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Old September 2nd, 2009, 07:47 AM
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Hey
I'm Mindfreak (metagross) but you probably don't know me.
Well I'm the one who inserted the batlle backgrounds,Worldmaps,Titlescreen and some other graphical stuff in Dark Cry and Tunder emblem(To hacks made by mitchel1).
But enough about me and more about the hack.I hope you like it.
(BTW I'm dutch so sorry for my horrible English)

Pokemon dragon master
A hack of Fire Red [bpre]

features.
New hero
New heroine
Crappy asm/hex stuff(maybe)
New regio
And much more.

The storyline.

Original.(Has a lot of faults)
Spoiler:
A long time ago, The world was a wonderful place.
All creatures in the world lived together in peace and harmony.
Until in the middle of a dark forest a mystic dark red gem appeared.
suddenly all pokemon in the forest became evil.
Fire pokemon burned down some parts of the forest.
Flying pokemon started to eat the bug pokemon.
Ground pokemon created huge earthquakes.
The forest guardian celebi tried to stop this mess but he couldn't stop them all.
And at the end the forest guardian disappeared.

When the forest guardian was gone some humans became worried.
They tried to remove the stone from the forest but nobody even reached the gem.
But then a mystical man in a cape from the Jotho region appeared.
He claimed that he was dragons master and said that he would destroy the red gem.
Everybody laughed at him and said Thad he never would return.
But brave as he was he traveled trough the forest and found the gem.
He tried to destroy the gem but nothing worked.
He knew that if he didn't destroy the gem everybody would laugh at him so he summed his gyarados and let him eat the gem.
At the moment the gem was eaten everything returned to normal.Except the gyarados of the dragon master.
The blue color of the gyarados changed to red and he became ill.
He returned his gyaradoss and ran trough the forrest to the closest pokecenter.
The nurse in the poke center healed the gyarados as good, as she could.
And when the gyarados was full health again he was out of control.
He destroyed the pokecenter and fled to the forrest. The dragon master ran after him as quick as he could.
And in the forest he saw something he 'll never forget.
The forest guardian had returned and stopped the gyarados with a red scale.
when he saw the dragon master he gave the red scale to him as a gift for rescuing the forest.
The forest was save.

Edited and corrected by Konet
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Many years ago, in an idyllic world, all of the creatures lived harmoniously.

However, this utopia was shattered when suddenly, in the middle of a dark forest, a red gem materialized, corrupting all of the Pokèmon inhabitants with its evil influence.
Fire Pokèmon set parts of the forest ablaze, Flying Pokèmon began to consume Bug types, while Ground types began to summon earthquakes…

Celebi, the forest’s protector, attempted to end the chaos, but it ultimately failed, disappearing shortly after.

Humans began to worry after the forest’s guardian disappeared, and attempted to remove the gem that had caused the decline of the once peaceful world.
Unfortunately, no one even found the gem, and so they despaired.

Until, that is, a caped mystical man appeared from the Johto region, claiming that he was the Dragon Master, and that he would solve their problems by destroying the red gem.

The people laughed at his statements, jeering that he would not return, however, his unprecedented courage allowed him to go through the forest and locate the vile jewel. Unfortunately, none of his attempts to destroy it worked. Knowing that the others would taunt him if he couldn’t destroy it, he summoned his mighty Gyrados, commanding it to eat the gem.

As soon as this happened, the world returned to the way it was before the gem’s corruption.

Everything, that is, apart from the Dragon Master’s Gyrados, who's once blue scales turned crimson, as the Pokèmon became ill.

The man recalled the leviathan to its Pokèball, and ran out of the forest, desperate to find a Pokèmon Center. While the nurse healed the Gyrados to the best of her abilities, after it regained its strength it became uncontrollable.
Destroying the Pokèmon Center, it fled to the forest, and its trainer took chase. As he ran, he saw a scene that would never leave his memory: Celebi had returned, and halted the Gyrados’s onslaught with a mysterious red scale. Seeing the Dragon Master, it bestowed to him the scale, a reward for rescuing the
forest. Finally, it was saved.

Five centuries later, three more gems appeared in the region of Kitaura.

One in a lake.
One in a cave.
One... in a forest.



500 Years later 3 gems appeared in the Kitaura region.
One in a forest
One in a lake
And one in a cave.

....

Edited and corrected by Neo-Щolf
Spoiler:

A long time ago, the world was a wonderful place.
All creatures in the world lived together in peace and harmony.
Until ...
In the middle of a dark forest , a mystic dark , red Gem appeared.
Suddenly , all Pokemon in the forest became evil.
Fire pokemon burned down some parts of the forest.
Flying pokemon started to eat the bug pokemon.
Ground pokemon created huge earthquakes.
The forest guardian Celebi tried to stop this mess but it couldn't stop them all.
And in the end , the forest guardian disappeared .

When the forest guardian was gone , some humans became worried.
They tried to remove the stone from the forest but nobody even reached the Gem.
But then a mystical man in a cape from the Jotho region appeared.
He claimed that he was Dragon Master and said that he would destroy the red Gem.
Everybody laughed at him and said that he never would return.
But brave as he was , he traveled through the forest and found the Gem.
He tried to destroy the Gem but nothing worked.
He knew that if he didn't destroy the Gem , everybody would laugh at him . So , he summoned his Gyarados and ordered him to eat the Gem.
The moment the Gem was eaten , everything returned to normal .Except the Gyarados of the Dragon Master.
The blue color of the Gyarados changed to red and he became ill.
He returned his Gyarados and ran through the forest to the closest Pokemon Center.
The nurse in the Pokemon Center healed the Gyarados as good as she could.
And when the Gyarados was fully healed , he was out of control.
He destroyed the Pokemon Center and fled to the forest. The Dragon Master ran after him as quick as he could.
And in the forest he saw something he would never forget.
The forest guardian had returned and stopped the Gyarados with a Red Scale.
When it saw the Dragon Master , it gave the Red Scale to him as a gift for rescuing the forest.
The forest was saved .


500 Years later , the 3 Gems appeared in the Kitaura region.
One in a forest
One in a lake
And one in a cave.

....


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Video

Klik(Old palletes and tiles)


credits
Mitchel 1 (old palette)
Xiros (tiles)
Neo-Wolf story edit.
Konet story edit.

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At the moment: nobody.
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 11:05 AM
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hehe woot, great you've posted and re bringed dragon masters again ^^
wish you best of luck, mindfreak ^^
btw: nice titelscreen but you already knew ;)
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 11:08 AM
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Wow, this is looking great. Did you insert that Title Screen? Because if you did, it's awesome.
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 11:13 AM
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Nice, I like especially the title screen and the screenshot with that blue house in it (G/S/C Kanto style) :D
Good luck on this one.
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 12:46 PM
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Whoa, that has to be the best titles I think I have seen. Also the tiles are pretty good as for some of the screenies.
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 01:15 PM
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Metagross...
Your A Graphical Genius...
Your New Hack Has So Much Potential...
Title Screen = Epic Win...

Good Luck~
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 01:22 PM
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I especially like the grass tiles, both normal and wild-grass ones and - of course - I adore the titlescreen! I was thinking: the Dragonite on the titlescreen is transparent. Did you do that on purpose?
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 06:30 PM
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Damn this hack is amazing. beets mine by a lot. im not just saying this but.. this is the best hack i have ever seen. i have not played it but the screen shots are just insane

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Old September 2nd, 2009, 09:09 PM
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This is gonna be blast!
Awesome title screen and tiles are also very pretty.
Good luck.
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Old September 2nd, 2009, 11:16 PM
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Your titlescreen is the best, Mind Freak!!
And don't complain about your English. Your English is very fine, as I have read your storyline.
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 05:06 AM
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Where Is The Download Link??
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 05:16 AM
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Where Is The Download Link??
Download link doesn't exist.
Wait 'till he'll release aplha/beta
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 12:12 PM
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That title screen is amazin man
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 02:03 PM
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Hey everyone thanks for all the positive comments.

@ Q-Bone: Yes I inserted the titlescreen by myself.

@ KostK2Boss: Yes the transparency was on purpose I thought that it was better looking that way.

@tjain71:Listen to Ash493.

@All the rest thanks for your positive comments about the tiles and Titlescreen.

Okay on to the good stuff.

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And as a bonus for those who want to know what the starters are klik on the spoiler.
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That was all for now I hope you like it.
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 02:20 PM
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hmm the Ow's look wierd especially the girl, you used a male base !
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 02:38 PM
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it looks cool i love the title
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 06:47 PM
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Them Tree Tiles Look Incredibly Detailed...
And The Battle Backgrounds are Sweet...
Nice Job With The Tiles And Sprites~
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 06:48 PM
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I'm going to have to degrade the mess out of your hack... Yeah, joking
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Well, I love your titlescreen, did you make the Dragonite in photoshop? And the story seemed pretty solid and interesting to me. Your hack will turn out to be a great one, filled with events and adventures and whatnot, you know, things that'll keep people interested. Okay, well good luck with it, and can't wait to see more!
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 09:01 PM
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The OW's look amazing, Mind Freak!! And wow... you get to choose one of the 9 Starter Pokemon... certainly interestin'!! Good luck on this.
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Old September 3rd, 2009, 11:02 PM
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This hack looks great.

I like how some houses have like another roof on the roof. That's original.
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Old September 4th, 2009, 03:22 AM
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Wow! this hack has the nice tiles and palettes. Good luck!
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Old September 4th, 2009, 04:45 AM
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This tileset is freakin' awesome.
And ya made a great job in doing backgrounds
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Old September 4th, 2009, 05:44 AM
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looks cool and great work with the intro I luv the dragonite!!
You have my support!!!
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Old September 4th, 2009, 08:29 AM
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This hack looks very well done so far, and I hope that the work continues as such.
I like the tiles, especially that big tree. The OW's and sprites look pretty good, and the titlescreen is clearly pure excellence.
Good luck.
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Old September 4th, 2009, 03:43 PM
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You said you need someone to help edit the story? I'd be more than willing to help. I don't have much experience with hacking itself, but I will be an English major. Just let me know if there's anything I can do.

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