[HotM May] POKEMON FLORA SKY (Final Version Available!)

[Scorching Shadow]

Umm what language do yyou speak? I've notice some grammar errors and might be able to help you, HOPE I CAN HELP

[12345]

Originally Posted by loitraitim

Hm... I think this broken font very bad!
If you leave the font as the old-tittle-screen it is beautiful!



The tree's not very nice, colors are... don't use it, ok?



Togepi agh...
Togepi do in Searound City?
It is not a event??

The main tree? Oh yes, it'll be changed. :D
And the text, i think it's ok.:\
Togepi don't have a event....

Originally Posted by Scorching Shadow

Umm what language do yyou speak? I've notice some grammar errors and might be able to help you, HOPE I CAN HELP

Thanks, My English is not good. :\It's bad. You can correct my mistakes of all my posts or this hack any time you can in this topic.

The work for demo version is almost finished. We're making for some new tiles. If I'm lucky, the version will be able to release tomorrow.

[Ash493]

Originally Posted by 12345

And the text, i think it's ok.:\

If the OF isn't very well shown...

[Scorching Shadow]

Okay I'll be looking over your old and new posts, screenshots and videos to help correct you a bit so sorry if it seems like I post a lot

[Scorching Shadow]

This is an edit of your intro:You'll come to a land with many mysteries of the legendary Pokemon. After the battle between Dialga and Palkia, the portal between Torn World - the world of Giratina and real world is opened. Giratina appears and brings many unanticapated dangers. And you must close this portal before its too late. Meanwhile, Team Magma and Aqua are seeking the legendary Fire and Water ype Pokemon to dominate their world. Together with other friends, our hero will prevent the heat of the legendary Pokemon by the actions of Team Magma and Aqua. For more stories, let's play.
Another quick thing about one of your screenshots; where it says "Hi my name is Sky I am a assistant of Prof. Birch" It should say "I am an assistant of Prof. Birch" for future reference in english all vowels(a,e,i,o,u) use an and constanants(all the other letters) simply use a.
I'll keep looking through your posts and i'll keep correcting grammar errors. Can't wait for the beta you can bet I'll be one of the first to download

[Sarcastic Prince]

Originally Posted by 12345

And the text, i think it's ok.:\

I think that the Prof. isn't Birch if I'm correct?

[TheFierceRed]

Nice Hack Man
Keep It Up Man

[ElementalKrack]

Oh my God. If I ever get this Rom, I will play it so much! I love how there's the Mining MiniGame and all of the good screenies and such! Nice job!

[_Sin_]

@sky: i think new font not good, i like bahamut's font, you need to use it

[12345]

Originally Posted by Scorching Shadow

This is an edit of your intro:You'll come to a land with many mysteries of the legendary Pokemon. After the battle between Dialga and Palkia, the portal between Torn World - the world of Giratina and real world is opened. Giratina appears and brings many unanticapated dangers. And you must close this portal before its too late. Meanwhile, Team Magma and Aqua are seeking the legendary Fire and Water ype Pokemon to dominate their world. Together with other friends, our hero will prevent the heat of the legendary Pokemon by the actions of Team Magma and Aqua. For more stories, let's play.
Another quick thing about one of your screenshots; where it says "Hi my name is Sky I am a assistant of Prof. Birch" It should say "I am an assistant of Prof. Birch" for future reference in english all vowels(a,e,i,o,u) use an and constanants(all the other letters) simply use a.
I'll keep looking through your posts and i'll keep correcting grammar errors. Can't wait for the beta you can bet I'll be one of the first to download

Thanks. I'll edit the first post

Originally Posted by _Sin_

@sky: i think new font not good, i like bahamut's font, you need to use it

All right, I'll remake it later. :\

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UPDATES #5

Demo Version Released!
Some new things.

1/ New hero's bag


2/ Main Tiles
I edited the tree and mountain. They'll be able to changed in the future.


3/ Demo Version Download Link
You can download this version in the first post.
Or:
http://www.mediafire.com/?ezthqni1tmw
I hope you like it.

[874521]

Yay! A demo has been released. Up to where this beta go? And will i patch it to Ruby with mugs or without mugs?

[_Sin_]

in demo version, you can go to 1st gym
@Sky: i can't play it, i was patch it to Ruby ROM but i can't play (

[12345]

Yay! A demo has been released. Up to where this beta go? And will i patch it to Ruby with mugs or without mugs?

try with mugs :\

in demo version, you can go to 1st gym
@Sky: i can't play it, i was patch it to Ruby ROM but i can't play (

Huh? I don't know, it's work well with me. :\
If everyone can't patch this file, PM me for the patched file or I'll make another one.
Try UPS File: http://www.mediafire.com/?2ianyitz2jh

[874521]

Originally Posted by 12345

try with mugs :\

Huh? I don't know, it's work well with me. :\
If everyone can't patch this file, PM me for the patched file or I'll make another one.
Try UPS File: http://www.mediafire.com/?2ianyitz2jh

It didn't work on ruby with mugs. Just reminding.
When I patch the ups. file to pokemon ruby, this is the message:

Spoiler:

To directly patch source file, a temporary file is being made.
Upon successful patching, the target file will be replaced with this.

Applying patch file 'H: Pokemon\Pokemon Explorers of Sky\Pokemon Explorers Of Sky Demo Version.ups' ...
Reading file 'H: Pokemon\Pokemon Explorers of Sky\0907 - Pokemon - Ruby Version (U).gba' ...
Target file is 'H: Pokemon\Pokemon Explorers of Sky\0907 - Pokemon - Ruby Version (U).gba.utm' ...
Patch application will take approximately 0 minute(s), 16 second(s).
Please be patient ... UI will not be responsive during this time.

Failed! Input checksum is invalid.

[12345]

Ok, :\
Try this link, i tested it.
http://www.mediafire.com/?441iiwiig1z
Hope it'll work. I downloaded the rom base at romulation.

[Ash493]

Demo! Great news
but if it's UPS... then it's not really good at all...
I have same type of problem with ups's as 874521

[Scorching Shadow]

HOW DO YOU USE UPS FILES!?plz i really wanna play

[MC Blaze]

hum, very promissing, and the graphics look cool. You could work out the story, though.

[12345]

HOW DO YOU USE UPS FILES!?plz i really wanna play

First, download the UPS Patcher (http://www.sendspace.com/file/b8tykl) and this hack file (it'e a UPS File).
Extract these files. Open UPS PAtcher.

Spoiler:

Chose apply patch to an existing file.

Spoiler:

Press Browse and select a UPS File

Spoiler:

Then, select a Ruby Rom bAse (i use a rom without mugs, i download it from romulation)

Spoiler:

Press Apply Patch and wait until you see like this.

Spoiler:

Press OK and done.


If everyone can't patch this file, PM me, I send you the patched link. Sorry for this problem. I think I'll need someone help me make a patch file. :\ Does anyone can play this version?

[alo123]

Spoiler:

It is spelled Cresselia

The man does not say anything

You can walk through the door but you cant go in


They both walk through the light post


You walk through those rocks


Both signs say nothing

I don't think that is supposed to be like that

You can walk on both of those tree stumps

All the light post in this city can be walked on

The words overlap there

Bugs I found
Ok I have finished the hack and I have to say it was great I like the poses for the
D/P pokemon the were great. Great job and looking forward to the next beta
Also to all the people who have trouble with the UPS patcher maker sure the files
you are patching are in the same folder as the UPS patcher thats how I got it to work

[12345]

Originally Posted by alo123

Spoiler:

It is spelled Cresselia

The man does not say anything

You can walk through the door but you cant go in


They both walk through the light post


You walk through those rocks


Both signs say nothing

I don't think that is supposed to be like that

You can walk on both of those tree stumps

All the light post in this city can be walked on

The words overlap there

Bugs I found
Ok I have finished the hack and I have to say it was great I like the poses for the
D/P pokemon the were great. Great job and looking forward to the next beta
Also to all the people who have trouble with the UPS patcher maker sure the files
you are patching are in the same folder as the UPS patcher thats how I got it to work

Thanks so much. I fixed all bugs you found except the Cresselia Sprite (I know someone will have this bug like you, a problem with pal and showpokepic script, I'll try to fix it in the future.)
Here is the new link (I change also some palettes of grass, tree...)
http://www.mediafire.com/?tdnjntv2zy1

[874521]

I'm just playing the beta and the PC service is nice! But when you click X button, here's what happens:

[loitraitim]

Originally Posted by 874521

I'm just playing the beta and the PC service is nice! But when you click X button, here's what happens:

That's bug...
However, that bug you found is only a small bug....

Currently i'm testing testing to find other bugs.
Tomorrow i'll post pix-game ^^!

[Scorching Shadow]

Thanks 12345 I'll try it and the game looks great cant wait to play

[alo123]

Spoiler:

You cam walk through those two places

The pokemart guy has no script so you can not
buy anything

Couple more bugs