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Old August 7th, 2011, 10:19 AM
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VelocityQ's RP thread is denied.
You describe the academy pretty well but there is no real background story. The RP feels substance-less. Please add some kind of story for the players to imagine themselves in, and describe why there are criminals there. Incorporate them into the plot?
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Old August 11th, 2011, 03:52 PM
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buddymps99 RP thread is denied.
You lack any kind of storyline, you don't have a sign up sheet and your spelling and grammar is quite poor. I can see that you're new here, so I suggest that you maybe reread the rules (which can be accessed here!) and perhaps have a look through the roleplays that are already up as a rough guide of what you need for an accepted roleplay!
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Old August 11th, 2011, 11:55 PM
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MasterLink742's RP is denied.
The idea is interesting enough, though you haven't really specified what exactly the plot is, what exactly the setting is, what is happening in this universe nor what the characters are going to do in it. I know with parallel universes, people like keeping the world mysterious so the players can find out on their journey but a few 'whys' and 'hows' incorporated into it would be fantastic, so players know exactly what their signing up to!


And now, MasterLink742, your RP is accepted!
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Old August 14th, 2011, 12:05 AM
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luigimario84's RP thread is declined.
There's no plot, no proper sign up sheet and your grammar, spelling and punctuation is very poor. I suggest reading over the rules thoroughly.

Miss Doronjo's RP is accepted! Sounds interesting! :D
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Old August 15th, 2011, 02:16 AM
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MasterLink742's OOC thread is accepted!

TheFinalWatchman's RP thread is accepted! EXPELLIARMUS!

Roserade's OOC/SU thread is accepted, provided you edit your rules and add in a rating. But it does look very interesting indeed!

Yagerbomb's OOC/SU thread is accepted! May the force be with you.
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Old August 16th, 2011, 01:57 AM
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The Final Watchman's and Miss Doronjo's OOC/SU threads are accepted!
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Old August 18th, 2011, 02:05 AM
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luigimario84's 'Legendary catcher' RP is declined.
You don't have a rating for one, and two, your plot is fairly vague. There's not much detail on the 'why's and 'how's on the plot. More details, please!

RubberKid's RP is declined.
As interesting as the plot sounds, you have quite poor grammar and punctuation, which is a must when posting anything in these boards. Try reposting again, and adding in a rules section too!

luigimario84's 'Seperation' RP is accepted, but do keep in mind about your punctuation and grammar. Good luck with your first RP!
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Old August 19th, 2011, 05:32 AM
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Fuyu's OOC/SU thread is accepted!

Kiyoshi the Polar Bear's RP and OOC/SU threads are accepted! Just remember to add in your rating when you get to it next, like you said.
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Old August 21st, 2011, 04:57 AM
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chef30's RP is accepted! Just keep in mind your spelling, okay?

Fuyu's IC thread is accepted!

Blayze~'s RP is accepted!

Scarf Blade's OOC/SU thread is accepted! Though, being Elfen Lied (and the amount of violence the series has), maybe to put a suggested age against the M, please.
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Old August 23rd, 2011, 01:54 AM
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Xlugon Pyro's RP is accepted! Such a well developed plot for your first RP! Good luck!

Miss Doronjo's RP and OOC/SU thread is accepted! Just add in a rules section, like you said!

Blayze~'s OOC/SU thread is accepted!
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Old August 25th, 2011, 05:34 PM
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Moogles' OOC/SU is accepted!

Roserade's RP is accepted! Thanks for fixing that up.

Stingray's RP and OOC/SU is accepted! Though, I will add the background story is a little vague. Would you like to add some background story to each individual district as well? It's not compulsory, but it will help your players understand the universe a little more.

Legendarian Mistress' RP is accepted!
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Old August 28th, 2011, 05:55 PM
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Legendarian Mistress and Roserade's OOC/SU threads are accepted!

zapdos926's RP is accepted!

Eight's RP is accepted!
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Old August 30th, 2011, 01:05 AM
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toptheworld's RP is accepted!

Aura Rift's RP is accepted, provided you edit in a rating as soon as you can!

Xlugon Pyro's OOC/SU thread and Eight's IC thread are accepted.

Tomandgreen's OOC/SU and RP threads are declined.
Your RP has barely any story whatsoever! This kind of... roleplay, I guess that's what it is, is probably better off in the Other Trivia section as it's not one for a hard story, with more of a gimmick in it than a plot.

PkMnTrainer Yellow's OOC thread is accepted! I'll go edit those things in the IC now, alright!
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Old August 30th, 2011, 01:16 AM
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And just as I finish up, a new roleplay pops in. Miss Doronjo's RP is accepted!
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Old August 30th, 2011, 05:30 PM
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toptheworld's OOC/SU thread is accepted!

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' RP is deni-- haha, no, I'm just kidding. Definitely accepted!
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Old August 31st, 2011, 03:14 PM
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Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' IC thread is accepted!
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Old September 2nd, 2011, 06:41 PM
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jasonwolf's Generations has been declined.
I really did like the spooky aura with the music but, as interesting as it is, the story lacks depth for what is happening now with the world. What makes this different from the other journey roleplays? Do you have any twists planned for later on? The start is really great, it's just... missing something!

Supervegeta's Avatar: The Last Airbender- Chaos Uprising OOC/SU is accepted!
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Old September 4th, 2011, 02:25 AM
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Tomandgreen's To Arceus With Puns and OOC thread are accepted!
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Old September 4th, 2011, 06:35 PM
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Skymin's UNDERGROUND: The Kanto Chronicles is accepted!
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Old September 6th, 2011, 04:43 AM
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Blaziken15's Journy to the Distortion World is accepted!
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Old September 9th, 2011, 05:23 AM
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Hayzel's (Tobenamed) Region is denied.

First of all, you really should have a few things confirmed before you post, such as the name of the region and the professor's name. If you need help naming things, you should post a post in the Roleplay Discussion Thread and see what everyone else says. You might get a few suggestions, just make sure you don't flood the thread up with stuff. Second, your spoilers are all broken, so presentation-wise, your post comes up with a bunch of [/spoiler] tags. I think that's because you put a '=c.' in the spoiler tags, so you'll need to fix all that up. Third, you have almost no storyline. I know it's a new region, but maybe you could put a small backstory about how the region was found, who the players are, what's happening in the region at the moment etc. Gives players a little insight in what they are actually signing up to. Fourth, you have no rules, no ratings and no sign up sheet, which are essential to all writings.

So, I suggest going through it again, editing what you need, maybe posting (in spoiler tags) some stuff to see if anyone can help you.
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Old September 11th, 2011, 05:18 AM
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Underground_Zephyr's The Will Of One Man Causes His Death is accepted! I haven't seen an actual war RP for a long time, good luck!

Nox Masque's The Mark is accepted!

Aura Rift's OOC for Humanum Familiares is accepted!
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Old September 12th, 2011, 02:05 AM
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OH MY GOD -NOCTURNAL'S WAR BETWEEN POKEMON AND HUMANS II - SEVERED BONDS IS ACCEPTED CAN WE STOP TYPING IN CAPS NOW?!?!!!?!
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Old September 15th, 2011, 05:41 PM
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ohHeyVaporeon.'s Can't break me, won't shake me. is denied.
You're lacking a rules section! So, you can either repost with one or just PM me a rules section which I can edit in, then accept!
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Old September 18th, 2011, 12:31 AM
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ohHeyVaporeon's Can't break me, won't shake me. is accepted!

The Noob Hacker's To the Last Breath is denied.
You're also lacking a rules section! Just PM me one so I can edit one in or repost your thread!
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