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Old February 8th, 2010, 05:07 AM
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Pokemon Flower Paradise





Story:
When you were young you had a nightmare,you saw that in the future when you will be 14 a villain team will capture Shaymin.You must prevent this while you exploring a new region(Dangon).


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Dangon Region
Old Beauty Town






Route 1





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Old February 8th, 2010, 08:38 AM
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Well the story needs to be worked on a bit more, and the mapping isnt good.
Try improving the story past just one sentence. Its kinda uninteresting as it is now. As far as the mapping goes, ther are no hills or mountains, everything is box like, all the tiles are way too repetitive and the maps just dont seem like pokemon at all. Looks rather rushed, kinda like how you rushed to those 15 posts
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Old February 8th, 2010, 09:36 AM
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Thx for your opinion manI will try to improve the game!
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Old February 8th, 2010, 10:19 AM
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Pokemon Flower Paradise
Route 1
No route map is that rigid and grid like in it's structure, and as a result it looks completely unnatural.

Take a look at any of the routes from the games and you'll find that patches of grass usually aren't completely square in shape, nor are the maps a large box with little in the way of decoration and obstacles allowing the player to walk straight through the map. I'd also say as a result of it's size it appears barren and full of very little.
You also seem to be letting the player cross the map without being made to walk in the grass once, which seems to defeat the point of the tall grass.
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Old February 8th, 2010, 03:40 PM
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I believe that the route 1 map could be improved by simply making it snake from one side to another and force the players to go through the grass. Either that or provide an alternate, longer route from Point A to Point B that doesn't involve as much grass and a shorter one that does.

EDIT:
Yeah, your new Route 1 map does a much better job.
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Old March 7th, 2010, 05:52 AM
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Guys,the thread is dead,cause i deleted by accident the game's folder,i am so irresponsible,anyway i am developing a new game,a ruby remake,i will post a thread soon!i will do my best
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Old February 15th, 2011, 09:29 AM
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You know, this has happened to me a few times in the past. I just re-ownload the last official releasefrom my own site and start from there again.
With freewebs I could make direct download links that have used repeatedly.

Just backup your work and you'll be fine.
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Old February 15th, 2011, 12:00 PM
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Next time please look at the date of the last post to make sure you're not reviving a thread.

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