I don't know....

[REvan342]

The dog's on the rooftop,
The cat's holdin' a dirty mop,
The old man in the corner won't stop,
And im feelin' the urge to watch them die.

I'm wipin' the blood off my hands.
I'm so scared i can't stand,
On my own two feet and,
there nothin' to do but cry.

This is just a small poem i wrote for creative writing class, so tell me what you think.