Well, two things, I suppose;
I'd like to do as the game requested real quick- huge thanks to Belowzero productions for the hard work they've put into this. Stick with it guys!
Anyways, here are a few things I've noticed so far. I haven't gotten very far into the hack yet, so I may edit this with more later.
First, I love the pokemon selection near the beginning. I've always preferred Zigzagoon over Rattata, Tailow over Pidgey, and you get the idea. I also really appreciated those Vulpix on route 3- I've never really used Vulpix before as they always seem to appear later in the games or not at all, so having one appear early is a great excuse for me to give them a shot. I'd love to see a brief overview of the pokemon in each of the first 3-4 routes, because that "a pokemon sprayed me with water" comment on route 2 really raised my curiosity. I spent 5 minute looking for a water type there

. I always liked the starter choices- Eevee is a very interesting pokemon, and I liked being given the option to start off with an electric type, especially Jolteon. Cool choice there.
Rambling aside, the story sounds like it has potential. I obviously haven't really gotten into yet, but if I'm looking forward to it from the summary, it's a good sign.
Some slight criticisms I can make are the lack of some custom sprites/artwork (main character, Prof. Logan, rival, "old" man (pokemon cataching tutor), and the slightly rushed feel of the intro. For example, when Prof. Logan says "I heard something about your father" it felt rushed and I really missed him elaborating more in-game. Other than that, I'm really impressed so far, and can only reiterate my desire to see a list of pokemon encounters in the earlier routes, to see what I should search for. If you get the time, thanks, but if not, don't worry about it. Sorry for the hasty review, I'll try to get something more coherent out later. Keep up the great work.!