. The event's not too shabby either. Keep it up.
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Old June 27th, 2009, 09:13 PM
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Thanks guys.

I'm making a major update and secrets. The Titlescreen is a failure. However it will be in the alpha.


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That isn;t the full text scripts. I cut 70% of what they said to keep out major spoilers. The battle will not be in the alpha. Due to Mechanics = No Double Battles. You'll just fight on your own. Also this battle is taken place in Alpha 2.

Also here is some new imported sprites(yay pixeity and GSCPLATINUM) (I had Gridirons Permission Two Years Ago. Don't go and b.s. me about not having permission.)

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Old June 27th, 2009, 09:27 PM
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You might want to use dispose of instead of dispatch. The in battle box is okay, but maybe make the font a different color.
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Old June 27th, 2009, 09:30 PM
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Thanks guys.

I'm making a major update and secrets. The Titlescreen is a failure. However it will be in the alpha.


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That isn;t the full text scripts. I cut 70% of what they said to keep out major spoilers. The battle will not be in the alpha. Due to Mechanics = No Double Battles. You'll just fight on your own. Also this battle is taken place in Alpha 2.

Also here is some new imported sprites(yay pixeity and GSCPLATINUM) (I had Gridirons Permission Two Years Ago. Don't go and b.s. me about not having permission.)

Looks really cool .Exiled, can't wait to play it.
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Old June 28th, 2009, 02:04 PM
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This Is very nice. The tiles go together well and the storyline is pretty good. Keep it up I really hope to see more.
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Old June 28th, 2009, 03:55 PM
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You have a lot going for your game that I really like. First off, after reading the plot, I see the potential for a full scale game which I don't see with a lot of other hacks. I love the screen shots! It seems like you really took the time and effort to create new places and add new features. The cloning machine in Professor Oak's lab is something to be excited about.

The dialogue is something worth noting too-one of the problems I've had with all the Pokemon games was that the dialogue was simple, and often pointless. With phrases like "..I'll avenge my friends and family," it shows that you put some thought into the character and what they would actually say in the given situation.

The only things I didn't really care for was the titlescreen. However, I think it would work a lot better if you just altered the color scheme to something darker.

Keep up the good work!
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Old June 29th, 2009, 08:45 AM
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This Is very nice. The tiles go together well and the storyline is pretty good. Keep it up I really hope to see more.
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You have a lot going for your game that I really like. First off, after reading the plot, I see the potential for a full scale game which I don't see with a lot of other hacks. I love the screen shots! It seems like you really took the time and effort to create new places and add new features. The cloning machine in Professor Oak's lab is something to be excited about.

The dialogue is something worth noting too-one of the problems I've had with all the Pokemon games was that the dialogue was simple, and often pointless. With phrases like "..I'll avenge my friends and family," it shows that you put some thought into the character and what they would actually say in the given situation.

The only things I didn't really care for was the titlescreen. However, I think it would work a lot better if you just altered the color scheme to something darker.

Keep up the good work!
Thanks! However my Computer Nod32 VirusScan deleted one of my computer important file that boots my computer. So now it fails to boot. If I have to. I have to restart everything. But I know how to code everything .

Also I have a backup. Not as much progress. Though it has up to Oak's Lab at least.
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You have a lot going for your game that I really like. First off, after reading the plot, I see the potential for a full scale game which I don't see with a lot of other hacks. I love the screen shots! It seems like you really took the time and effort to create new places and add new features. The cloning machine in Professor Oak's lab is something to be excited about.

The dialogue is something worth noting too-one of the problems I've had with all the Pokemon games was that the dialogue was simple, and often pointless. With phrases like "..I'll avenge my friends and family," it shows that you put some thought into the character and what they would actually say in the given situation.

The only things I didn't really care for was the titlescreen. However, I think it would work a lot better if you just altered the color scheme to something darker.

Keep up the good work!
Uh, this isn't a hack
It's a game.
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Old June 30th, 2009, 06:14 PM
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Uh, this isn't a hack
It's a game.
It doesn't really matter, haha.

Since my game is pretty much out-righted destroyed. I decided after a few days to revise the current storyline to bend in with my game.

All I can say is. He goes into the woods to another town and is saved by Mewtwo. Basically the Player sneaks inside a Team Rocket Lab and steal the cloned Charmander rather than getting it from Oak. You don't start in Olivine City. I
m very sorry about this. I'll let you access Johto after you beat the game. It isn't over yet. There are lot's of events ahead! First off is I'm going to spoil an event. Mewtwo(Mine) vs Mewtwo(Meowth's M.S.B. Version). Alright. Mewtwo #1 is a good person and starts out nice rather than exploding and killing Fuji and his assistants. MSB Mewtwo is drifted by space and time. We blame Dialga and Palkia. Now they eventually both meet and fight. My mewtwo is only battling to find whats his purpose and Meowth's Mewtwo is just protecting himself.

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Old June 30th, 2009, 06:17 PM
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So that makes 388 pokemon with Dialga and Palkia.
Stealing a pokemon is not very hero like, even if it is from Team Rocket. I guess that reveals a bit about the hero's personality.
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So that makes 388 pokemon with Dialga and Palkia.
Stealing a pokemon is not very hero like, even if it is from Team Rocket. I guess that reveals a bit about the hero's personality.
Well, the hero of Pokemon Colloseum stole the Snag Machine. And he was heroic.

Anyways, looks good.
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Old July 1st, 2009, 05:34 PM
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Upon Route One and WinterFlow City




Player talking to Hermin and goofing around. Also There is a tile error on one of the icey-comb-long-bush thing. I know. I put the tile on a wrong layer. Also I regained my confidence and Mapping style. Please enjoy Hermin's Tale.

This letter is readable on the game, I don't know how to make a letter system to read this. However this is good information . Hermin has memory issues and decides to stitch an old paper what he wrote and Also add a final piece to the letter telling you something. Enjoy and Peace!
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A Few Months Ago,
My Grand-Daughter and I raised up upon the mountains. I think we saw people in uniforms trying to do something to a cave. The next thing we knew a Flying Blue Figure scraped everybody off the Mountains and I fell on top of a tree witnessing the Mountain covering up the whole city. We renamed the city from Celestial to WinterFlow because it keeps on flowing. I have no clue where my grand daughter Elise is. Now if I.... s..still remember the creature was Articuno and it used Ice Beam on the cloaked uniformed people and their Pokemon and shattered them by flying straight at them. Art..Articun..o's Eyes was glowing tintly White and Blue and flew above the city. During this time, rumors have spreaded and Zapdos and Moltres were awakened during the same time. It is very strange indeed. Moltress set a village on fire and Zapdos destroys everything in it's path with Thunder Storms. It seems they all ... ... killed the uniform men, Prof. Oak from Kanto says that the uniform people are from an Criminal Organization called... Team Rocket. This is all I remember, [player]. So good luck. I bestow you with this Squirtle. Keep it company, and keep this letter-package with you. It will help you if you wish to stop the chaos that revolves around the world.

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Old July 1st, 2009, 05:42 PM
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The tiles suit the maps, which look good themselves. Also, put a comma after I wonder.
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