Check to See if Your Roleplay has been Accepted (v.2)
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Sorry about the delays, guys. My brother has recently been on school holidays and has had a real hankering to play TF2 so it's been a little hard to kick him off. At the moment, I'm on my mum's laptop, BREAKING THE RULES! <:
Blue Rose's Terra Region: An Adventure Awaits For You! is declined.
There's no rating! And no sign-up sheet either, but I suspect you'll put that in after you've finished with the reservation period? Or, if you've forgotten it entirely, that's ok too. Just PM or VM me the rating and/or the sign-up sheet or repost it.
Blue Rose's Terra Region: An Adventure Awaits For You! is accepted!
shinysweety's Pokemon: A New World is declined.
Again, no rating. Just PM or VM it to me or repost the roleplay.
Silver Rogue's Dragon's Breath and OOCaccepted!
I started just trying to edit out all of the spoiler tags, but because you probably did this in firefox, all of the coding was just EVERYWHERE. So, I copied and pasted the whole lot and just re-formatted it all. I hope that's okay with you. d: If it's not what you want, you can just edit it yourself.
luigimario84's Zombie Uprising is declined.
Your RP lacks any kind of real storyline. At least give the players a background of why the apocalypse started, why they survived, how they ended up where they are, why they were asleep etc etc.
mzmingle's Pokemon - Gym Leaders Adventure is declined.
Can I have just a little more storyline? Perhaps why they retired, or why they all retired at the same time or why Team Rochaer surfaced? Yeah, gonna need a little more storyline than five sentences sorry.
Nintendoshs's Jhoto: Zombiemon is declined.
Again, there's not much to the storyline. Why did the apocalypse start? Why is that team creating zombies? You need a little more depth to it.
Nintendoshs's Jhoto: Zombiemon is declined.
This is better than last time, but the storyline is still lacking. Why can Entei/Suicune/Raikou turn into humans? How did they come to start the alliance? You still haven't explained why that team started the apocalypse. Was it a disease? Where did the plague start? How did it start? Please try and go into detail and such, unless you want to make plot twists and such.
miley810's Forced Adventure is declined.
It has potential, but there's nothing that really explains why anything happened. Why was Team Diamond focusing on the school? Why was it so important for them to be prepared for an attack? Please go over your plot and try put more detail into it.
Aquataris' Dimension's End is declined.
Like I said before, this has potential but the plot is extremely hard to read. I very much suggest you read it aloud (like, actually talking) and try and fix up all the grammatical errors. Most of the sentences are too flimsy and hard to put together. Seriously, read it aloud and rewrite the plot.
Silver Armaldo's The Pokemon Poachers is declined.
This has potential, but needs something more to the storyline. When did the poaching start? How did the black market form? When did the law enforcement find out about it? Go into detail about it!
DarkAngel91's Hunt For The Seven Sages is declined.
If this is a sequel and I happened to be a newcomer, I would have no idea what you were talking about when you said that the seven sages were captured. You need to put an overview of what happened in the last roleplay.
zein's Sketch-The haunted house is declined.
Unfortunately at PC, we don't do the "random roleplay with short posts" anymore. If you want this to proceed, you must have a decent storyline, not to mention a sign up and a rating.
darkpokeball's Hidden is declined.
Well, you don't have a rules section. It's fine apart from that, though I would suggest you add more about this 'Chubu' region and Team Doomsday and backstory on the crystals.
Konekodemon's... thing is denied.
Roleplays in these boards nowadays need plots, sign up sheets, rules etc. You might wanna check out the rest of the roleplays here to see how it's done, or check out the rules. You can ask questions like these in the Roleplay Discussion Thread.
shinysweety's (and ShinyDiamond's) Animal DNA Project is accepted!
Haha this is totally not inspired by Tokyo Mew Mew, is it?
ShadyVXKuriboh5's Pokemon Gikinka Academy is declined.
This is obviously a copy and paste from the Gijinka Academy that died in September. All storylines must be your own, not copied from someone else.
ShadyVXKuriboh5's Digimon: Digital Academy is declined.
The idea is on the right track, though you don't spend a lot of time explaining what this new 'evil force' is or what exactly is this special DNA or the other small stuff. Spend less time worrying about the subjects and more time worrying about the back story and storyline, ok?
ladyshiro's Akabara Chronicles is declined.
Your storyline is simply not enough. Who is this Horned King and how did he rise to power? Bad guys just don't pop out of no where! Who's the Mage King? Why does the Horned King want to kill everyone? You need to go more in depth!
Tauros14's Pokemon: Darkness Arising is declined.
Again, storyline. Why and how did all those teams join up? What exactly did they do to deserve an apposing alliance? When writing these things, keep asking yourself the same questions! Who, what, when, where, why and how! Also, you don't have a rating.
Tauros14's Pokemon: Darkness Arising and OOC/SU is accepted!
I would suggest you look over it though, as the coding has broken in many places and using the iOS app makes it seem not what it really is. Try opening it in Safari, logging in and looking at it properly.
dajman1996's Digimon System X3 (Phase 1) is declined.
It's very good so far, you're just lacking one thing; what do the characters have to do with the plot? You have to explain how your player's characters will be implemented into the roleplay and what role they actually play. If you fix that up, it's all good to go!
MasterLink742's A War on Magic is accepted!
I closed Lost Memories since it was still ok to be revived by you. We can't have the same roleplay running at the same time, can we!
mzmingle's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon - Winter Wonders is declined.
It's lacking in storyline. How did this crobat get this power to call evil pokemon? Who did it call? How was this portal created? Please go into more detail!
PokemasterX's The Rise of the Olympians' Champions is declined.
Unfortunately, this is all too similar to Aura Rift's Percy Jackson roleplay. Unless you can think of an extremely original storyline, I'm gonna say no to this.
Slowprincess18's ... thing? is declined.
In these boards, all roleplays must be at a certain standard, including original storyline, ratings, rules sections, sign up templates and just have good grammar and punctuation. Your submitted roleplay pretty much has none of these. If you want to submit a roleplay in these boards, you'll need to read the rules and review other roleplays to get a good idea of what to do.
miley810's Legendary Rebels 2: The Human's war is pending.
Just to make sure, you finished your last roleplay so I can close it and its OOC? I read the last few posts of the IC but I wasn't sure if it was finished for reals.accepted!