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Old September 21st, 2011, 12:13 PM
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Pikachu is far to tall in my opinion. The head looks great, but the body is ... there's to much of it haha. It shouldn't be as tall as the people haha. Idk, just fix the length of the body and it'll look great :3
You'd think that'd be obvious, but not for a spazz like me! Haha.



Fixed? For comparative purposes, it's 4 pixels shorter then Ash.

EDIT: And if you look below, 5 shorter then Brock.
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Old September 22nd, 2011, 01:56 PM
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No news is good news for once, since I'm guessing Pikachu's OK. And since I've overcome my crippling art block tied to Pikachu's bad job, I was able to take care of both Brock and Misty.



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Old September 22nd, 2011, 02:52 PM
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Misty's head looks kinda weird. Maybe you should re-touch the hair or something like that and the eyes are kinda big
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Old September 22nd, 2011, 03:07 PM
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Pikachu is still to tall. It's suppose to be like... 1/3 the size of Ash.
Ash looks fine.
Misty looks to manly, have her arms go down her side instead of jut out like that. And the hair on her right (our left) is to crazy. Tone it down a bit, take out some black lines, and make that whole area less prominent. Brocks hair looks unnatural, the edges are to ... straight? there's no curve.
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Old September 22nd, 2011, 07:03 PM
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Pikachu is still to tall. It's suppose to be like... 1/3 the size of Ash.
Maybe so, but I'm sticking with what I've got. Tiny Pokemon with official overworlds are never quite proportional. (Though I suppose I could push it another pixel ... )
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Ash looks fine.
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Misty looks to manly, have her arms go down her side instead of jut out like that. And the hair on her right (our left) is to crazy. Tone it down a bit, take out some black lines, and make that whole area less prominent.
Not sure I agree about the arm thing, but I'll give it a shot. Definitely going to redo the black, I thought it looked a little off, but now that I know someone else thinks so ...
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Brocks hair looks unnatural, the edges are to ... straight? there's no curve.
As you know, I've always hated his hair. I'll see what I can do.
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Old September 24th, 2011, 06:59 AM
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Recommended changes made.



Not sure how I feel about Misty's arms/Brock's hair.
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Old September 24th, 2011, 09:06 AM
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Here man, i took it upon myself to do some edits to show you what i meant.

I shortened pikachu, i took out some hair from misty, (i made it less prominent) and edited her pose so it was more lady like. Then i made brocks hair look a tad more natural. I used the darker brown to make it look like there was more curve, and edited the sides so they weren't to straight. Hope you don't mind i did this!
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Old September 24th, 2011, 11:45 AM
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No, I don't. I actually like Brock, but I'm trying to make everyone's size uniform (as per their age) ... I'm keeping Misty the way I had her though. Her hair really is pretty poofy. I did have Brock previously looking like this:



Which both makes my height mandate and is similar to your edit. It's sort of silly me to make everyone a uniform height though. I know Gary's not going to make it.
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Old October 2nd, 2011, 10:41 AM
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I like your sprites they all look fine except for pikachu, it could be a bit smaller.
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Old January 7th, 2013, 07:16 PM
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*cough* So it's been over a year. It happens, y'know?

Most recent update to my ever fabulous...

KANTO ANIME PROJECT



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ASH SHEET (KANTO)

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Old January 7th, 2013, 10:59 PM
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Oh wonderful, that means I get to come yell at you at misplaced pixels >:D

To much hair on the left side of Misty's head, take a few pixels off?
Left side of Jesses hair isn't rounded enough, sticks out to far I think.

Everything else looks good :)
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Old January 8th, 2013, 03:41 PM
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Oh wonderful, that means I get to come yell at you at misplaced pixels >:D
Nuuuuu!

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To much hair on the left side of Misty's head, take a few pixels off?
You keep telling me this. I shall investigate.

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Left side of Jesses hair isn't rounded enough, sticks out to far I think.
Yeah. I'll get on that.

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Everything else looks good :)
Welcome back!
Thanks, man! Good to know there's still some of the ol' folks around. Anyway, I jumped on the XY hype. So. Froakie.

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Old January 21st, 2013, 03:47 AM
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Really digging the overworlds, and I like the style. It's refreshing, different from the usual "chubby" overworld sprites from earlier gens.
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Old January 25th, 2013, 10:33 PM
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Your spriting skills have come quite a far way!

Ash looks much better now that his legs aren't broken! (Just teasing)

I agree with Atomic on Jessie's hair. It just has a weird hiccup in the flow on the left side. As for Misty, it does not look bad, but I think Atomic is right, you could probably give her a bit of a hair cut... it's just a bit busy is all.

The new Froakie looks great, of course. The only thing that is bothering me is the black pixels (that I highlighted in red).



The upper one I think looks more congruent with your shading in the gray, while the other two, I'm not sure of... the bottom left pixel makes that edge look to sharp, and the one to the upper right of it seems to out of place as a black pixel. I tried the gray... but I'm not sure if I liked that any better... so I guess that's your call (Then again, who am I to say what you should or shouldn't do... the old-fashioned spriter I am )

Regardless, I'm so glad (and proud) to see that you're still spriting and have become quite accomplished! I'm very impressed that you have stock with your Kanto OW project, and have progressively made them better and better! You have far exceeded my level of spriting! I might have to whip a little something up, since I'm being put on the shelf by some of these newer folks, and you
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Old March 13th, 2013, 04:34 PM
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So ... I've been incredibly busy as of late. Spring musical, college application ****, Ultimate practice. Anyway, I'm back. Don't have much to show to prove it, but to prove that I plan on sticking around, I fixed Jessie. I think. (Also re-colored Togepi.)

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Old March 17th, 2013, 08:29 PM
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Alright. More characters added! Also recolored Ritchie's hat. Not sure I'm happy with Nurse Joy's thingy, but it's 12:30 AM, so it'll do for now.



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Old March 22nd, 2013, 09:21 PM
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Added Flint, Forrest, The Sensational Sisters, and Todd Snap. Also edited Nurse Joy.



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Old March 23rd, 2013, 09:32 AM
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Misty still has to much hair. Left side (our left)
Jesses hair still isn't round enough on the left side.
Cassidy is pretty good.

The rest are all pretty good, Todds hair doesn't look right, but I wouldn't know how to go about fixing it lol
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Old March 26th, 2013, 08:05 PM
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DERP. No wonder Jessie doesn't look better, I fixed the wrong side of her hair. I'll see what I can do about that. Also, I like Misty the way she is, I'm not going to change her. And yeah, Todd is off. I think his hair is a little flat now that I look at it in hindsight. I'll get around to that sometime.

Anyway. Some minor updates. Added Chansey and fixed Lily's hair.



Also. The Sensational Sisters in swimsuits. For funzies.

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Old March 26th, 2013, 08:15 PM
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Why wouldn't you fix Misty? She doesn't look right... She doesn't have two clumps of hair below her ear, those should be taken out lol.

Chansey looks good. May I use it? :)
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Old March 27th, 2013, 02:23 PM
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It looks pretty accurate to me, she does definitely have tufts sticking out around there. Perhaps this better?



And since you asked so nicely, why not. Make sure to give credit, blah, blah. Also. Alternate Flint costume. Just so this post isn't too empty.

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Old March 29th, 2013, 09:09 AM
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Alright. Added the remaining Gym Leaders.



Still gotta do something about Jessie and Todd. E4 comes next.
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Old March 30th, 2013, 07:49 AM
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Something about Sabrina is bothering me. I'm not sure what is is, exactly. I guess her face looks a little squashed or something compared to her body. These are looking pretty nice so far, though.
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Old March 30th, 2013, 12:50 PM
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Mkay, well I don't really know what do about that as that's pretty much what she looks like. So...

*cough* Anyway. Ran into some art block working on the E4 so I redid my Mewtwo Stikes Back Overworlds to match my current style.



Tada!
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Old March 31st, 2013, 06:01 AM
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Your sprites are absolutely superb. I really love the overworlds, but the scratches are incredible as well!
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