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Old October 1st, 2009, 08:31 AM
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Pokemon Spirit Chrome


Story

The Legend of Pento

The world was a dark and empty place...
Then, the Original One came...
It created the universe and the beings to protect it.
They are known as the Legendary Pokemon.
Then, the Original One created other beings...
One of its creations was man.
It and the Legendary Pokemon also created the regions of Earth.
They created Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, and Pento.
Humans and Pokemon then went to different regions around the world.
Their work done, the Legendary Pokemon scattered to different places around the world, rarely ever to be seen again.

The Present Day

You are a 13 year-old boy/girl who lives in the area known as Pallet Town, Kanto. You lived a normal life just like everyone else in Pallet Town, except for the fact that you weren't interested in Pokemon and becoming a trainer.
You always thought that Pokemon were boring.
Then, the disasters started happening. Earthquakes struck major cities. Tsunamis coated the land. Volcanoes erupted. Blizzards struck some towns.
The region where most of the disasters are happening is in faraway Pento. Each island now has its own climate.
However, some disasters struck cities in Kanto through Sinnoh as well.
An earthquake soon hit Pallet Town, only to see no damage when you go outside!
Curious about the catastrophes in the regions, you study Pokemon unwillingly because you know that going into the wild alone is dangerous.
One day, while you are studying Pokemon, you realize something.
You actually enjoy studying Pokemon.
Eager to begin you journey, you rush to Prof. Oak's Lab.
However, he has no more Starter Pokemon to give to you.
Disappointed, you go home.
The next morning, you hear a scream.
You rush outside to find out what it was about.
You find that it was only an Eevee wanting to play with a little girl.
Prof. Oak then hands you a Poke Ball.
He tells you to throw it at Eevee.
(No battle sequence happens here as you don't have a Pokemon.)
Before going off into Route 1, you try to make friends with Eevee.
You then notice something peculiar about it.
You then realize that the Eevee was the Pokemon that made you dislike Pokemon!
You then try to figure out how that happened though, but you come up empty handed.

(The Next Day)
You wake up like every other morning. Nothing special.
You go into your backyard to make sure that Eevee, who slept there for the night, was okay.
To your relief, Eevee was completely fine.
However, when Eevee gets up, you find something where it was sleeping. It was smooth and rectangular.
You take this object to Oak.
He examines the stone-like object carefully and tells you that it is a Plate.
He elaborates and tells you that a Plate is a very rare object that powers the Original One. One Plate exists for each type.
He then tells you that the Plate you found was an Earth Plate. It might have had to do with the earthquake in some way.
Your questions answered, you finally begin your journey, and set foot in Route 1.
But you have more questions.
How did this Earth Plate suddenly appear?
Was it linked to the earthquake in Pallet Town?
Because of the other natural disasters in other parts of the world, are there Plates in other cities and regions as well?
You hope to find answers to your questions and you wish to solve the mystery of the Natural Disasters.
The story continues...

Features

600 Pokemon! ALL POKEMON HAVE BEEN PLANNED!
Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, and a new region, Pento!
The Battle Frontier returns with 2 new facilities!
Arceus as mascot!
The Global Terminal returns!
All Pokemon can follow you! (Possibly) (I might have the right script for this...)
The Northeast Island of Sinnoh is now part of Pento!
New evil teams! Team Spore and Team Lightning! (Not completely sure yet...)
Mystery Gift Downloads!
New types! Light and Sound!
New TM's!
New HM's!
Dual Screens! (Possibly)
The Poketch makes a valiant return, with downloadable apps!

Screenshots





Note: I do not have any new tiles yet!

Videos

Soon to come!

Downloads

Coming Soon!

Special Credits

Wichu for his Form Changing Script! Thanks again, man!

Progress

Key:
Bold = Working On
Regular = Not working on yet
Crossout = Finished
Finish Pallet Town (Almost Finished!)
Finish Route 1 (Almost Finished!)

Team

Me - Pokemon Spriter, Mapper, and Eventing (Basic Scripting).

Advanced Scripters - None. 5 Positions Remaining!
Music Composers/Remixers - None. 5 Positions Remaining!
Pokemon Spriters - Me. 2 Positions Remaining!
Trainer Spriters - None. 3 Positions Remaining!
Mappers - Me, VarietyVidsnet. 3 Positions Remaining!
Tile Makers - None. 5 Positions Remaining!
Overworld Spriters - None. 3 Positions Remaining!
Other Spriters - None. 3 Positions Remaining!
Beta Testers - None. Currently NOT Recruiting!

Most needed positions:

Scripters
Music Composers/Remixers
Tile Makers

Should anyone of the team wish to talk to me, my AIM Screen Name is frozendarknes461

Please, I am not looking for people bashing on the thread saying "Too ambitious" or any other crap like that. I didn't post this thread for people to repeat it. I am only looking for criticism on the storyline. Also, if you dare say anything about my project being ambitious, I will kick you into the outer regions of space!

Thank You! :D
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Old October 1st, 2009, 11:12 AM
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w00t first post!
That is an extremely good story! Wow, if you need help, let me know I'll be waiting. I can't wait for some screenshots.
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Old October 1st, 2009, 11:44 AM
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Thanks! I just fixed the error I got while testing, so I can continue working. I'll post some screenshots in a few minutes.
Edit: Some screenies added. Now working on compiling HG/SS OW's.
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Old October 1st, 2009, 12:01 PM
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Alright coooolio. I could be a mapper for Kanto! I love Kanto.
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Old October 1st, 2009, 12:08 PM
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I would very much appreciate that; I am not a very good outdoor mapper. I'll add ya to the list.
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Old October 1st, 2009, 12:10 PM
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What tiles shall I use? Kyledove's?
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Old October 1st, 2009, 12:11 PM
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Kyledove's should be good for now, but I think once we get a Tile Maker, we should have our own custom tiles and save Kyledove's for occasional use.
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Old October 1st, 2009, 12:12 PM
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Would you like me to add some stuff and add some PIZAZZ tio it or just keep it the same?
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Old October 1st, 2009, 12:19 PM
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Yup. I want it to look larger and more different. I'll PM you the detailed information of the maps when I'm ready for the maps to be created, which should be soon.
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Old October 1st, 2009, 05:15 PM
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Well, the story's solid, but why 600 Pokemon? You plan on adding your own?
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Old October 1st, 2009, 06:02 PM
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The story is good but the features are just like lets say they are easy to say
but not easy to do. Think carefully about the features, not just check em' out
and sat oh we are going to do that tommorow and never do it.
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Old October 2nd, 2009, 05:44 AM
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:/

Did I not say "Don't comment on the project being ambitious, etc."?

I'm pretty sure your post falls into that category, darkerarceus.

Please try not to post that again.

As I said, I want criticism on my storyline, and when I get the complete ones, maps, sprites, etc. But not the features!
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Old October 2nd, 2009, 11:08 AM
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But, that was constructive criticism you can't tell people not to post CC.
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Old October 2nd, 2009, 11:30 AM
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This game will get absolutely no where with 5 regions.
Pick 1. You will not finish if you don't.
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Old October 3rd, 2009, 02:33 PM
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Well, this game's different. I think 1 region goes incredibly fast and doesn't pose a challenge. 5 regions would take approximately, depending on how fast you're playing, 60-70 hours to complete, and I will keep it fun so players don't get bored.

VarietyVidsnet: I don't like the CC on my features because I know that my choices are FINAL, so it does nothing for me except knock me down a bit, and this led to the cancellation of my other game. I'm not prepared to let this happen again.
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Old October 3rd, 2009, 03:02 PM
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Well let people post CC on the features to try to help you improve them! It's as simple as that.
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Old October 4th, 2009, 04:39 AM
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I am currently waiting for some music remixes for my game, so I could map you Sinnoh meanwhile....If you want to.
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Old October 4th, 2009, 05:49 AM
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Here is the Pallet Town sorry it took so long. I've been kinda busy.



It's not the greatest but, I think I did a good job.
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Old October 4th, 2009, 06:24 AM
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I am currently waiting for some music remixes for my game, so I could map you Sinnoh meanwhile....If you want to.
Well I think that you should have the game have different starters than usual.
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Old October 7th, 2009, 01:35 PM
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VarietyVidsnet: I personally like it. Much fresher to me than the old Pallet in FR/LG.

@world: I'm currently not working on Sinnoh.

ppppp: It will. Eevee for Kanto, and still need to think of the starters for Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, and Pento.
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Old October 20th, 2009, 03:43 PM
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awesome. this game should be good and it has a good storyline
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Old October 24th, 2009, 01:40 AM
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The storyline is good, awesome, like everyone else said. I particularly like how you are having all the regions, plus another new one. I don't understand something in the storyline though. Could you explain
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You then notice something peculiar about it.
You then realize that the Eevee was the Pokemon that made you dislike Pokemon!
You then try to figure out how that happened though, but you come up empty handed.
more? It kind of is too sudden...
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Old October 29th, 2009, 09:18 AM
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Well, in the game, it'll get into that more.

But I'll try to put it in a nutshell, because this part is slightly different in the game. Here's how:

You'll bond with Eevee over the adventure, and at a certain point, you'll find out that Eevee is the Pokemon that made you dislike bla bla bla. Sorry, I'm having computer problems ATM so I can't type much without my computer freezing up on me.
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