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Old September 19th, 2011, 06:45 PM
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ohHeyVaporeon.'s OOC is accepted!

Nideous's Birth of Legends and it's OOC/SU are accepted!
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Old September 22nd, 2011, 05:03 PM
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Sorry about the delays, guys. My brother has recently been on school holidays and has had a real hankering to play TF2 so it's been a little hard to kick him off. At the moment, I'm on my mum's laptop, BREAKING THE RULES! <:

Actionhero112's Roaming Tides is accepted!

Blue Rose's Terra Region: An Adventure Awaits For You! is declined.
There's no rating! And no sign-up sheet either, but I suspect you'll put that in after you've finished with the reservation period? Or, if you've forgotten it entirely, that's ok too. Just PM or VM me the rating and/or the sign-up sheet or repost it.

Blue Rose's Terra Region: An Adventure Awaits For You! is accepted!

shinysweety's Pokemon: A New World is declined.
Again, no rating. Just PM or VM it to me or repost the roleplay.

Silver Rogue's Dragon's Breath and OOC accepted!
I started just trying to edit out all of the spoiler tags, but because you probably did this in firefox, all of the coding was just EVERYWHERE. So, I copied and pasted the whole lot and just re-formatted it all. I hope that's okay with you. d: If it's not what you want, you can just edit it yourself.

luigimario84's Zombie Uprising is declined.
Your RP lacks any kind of real storyline. At least give the players a background of why the apocalypse started, why they survived, how they ended up where they are, why they were asleep etc etc.
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Old September 24th, 2011, 02:23 AM
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Supervegeta's IC thread is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s Left Unsolved... is accepted! Very different and unique, good luck with it!

And finally, -Nocturnal's IC thread is den- ACCEPTED, OF COURSE. Let the second war begin!
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Old September 25th, 2011, 12:30 AM
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shinysweety's Pokemon: A New World is accepted! Thanks to chef30 for that rating!

~Genevieve~'s OOC is accepted!

HJLFgamer's... whatever that was is definitely declined. Head over to the ROM section, dude.

Blue Rose's OOC is accepted!

Fearless Love's Darkness Reigns is accepted! All I gotta say is... WHOA!

雷影 イチロ's Atlantis Arising and the OOC are accepted!
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Old September 28th, 2011, 04:28 AM
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Fuyu's Digimon: Synchro Awakening is accepted!
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Old September 29th, 2011, 10:51 PM
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Xilfer123's Final Fantasy Tactics: Aftermath is accepted!

luigimario84's Land of dead and OOC is accepted!

PkMnTrainer Yellow's (and LawOfTheLand's) Down with the Crown is accepted!

AceOfChance's A Pokémon Journey: The Road to Victory and OOC is accepted!
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Old October 2nd, 2011, 05:36 PM
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mzmingle's Pokemon - Gym Leaders Adventure is declined.
Can I have just a little more storyline? Perhaps why they retired, or why they all retired at the same time or why Team Rochaer surfaced? Yeah, gonna need a little more storyline than five sentences sorry.

Nintendoshs's Jhoto: Zombiemon is declined.
Again, there's not much to the storyline. Why did the apocalypse start? Why is that team creating zombies? You need a little more depth to it.

Fuyu's IC is accepted!
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Old October 6th, 2011, 09:05 PM
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Nintendoshs's Jhoto: Zombiemon is declined.
This is better than last time, but the storyline is still lacking. Why can Entei/Suicune/Raikou turn into humans? How did they come to start the alliance? You still haven't explained why that team started the apocalypse. Was it a disease? Where did the plague start? How did it start? Please try and go into detail and such, unless you want to make plot twists and such.

ohHeyVaporeon.'s It Begins And Ends In The Stadium. and OOC/SU is accepted!
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Old October 8th, 2011, 06:11 AM
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miley810's Forced Adventure is declined.
It has potential, but there's nothing that really explains why anything happened. Why was Team Diamond focusing on the school? Why was it so important for them to be prepared for an attack? Please go over your plot and try put more detail into it.

Fearless Love's IC is accepted.
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Old October 10th, 2011, 07:42 PM
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Nintendoshs' Jhoto: Zombiemon is accepted!
This is a lot better, thanks for fixing it up.

雷影 イチロ's Focus Shift: A New Awakening and its OOC are accepted!

Aquataris' Dimension's End is declined.
Like I said before, this has potential but the plot is extremely hard to read. I very much suggest you read it aloud (like, actually talking) and try and fix up all the grammatical errors. Most of the sentences are too flimsy and hard to put together. Seriously, read it aloud and rewrite the plot.


Miss Doronjo's Disagea: A Darkness is Reborn is accepted, d00d.
psst, you spelt disgaea wrong like... everywhere lol
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Old October 12th, 2011, 06:17 AM
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The warden's Pokémon: The Deliverance of a Region and OOC are accepted!

Nakuzami's Plague is accepted!

electrabulb's... whatever that was is denied.
Roleplays nowadays need a decent storyline to progress. Yours has none at all.
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Old October 15th, 2011, 05:52 AM
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Aquataris' Dimension's End is accepted!

Silver Armaldo's The Pokemon Poachers is declined.
This has potential, but needs something more to the storyline. When did the poaching start? How did the black market form? When did the law enforcement find out about it? Go into detail about it!

Miss Doronjo's (and Fuyu's) goddess of a remnant; is accepted!
Very cool sign up sheet, very cool!

GameOver1375's (and Xilfer123's) Final Fantasy Tactics A3: The World of Chaos is accepted!

miley810's Cardcaptoring is accepted!
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Old October 16th, 2011, 05:38 PM
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Game Over1375's Dragonball: The Future Awaits! is accepted!

Pirate Hunter's The Three Energies is accepted!
Very unique, very cool! Something new a lot of us haven't seen before! Awesome!

juniebug910's My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic--Ruins of the Elements is accepted!

aspie3000's Dystopia and OOC are accepted!
Ahahahaha. We're not breaking the fourth wall, are we? XD
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Old October 19th, 2011, 07:04 PM
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Fuyu's (and Miss Doronjo's) IC is accepted!

Diamond1304's Trackers: Avatar Legacy is accepted!

DarkAngel91's Hunt For The Seven Sages is declined.
If this is a sequel and I happened to be a newcomer, I would have no idea what you were talking about when you said that the seven sages were captured. You need to put an overview of what happened in the last roleplay.

THAT WONDERFUL PIXY GUY's Pokémon: Sinnoh's End is accepted! This is a revamp, amirite?

and oh my god, Nakuzami's and MichaelatheUchiha's IC is accepted. STOP PESTERING ME NOW!
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Old October 22nd, 2011, 04:11 AM
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Nideous' Pokemon MMO: Beta Testers is accepted!

zein's Sketch-The haunted house is declined.
Unfortunately at PC, we don't do the "random roleplay with short posts" anymore. If you want this to proceed, you must have a decent storyline, not to mention a sign up and a rating.

Game Over1375's IC thread is accepted!

darkpokeball's Hidden is declined.
Well, you don't have a rules section. It's fine apart from that, though I would suggest you add more about this 'Chubu' region and Team Doomsday and backstory on the crystals.

Yagerbomb's The Council Revolt is accepted!
I've seen longer! d:
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Old October 25th, 2011, 02:23 AM
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darkpokeball's Pokemon: Seven Crystals is accepted!
Thanks for fixing that up!

Game Over1375's (and Xilfer123's) IC thread is accepted!

Pirate Hunter's IC thread is accepted!
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Old October 27th, 2011, 11:59 PM
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Strikit's EXTERMINATION is accepted!

Nideous' IC is accepted!

chef30's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Realms is accepted!
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Old October 31st, 2011, 05:02 PM
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SniDERPvy's Pokémon Middle School is accepted!
Just a note, OOC and SU threads go into the Roleplay Lounge.
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Old November 5th, 2011, 11:06 PM
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shinysweety's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Red Rescue Team of Amidala is accepted!

Konekodemon's... thing is denied.
Roleplays in these boards nowadays need plots, sign up sheets, rules etc. You might wanna check out the rest of the roleplays here to see how it's done, or check out the rules. You can ask questions like these in the Roleplay Discussion Thread.

Aura Rift's Percy Jackson: War of the Gods is accepted!
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Old November 10th, 2011, 02:53 PM
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Starfuzzy's Eeveelutions RP is declined!
Nowadays, roleplays here require a storyline, a rating, a sign up sheet. We don't have simple roleplays like that here anymore.

-DeepImpact-'s OOC is accepted!

milktankRancher's The God's Plaything is accepted!
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Old November 15th, 2011, 04:31 PM
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Supervegeta's Pokemon Odyssey: A New Beginning is accepted!

~Genevieve~'s Avatar the Last Airbender: Return of Sozin's Comet is accepted!

Detonias' PKMN Reloaded is declined.
Roleplays need more than just a story; you need a sign up, a rating, a rules section and better-than-average spelling, punctuation and grammatical... Stuff.

shinysweety's IC thread is accepted!
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Old November 18th, 2011, 10:32 PM
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shinysweety's (and ShinyDiamond's) Animal DNA Project is accepted!
Haha this is totally not inspired by Tokyo Mew Mew, is it?

ShadyVXKuriboh5's Pokemon Gikinka Academy is declined.
This is obviously a copy and paste from the Gijinka Academy that died in September. All storylines must be your own, not copied from someone else.

milktankRancher's OOC is accepted!

Detonias'... thingy is declined.
As I said, you need more than that! You need sign up templates, you need a rules section, a rating, grammar and stuff.
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Old November 23rd, 2011, 05:43 AM
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ShadyVXKuriboh5's Digimon: Digital Academy is declined.
The idea is on the right track, though you don't spend a lot of time explaining what this new 'evil force' is or what exactly is this special DNA or the other small stuff. Spend less time worrying about the subjects and more time worrying about the back story and storyline, ok?

Conjurer's The Fal Evets is accepted!

ladyshiro's Akabara Chronicles is declined.
Your storyline is simply not enough. Who is this Horned King and how did he rise to power? Bad guys just don't pop out of no where! Who's the Mage King? Why does the Horned King want to kill everyone? You need to go more in depth!

Tauros14's Pokemon: Darkness Arising is declined.
Again, storyline. Why and how did all those teams join up? What exactly did they do to deserve an apposing alliance? When writing these things, keep asking yourself the same questions! Who, what, when, where, why and how! Also, you don't have a rating.
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Old November 27th, 2011, 04:40 AM
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Tauros14's Pokemon: Darkness Arising and OOC/SU is accepted!
I would suggest you look over it though, as the coding has broken in many places and using the iOS app makes it seem not what it really is. Try opening it in Safari, logging in and looking at it properly.

dajman1996's Digimon System X3 (Phase 1) is declined.
It's very good so far, you're just lacking one thing; what do the characters have to do with the plot? You have to explain how your player's characters will be implemented into the roleplay and what role they actually play. If you fix that up, it's all good to go!

Conjurer's OOC thread is accepted!

MasterLink742's A War on Magic is accepted!
I closed Lost Memories since it was still ok to be revived by you. We can't have the same roleplay running at the same time, can we!

mzmingle's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon - Winter Wonders is declined.
It's lacking in storyline. How did this crobat get this power to call evil pokemon? Who did it call? How was this portal created? Please go into more detail!

PokemasterX's The Rise of the Olympians' Champions is declined.
Unfortunately, this is all too similar to Aura Rift's Percy Jackson roleplay. Unless you can think of an extremely original storyline, I'm gonna say no to this.

Slowprincess18's ... thing? is declined.
In these boards, all roleplays must be at a certain standard, including original storyline, ratings, rules sections, sign up templates and just have good grammar and punctuation. Your submitted roleplay pretty much has none of these. If you want to submit a roleplay in these boards, you'll need to read the rules and review other roleplays to get a good idea of what to do.

Stingray's First Contact is accepted!

Breezy.'s The Whirl Cup is accepted!
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Old November 29th, 2011, 06:08 AM
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SeekerOfDarkness' Legend of Zelda: Orchestra of Heroes is accepted!

miley810's Legendary Rebels 2: The Human's war is pending.
Just to make sure, you finished your last roleplay so I can close it and its OOC? I read the last few posts of the IC but I wasn't sure if it was finished for reals.
accepted!

Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' *Foreigners is accepted!
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