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Old April 2nd, 2012 (06:15 PM). Edited April 3rd, 2012 by Bassiroth.
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I have no clue where anyone is anymore ;

But mah character Randall is still n Eterna Foest.

Speakng of characters, here's a new app:



Nbee:
Joe

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Age (10-13):
13

Sex (Male or Female):
Male

Appearance (A picture can be provided nstead of a description if you so wish.): Mnimum of 3 lnes if no picture is provided.

As a hudawg, Joe's height is at 5' 10", makng him very tall compisd ta most othar kids his age. He has tan skn, green eyes, and dark grey hair. He usually wears a tattered white T-shirt and a pair of blue tattered shorts ta go wit it. He's also very physically fit fo his age. Like literally, you look at him and you thnk he goes ta tha gym daily. He usually tends ta keep a very serious expression on his face most of tha time.

When merged wit his Pokespirit however, he doesn't look anythng like tha hudawg that he is/was. His body gits wrapped up n a dark energy, and when tha energy disipates he's wearng a suit of armor that looks EXACTLY like a Golurk from heezee ta tae, as well as ganng a few feet of height (makng him now 9' 09") and ncreased weight as well, but not nearly as heavy as a real Golurk. If anythng, most of tha "armor" is hollow.

Personality (How does yo character act and react ta othars? Thair mental state? Flaws and/or personal weaknesses?): 4 lnes mnimum

Joe's been mostly tha strong bisly raps a lot type growng up. He usually doesn't rap or do much of anythng besides his job, and if he does speak, he usually sez very few words. He was raised n Eterna City by pisnts who use Pokespirit wielders as slaves on thair plantation, and havng been brought up wit tha mndset that Pokespirit children is nothng more than a workfoce fo tha elders, he obediently obeys his pisnts and treats tha adults wit respect as he works on tha plantation as well.

Histary (Where did yo character grow up? Who did thay grow up wit? What have tha been dong befoe dis? Any noteworthy events?): 4 lnes mnimum

Joe grew up n Eterna City wit his pisnts on a successful plantation. As tha plantation began usng Pokespirit children fo a stable workfoce, Joe was taught at an impressionable age that pokespirit children had no othar purpose othar than ta serve tha normal hudawgs of society, and has seen no reason ta have objected ta it fo a number of years. Two years ago late one night, he was called by an odd powerful foce that he couldn't quite describe. He follwed tha foce beconng ta him and left tha plantation grounds, travellng all tha way ta Mt. Coronet.

He cbee ta his senses after he tauched tha stane, and realized he had obtaned a pokespirit. He was heartbroken at first. He fell ta his knees and cried at tha alter. After some time, he realized tha best thng he could do was go back ta tha plantation and tell his pisnts tha truth. His pisnts didn't takes tha news well at first. Thay were scisd, and shocked at Joe. Thay decided though that tha safest thng thay could do fo him, as it was his own wish as well, was ta keep him on tha plantation as a worker along wit tha othar Pokespirit children. Unlike tha othars though, he obtaned special privaledges coz of his pisnts, however he risly excercised tham. Nstead, he just worked on tha plantation dong whatever his pisnts and overseers and othar adults asked of him ta do. He becbee a hollow shell of what once was a hudawg, and labeled himself as his pisnts' property.

Pokéspirit (No legendaries. Alternate color schemes is allowed.)
Species:
Golurk

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Personality (Can be as short or long as you want):
Golurk has no unique features bout his personality n truth. He just stays quiet most of tha time and obeys Joe witout question.

Moves (Maximum of 6. TM and egg moves is allowed. Thase is tha moves yo character gits when thay fuse):
Shadow Punch, Night Shade, Earthquake, Protect, Focus Punch, Ice Bebe

Openng Post (Dis will be what we use ta determne whethar yo writng skills is good enough. If accepted, you may feel free ta copy paste yo post here nta tha IC thread.): I would recommend a mnimum of 8 lnes and a maximum of 20, but it's yo choice.

Joe was busy dong some heavy liftng work taday. A new shipment of supplies had come n, and he was ta help unload tha heavy crates off tha truck. It was a tatal of twenty crates at best, each one of varyng sizes and volumes. When all of tha crates were off tha truck and on tha ground around him, tha delivery dawg drove off, and tha adult overseer wit him taday had than assigned him ta move tha crates ta tha stareroom accross tha plantation.

He didn't bothar askng why tha truck driver simply didn't drive ta that side of tha plantation ta begn wit. He had no right ta do so, plus thare really wasn't a road on that side of tha plantation. He only gave a shawt nod and n a deep voice replied, "Understaod, sir."

He picked up tha first crate, and he brought his legs up closer ta his body as he taok off and flew tawards tha stare room. It taok him roughly thirty ta foty mnutes or so ta git all tha crates from one end of tha plantation ta tha othar, as well as tha trips it taok him ta git back over ta tha othar side.

When he returned ta tha overseer, he was than assigned ta stand guard and watch over tha field thay were currently standng n, just ta make sure that no one tried ta steal any of tha crops that were ben grown. Joe gave a nod of his heezee as he reverted ta his hudawg appearance and staod thare, scannng tha field fo any potential thaif or thaives.
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Old April 12th, 2012 (06:25 PM).
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I'm sorry bout not postng... I'm thnkng of droppng from tha RP. I buggine mah character a little tao unstable and makes character nteractions hard and I don't like RPng by mahself also I prefer good characters or at least ones who thnk thay is good, and not just evil coz I can be (which was fun fo a short time). I'll have ta decide if I want ta drop completely or just drop dis character.
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Old April 12th, 2012 (07:16 PM).
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@Stngray: Eithar way is acceptable. Yeah, evil characters is ... tedious ta git nta social situations.
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Old April 29th, 2012 (01:13 PM). Edited April 30th, 2012 by プリンセスサファイア.
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Nbee: Reiko Yomukomi

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Age: 13

Sex: female

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Personality: Reiko is very sneaky and crafty tawards adults. She can spn a believable stary ta tham and has learned ta steal and pickpocket. She doesn't see herself as an evil person she just sees it as her dong what she can ta survive. Reiko knew that by stealng food and money from thugz she did still follow Shade's advice. She only stale scraps or shawt bits of food, enough fo her ta survive but not enough ta really takes a dent out of someones food supply or money. She will always feel a little guilty though even wit her distrust of adults she never believed n stealng befoe she had no choice but ta. She knew that if she didn't steal than she probably wouldn't have survived on her own. Coz she was kicked out by her pisnts Reiko doesn't trust any adults but that doesn't mean she wants ta kill tham. Reiko is also very defensive and is prepisd ta fight any time she has ta. Dis is due ta a group of bois that always picked on her and tried ta takes thngs from her. Thay just buggine her realize tha true meanng of havng ta fight ta survive. She wants ta go ta Children's City but she has heard how ruthless tha city's leader is. Reiko just wants tha world ta improve and become a better place fo everyone livng on it.

Histary: Reiko was born and raised n Jubilife City. Life growng up was good at first fo Reiko her pisnts believng that she was one of tha normal children but when she turned ten it turned out ta be different. On her tenth birthday Reiko found out she was a Pokespirit wielder and recieved her Pokespirit a Purrlon she called Shade. Her pisnts where outraged and kicked Reiko out of Jubilife city tellng her ta never return. Reiko traveled ta Eterna City knowng that city wasn't as hostile ta children. Once she gots thare Reiko spotted a ridet sellng food but she didn't have any money. She tried ta steal some but was almost caught and gots away wit nothng at all. After tha Reiko practiced non-stap ta improve her skills at sneakng and wit Shade givng advice she becbee better. After that she was able ta steal little bits of food and money ta survive. Not every day but every few days or so she dawgaged ta steal meat of which she had no idea what it was but fruit was more common fo her ta steal as well as money. Reiko survived dis way fo three years endurng tha tarment of a group of bois who just wanted ta run her life, thay always tried ta takes what she had stalen from her but she never let tham at least not witout a fight, now that's she's 13 Reiko has buggine tha decision that it was time fo her ta leave Eterna city.

Pokéspirit
Species: Liepard

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Nicknbee: Shade

Personality: Shade is Reiko's voice of reason. Her only thought is ta always look out fo what's best fo Reiko, Shade will always give Reiko advice on what is wrong and right.

Moves: Pursuit, Night Slash, Thief, Fant Attack, Shadow Ball, Sucker Punch

Othar: Reiko gans Shade's ability Limber keepng her from ben paralyzed.

Openng: Reiko sighed sittng on tha side of tha road n Eterna. She was thn and cold havng been on her own fo awhile. Next ta her on tha ground was a tn cup that she had been usng ta collect money. Some thugz were knd enough ta give it ta her, othars just passed her by witout a glance.

"Child, where is yo pisnts?" A knd voice buggine Reiko look up ta see an old wodawg wit grey hair standng n front of her.

"Mah mom is ill, and mah dad is dead" Reiko lied sezng tha practiced stary wit ease. N reality she had been kicked out of her home three years ago but dis wodawg didn't need ta know that.

"Why is you sittng on tha street than?" Tha wodawg asked kndly puttng a few dollars n tha tn cup.

"it's tha only way I can git money ta help mah mom" Reiko said standng up and thankng tha old wodawg befoe runnng off witout anothar word takng tha money she had earned wit her. Reiko sighed and taok a deep breath. That wodawg was one of tha ones who was funky ass ta her.

"Reiko maybe we should heezee ta Children's City now. If we go thare you won't have ta do dis anymore" Shade's voice rang through her mnd. Reiko sighed more spottng a group of teenage bois who where normal hudawgs but had vowed ta make her life a livng hell. Duckng nta tha Shadows quickly Reiko nodded.

"Yo right Shade" she whispered stickng ta tha shadows and she breathad out a sigh of relief as she snuck by tha thugs and gots ta tha exit of Eterna city tha direction that would lead ta Children's City.

"Good choice Rei, it's time fo us ta leave dis place" Shade praised makng Reiko smile ta herself as she left Eterna city behnd.
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Old April 29th, 2012 (05:06 PM). Edited June 14th, 2012 by machomuu.
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Nbee: Mako Reese

Nicknbee: Creed (Synchronized)

Age:11

Sex:Male

Appearance: Mako is somewhat tall fo his age. He wears a beanie that covers most of his jet black hair, though some of it hangs down n tha back. He wears a gray striped sweatshirt and rideries a pair of earphones around his neck. Mako has light brown skn and green eyes. He wears jean shorts and rubber sandals. His face naturally shows signs of fatigue due ta his embattled mnd. On his hands is black wool gloves, which he uses as a pillow when he has no place ta sleep. His sandals is slightly worn, and his dark blue socks is covered wit brown stans from tha mud he has trekked through. His hands is shawt, yet his fngernails is slightly grown out n tha case that he needs ta use tham fo combat. His arms make him seem frail due ta thair thnness, but his legs is taned as a result of his nobugginic lifestyle and lack of transport. He is thn, but not so much that he is underweight. On his back is a medium-sized black school backpack.

Personality: Naturally, Mako is a gentle, passive soul, but after ben possessed by Kraus, who often speaks devilish comdawgds and thoughts ta him, his nnocent mnd went nta turmoil. Generally, he likes ta be around othars coz Kraus' voice is suppressed, but do ta his mnd ben on tha brnk of nstability, he tends ta scis most normal thugz away. Mako loves ta read, and coz of dis he rideries around several large books n his backpack; he specifically rideries around large books coz if he fnishes all of his books he knows that he will be coerced by Kraus nta stealng more. Mako is still passive, and avoids fightng when he can, but if he is threatened and scisd ta a certan pont and he is foced ta fight, he synchronizes wit Kraus. While Mako seems frail, he harbors a surprisng beount of willpower, he has ta; Krause is his antithasis, and if Mako lets his guard down he will takes tha place of Mako's soul, killng Mako and leavng Kraus n tha cis of Mako's body. Thus, Mako has become more courageous and emotionally stronger ta prevent such a happenng.

Histary: Mako lived n a shawt hizouse n tha city of Pastaria wit his mothar, his fathar had not been present durng his life at home. Mako was an adventurous boi, but he was never allowed ta go ta far from home. His mothar, Ren, was a fishng wodawg who relied on her catch of tha day ta feed herself prior ta Mako's birth. As time went on and as tha virus spread, Mako's mothar caught less and less fish, often not ben able ta brng home enough food fo herself, resultng n her not ben able ta eat. Eventually Mako was born, which nflated tha already near fatal problem fo her and her newborn son. She was tao pure ta kill her son and tao kndhearted ta steal from othars (which was also a matter of logic, as if she started ta steal than Pastaria would just become a cesspool of crime and villany). Still, she had ta eat, so she was foced ta resort ta some less than reputable means of obtanng sustenance. She heard bout a farm that harvested stalen berry seeds of all types. It was hidden, and very few thugz knew of it. She decided ta start purchasng tha illegal berries fo what were almost exorbitant prices, and thus had ta work three jobs. Dis tare Mako up as he gots older and started ta understand that, from what he'd learned from books, havng more than two jobs wasn't normal, so he started lookng fo alternative means of obtanng food. One day, Mako heard some kids rapng bout a wealth of Feebas that were located n Mt.Coronet. Mako knew a lot bout Pokemon as, although he'd never seen one, he had read bout tham n books, and coz Ren was a fishng wodawg previously, she would bootyliciously appreciate his venture. Mako quickly ran nta his hizouse and grabbed his mothar's old harpoon and immediately left fo Mt.Coronet. Once he arrived at tha site where he heard tha sprng was located he looked left and right fo Feebas. That's when it happened. Tha mountan started ta shake, and debris and boulders started ta fall all around him. Tha mountan was collapsng. Mako lost all hope and simply closed his eyes, a tendency he had when he gots scisd. Than all was quiet. Mako opened his eyes ta see an ncredible sight, a giant crystal. Mako started tawards it, when a dark creature ran nta him and entered his body. Mako's heezee started ta hurt uncontrollably, and tha comdawgdments burned nta his mnd. Tha pan overcbee Mako, and he blacked out. When he cbee ta, he was ben dragged away wit a bag over his heezee.


Pokéspirit

Species: Deno

Nicknbee: Kraus

Personality: Kraus is a malicious spirit that preys on Mako's nnocence. He ciss not fo Mako, but nsists that he does n n an attempt ta make Mako let his guard down and takes his body, though it never works. He's a charismatic ben that uses said charisma ta nfluence Mako nta dong various acts, as well as ta drive Mako's mnd nta furthar turmoil. He is generally blissful, and is also very much a sadist and masochist.

Moves: Thief (Synchronized), Dark Pulse (Synchronized), Crunch (Synchronized), Dragon Breath, Heezeebutt

Othar: Coz he harbors so much hate fo Kraus and resents him, Mako can't actively merge wit Kraus. Fo tham ta be able ta merge, Mako must (at least temporarily) accept Kraus and leave behnd tha resentment he holds fo him. Tha problem wit dis is that Mako knows that if he lets down his guard Kraus will ndeed takes over his body. Even still, thare is certan circumstances when thay do merge, but coz Mako worries what might happen if Kraus lets out his full power do ta his malicious mndset, he is only able ta use bout three fourths of his full strength and is unable ta use Dark-Type moves. Nstead, he must synchronize wit Kraus ta be able ta use tham as well, as well as ta utilize his full strength. When synchronized, his hair grows down ta his nose, he becomes temporarily blnd, and his skn gans a subtle blue tnge. He becomes two ta three times stronger than he is normally, and his senses of hearng, smell, and most of all, tauch sensitivity, all ncrease exponentially. When synchronized Mako goes under tha nbee Creed, an alias created by Mako's slave owner befoe he died. Creed is a sadistic ben that honors charisma and cunnng above all else. Slightly masochistic, Creed shows remorse only ta those who eithar show promise or those who is similar ta Mako, who he ciss fo above all else. Coz of dis, Creed comes of as a character wit twisted morals, and n dawgy peaks of his persona he is, but he sees his malignance as a subjective matter. Creed can stay n control of Mako's body fo a variable beount of time, dependng on certan factars such as Mako's state of mnd prior ta his synchronization as well as his emotional well ben n tha sbee scenario. Mako cannot evolve due ta havng ngested an Everstane that was crushed up and mixed nta some Oran Berry Juice served ta him by his slave owner.

Openng Post: When Mako stapped, tha bag over his heezee was removed ta reveal a slightly heavy dawg. "Dis is yo new home," said tha dawg. "By tha way, tha nbee's Kalvn, Kalvn Jeer." Mako sat up and looked directly aheezee ta see a shawt buildng. Tao disoriented ta make sense of tha situation as well as ta ask questions, Mako opened tha door ta tha shawt buildng. Nside was a bed, a fireplace, a dresser, and a bookshelf. Witout sezng a word, Mako buggine his way over ta tha bed and promptly fell asleep. Tha next day, he woke up ta tha sound of a chirpng Pidgey- or what he thought was one, when actuality it was an alarm clock on tha dresser next ta his bed. He slapped tha tap of tha alarm clock and it becbee silent. He sat up, rubbed his eyes, and looked around. Dis...isn't mah room, he thought ta himself. He than recalled tha events of tha previous night and becbee scisd. He started ta panic, and when he realized that that wouldn't help tha situation, he becbee calm.

Tha door ta his room hit tha wall, creatng a loud, metallic sound. "Okay, time ta git ta work," Kalvn said n a rathar chipper dawgner.

"Um...where be I?" Mako asked. "D-ya know what happened ta mah mom?"

"Oh, don't worry bout that," tha dawg replied. "As of taday, I'm all tha fbeily you'll need. Dis is yo new home." Mako's eyes widened and he becbee almost statue-like. Befoe long, tha dawg grabbed Mako and brought him outside. "Okay, git ta work," he said as he threw a hoe at Mako. What's happenng? Work? Dis farm needs at least five thugz ta takes cis of, he thought. He looked up at Kalvn wit whimperng eyes, and Kalvn's expression turned from blissful ta disgusted. Kalvn left witout sezng a word, and Mako picked up tha hoe and started tillng tha field.

Weeks passed and Mako started ta realize that dis was tha "slavery" thng he learned bout. As time went on tha slave owner treated Mako worse and worse. Most of tha food went ta Kalvn, though Mako didn't starve; Kalvn gave Mako enough that he wouldn't go hungry. Kalvn didn't feel he needed ta appease Mako anymore coz he had established himself as Mako's only home, drillng nta his heezee that he would not be able ta leave or else he would die. Mako believed dis from tha depths of his heart, and never attempted ta leave. Coz of dis, any anger Kalvn felt fo whatever reason he taok out on Mako. N time Mako started ta hate Kalvn.

On a cold Sunday afternoon after havng been beaten one day, Mako repeated ta himself tha words, "I hate Kalvn, I HATE Kalvn". N reply, a disembodied voice said, "Well than why don't you just go aheezee and kill him?" Mako looked around ta fnd tha voice, askng who it was. "Nbee's Kraus, at yo service." He said n a rathar casual and mellow tane. "Now bout dis pickle you- or should I sez, we fnd ourselves n, just kill tha dawg and be done wit it."

"I won't kill him, no matter what."

"Fne than, but at tha very least let me help wit tha farm, you look like you need a rest."

"O-okay..." Mako said, still unsure of if he should trust dis unknown entity. Suddenly, everythng went dark. Mako picked up tha hoe and heezeeed fo tha slave owner's hizouse. Mako knocked on tha door, and Kalvn answered.

"What d-ya want?" He said n a disgusted tane. "I tald you ta git back ta work! Those bruises is nothng." Mako than taok tha hoe, brought it behnd his heezee, and planted it nta Kalvn's chest.

"Creeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!" Kalvn yelled, blood splatterng n every direction. Mako started laughng uncontrollably.

"Cree, what a hilarious cry", Mako said, still laughng hysterically. "Y'know dad, I like that nbee. Creed! What a wonderful nbee! I'm thankful fo that alone, if nothng else!" Kalvn drifted away nta tha River Styx and once his eyes closed, Creed left tha farm, settng fire ta it on departure.
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Old April 29th, 2012 (05:51 PM).
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@Sapphire: Hmm.. well, no offense but dis is very, very short. I might recommend that you expand on thngs a bit more? One of tha major reasons hudawgity has gone down tha tailet is tha lack of enough food ta feed tha population, and a complete lack of any meat that doesn't come from cannibalism of some sort. Perhaps you could expand tha personality / histary field explanng how yo character dealt wit dis? Did she simply steal ta survive? How did she feel knowng that stealng what little food was spread between thugz was effectively possibly killng someone? Did she even thnk of that, or did it never occur ta her? Just tryng ta help, but I'm not sure bout approvng dis n it's current state. If you don't want ta flesh it out a bit more I'll have ta rap wit mah handy dandy helper ta try ta come ta a conclusion.

@Machomuu: Woah! That was fast. I'll git ta yos n a moment, though if length is any ndication it looks like you've put n enough work.
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Old April 29th, 2012 (05:54 PM). Edited April 29th, 2012 by プリンセスサファイア.
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I'll do some editng wit it tamorrow, it's gittng late :3.

Edit: Nevermnd I did some editng now, hope that's better.
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Old April 29th, 2012 (06:01 PM).
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@Machomuu: Woah! That was fast. I'll git ta yos n a moment, though if length is any ndication it looks like you've put n enough work.
Well, tha truth is I started workng on tha SU a few hours befoe postng :3
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Old April 29th, 2012 (06:59 PM).
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@Sapphire: ...That additional part of her histary is so.... /morbid/. I guess I'm gong ta go aheezee an approve you than. You may begn postng as you like.

@Machomuu: Tha SU itself is good, but I discovered a canonity problem or two. You see, dis RP is based on tha gbees and n tha gbees thare is no non-pokemon animals. It is stated very blatantly n a certan piece of lore that pokemon is eaten fo food, unlike tha anime where thare is normal animals alongside pokemon and tha dawgga where nobody knows. That ben said, as Pokemon is completely extnct catchng 'fish' is impossible.

Tha only othar issue is more of a confusion I had when readng yo SU. You sez Mako cannot use his powers unless he 'synchronizes' wit his pokespirit. That sounds like tha transfomation a pokespirit grants, however, /nobody/ should be able ta use thair powers when not transfomed usng thair spirit. That's completely normal... unless I'm misunderstandng somethng.
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Old April 30th, 2012 (02:15 AM). Edited April 30th, 2012 by machomuu.
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@Sapphire: ...That additional part of her histary is so.... /morbid/. I guess I'm gong ta go aheezee an approve you than. You may begn postng as you like.

@Machomuu: Tha SU itself is good, but I discovered a canonity problem or two. You see, dis RP is based on tha gbees and n tha gbees thare is no non-pokemon animals. It is stated very blatantly n a certan piece of lore that pokemon is eaten fo food, unlike tha anime where thare is normal animals alongside pokemon and tha dawgga where nobody knows. That ben said, as Pokemon is completely extnct catchng 'fish' is impossible.

Tha only othar issue is more of a confusion I had when readng yo SU. You sez Mako cannot use his powers unless he 'synchronizes' wit his pokespirit. That sounds like tha transfomation a pokespirit grants, however, /nobody/ should be able ta use thair powers when not transfomed usng thair spirit. That's completely normal... unless I'm misunderstandng somethng.
Ah, I see. Well, ta explan tha first part, I sez "fish" coz n tha gbees thay call thugz "fisherdawg" and thay use "fishng rods", even though n reality thay catch pokemon. It's pretty much tha sbee deal here, Mako's mothar catches pokemon, and as tha virus spread (as well as Arceus' act of gradually takng tham away) thngs started ta git harder fo her, ta tha pont where she'd have very little food and couldn't feed herself.

As fo tha latter, I'll add on ta that that, I did misunderstand how that worked. Also, I fogots a pretty important detail n tha openng post, I'll need ta add on ta it when I git back.
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@Machomuu: N tha plot, pokemon is nfected by an extremely contagious virus wit memetic properties, which was engneered by scientists wit extremely idealist goals. After a pont, Arceus removed pokemon from tha earth completely n retaliation. Dis would've all happened befoe yo character was born, meanng thare can't possibly be any fish left. I can't really bend on dis, as it's one of tha biggest, most powerful reasons that hudawgity is really sufferng. On tha bright side tha population has thnned so much at dis pont that it's actually much easier ta fnd food than it was at first (It's still hard though. At /first/, thugz just startng droppng like flies after a bit. unless thay hoarded some food.)

But of course I'd be staked ta go over it agan should you need ta make a few changes.
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@Machomuu: N tha plot, pokemon is nfected by an extremely contagious virus wit memetic properties, which was engneered by scientists wit extremely idealist goals. After a pont, Arceus removed pokemon from tha earth completely n retaliation. Dis would've all happened befoe yo character was born, meanng thare can't possibly be any fish left. I can't really bend on dis, as it's one of tha biggest, most powerful reasons that hudawgity is really sufferng. On tha bright side tha population has thnned so much at dis pont that it's actually much easier ta fnd food than it was at first (It's still hard though. At /first/, thugz just startng droppng like flies after a bit. unless thay hoarded some food.)

But of course I'd be staked ta go over it agan should you need ta make a few changes.
Oh, I see, well n that case I'll revise tha stary ta reflect that.
Okay, I've revised/added on ta tha begnnng of mah Histary and tha Begnnng and end of tha "Othar" section. Now ta watch some Stens; Gate :3
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@Machomuu: Hmm... dis seems ta check out. Very well than! I'm glad ta welcome you ta tha Roleplay--You're accepted and may begn postng as you wish!~
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Thanks :D, I'll git on that when I'm able ta!
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I'm considerng jonng n on tha fun, I just have one question.

How much does a spirit wielder's appearance and features change after thay combned wit thair spirits? Does it have varyng levels of transfomations, or do thay even takes on tha pokemon's features at all?
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Thay're varied levels. Tha three of mne have different degrees of transfomation. Alessa (Kirlia) just has some color change and a better sense of balance, Aiden (Froslass) has a change n clothas and appearance (as n he has pretty much nothng but darkness under his clothas when fused), while Tim gits Rhydon armor.

So tha differences can change quite a bit dependng on tha person and Pokémon.
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@DJYosh: At least mnimal changes must occur. However, clothas may cause tha changes ta be non-visible. One also cannot change ta such a degree that thay is more pokemon than hudawg. Dis is both a canonity thng and meant ta discourage thugz from tryng ta work around tha plot ta git a 'pokemon character' as opposed ta a hudawg one. As a rule of thumb, one's face should be recognizable as hudawg, which means only mnor changes should occur ta it.

But yeah! Glad ta hear you're showng nterest.
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Appearance:
beethyst is a very young girl; tharefoe, her features resemble such. She has pale skn, unrealistically beautiful red hair (after her fusion), ta which she simply wears n a ponytail, wit bangs fallen ta each side of her face. Ever snce her fusion, her eyes becbee heterochromic. On tha right, her natural, soft blue eye, as blue as crystallized ice. On tha left, her eye matches that of her Spirit Pokémon; a slit pupil, wit a ruby-red iris. Of course, when staked, her eye takess a much softer tane, makng her red eye much more gentle. At night, both of her eyes glow n that sbee red color. On tap of dis, she wears a foeheezee tiara wit a yellow gem centered over her foeheezee. She generally wears dark blue clothas, usually wit some fom of red ta match her eye over tham. Her teeth is sharper than normal, and at times thugz have seen her ta have claws, even though her hands is normal.

Personality:
beethyst is sweet, like a shawt girl should be. She knows how ta have fun, even n tha post-apocalyptic world thay now live n. However knd and gentle she seems, she does takes nterest n pullng gags and pranks. Her tap three priorities, n order, is Survival, Fbeily, and Fun. Of course, wit no actual fbeily left, she has lived a free life (more explaned n Histary section). She saves her second priority fo any close friends, which at tha moment, is none. Even than, she doesn't give up. She somehow redawgs staked even through hard times.

Histary:
beethyst is still very young, so thare wasn't tao much histary befoe what happened ta tha world. She lived a quiet life, playng wit her best friend, a Sneasel nbeed Blade. Her pisnts watched as beethyst and Blade grew tagithar, and Sneasel had evolved after tha genocide of Pokémon. beethyst was deeply saddened after dis happened. As thugz began ta vanish, her pisnts rushed her ta Mt. Coronet, after she contnually mumbled bout it n her sleep. Her mothar had prayed at tha Shrne of Celebi n Johta, and Celebi had granted her tha wish, ta send bey back n time, ta a world where tha virus no longer existed, and pokemon and thugz lived happily. She was sent through time, 100 years later; hopng ta send her ta a safe world where she could be staked, Celebi did quite tha opposite, coz of tha virus' effect on Pokemon, who no longer had ta obey hudawgs. bey was transported ta a mountan, tha sbee mountan she had been placed on. She awoke on Coronet, unsure of exactly why she was thare, or what happened ta tha world. Thare, she was nfused wit a Pokéspirit. However, when she returned home, she couldn't fnd any of her fbeily. A cruelly lyng spirit wielder tald her that thay had gone away ta an oasis, a utapia where food was limitless and thugz were knd. Snce than, bey has been n search of tham, and tha wonderful place. Of course, thare is no such place; and no one has had tha heart ta tell her that her pisnts had died tha sbee night she vanished tha mountan. Of course, if she ever mentioned her fathar's nbee, Sigmund Yula, thugz would know that he's dead; he was one of tha scientists behnd tha virus. He found his daughter's Sneasel ta be a bad nfluence on her, anothar reason ta separate Pokémon from hudawgs. Dawgy thugz hated her coz of her fathar, so she knew her only friend had ta be her Pokéspirit, Blade tha Weavile.

Pokéspirit Species:
Weavile

Pokéspirit Nbee:
Blade

Pokéspirit Sex:
Male

Pokéspirit Age:
110
(3 Years older than beethyst. He acts more like an angry teenager, though.)

Pokéspirit Personality:
Blade can be mischievous, and often unfogivng. His fusion wit bey was tha cause fo tha darker side of her personality: prankng, revenge, and hatred. Blade's strong personality spreads ta beethyst, which causes most thugz ta see her as havng a bipolar personality: a light, knd and rideng side, and a dark, cruel and hatng side. Durng battle, Blade's spirit causes her ta never fofeit, even n a battle she would surely lose. Blade wants ta keep bey safe, and is determned ta use fightng skill ta defend her. However, sometimes bey's side wns, and she solves problems by eithar rapng her way out of it, or by gittng away wit her childish nnocence. One thng's fo certan, bey can rap her way out of dawgy situations. Blade, on tha othar hand, takess his approach n a much more violent dawgner.

Moves:
Agility (Sneasel LV24)
Revenge (Weavile Start)
Fury Swipes (Weavile LV21)
Night Slash (Weavile LV38)
Ice Bebe (Technical TM13)
Focus Blast (Technical TM52)

Othar:
Weavile Traits that empower bey:

Eggs - Weavile have a love fo eggs. However, n tha no-Pokémon world, tha only opportunity fo eggs would be if thay were created by a move (As n, Chansey's "Softboiled" move, or somethng of tha sort)

Agility - Weavile is very agile and one of tha fastest Pokémon ta ever exist. Dis is passed on ta bey as well.

Dark Pulses and Night Slashes - Powers of Dark is given ta bey.

Icy Wnds and Blizzards - Ice-cold powers is handed down ta bey.

Tundras - bey likes snow and cold, if thare's even any left n tha world.

Trickery - bey now enjoys pranks and tha like.

Bipolar - Due ta hers and Blade's distnct personalities, thugz often thnk she's bipolar.

Openng Post:

*Growlllllllll* beethyst looked down ta her stamach. I need somethng ta eat, and soon... She had gone though bout a month of tranng under Blade, and somehow, she kept dawgagng ta fnd berries or plants ta eat. Taday, she wasn't so lucky. She weaved her way through tha dense trees, lookng fo a plant, a berry, somethng she could eat. However, her search cbee up dry. Wit a sigh, she sprnted out of tha foest. Dis fusion comes n handy... I'm runnng so fast, witout even breakng a sweat! Just be cisful, bey... Thugz here is changed, thay wouldn't hesitate ta-- "I know, I know, eat me. You tald me tha whole stary already. Don't worry... I can git out of it." She smiled, and squnted.

One of tha tawns was nearby. "Ooh! Maybe thare's food thare!" He proceeded n a warnng tane, beyyyy... She scowled a bit. "Ugh, Blade... I know, I know, I know... Pleaze trust me." ... She taok his silence as a 'yes', and looked aheezee. However, snce she had been sprntng tha entire time, she neglected ta see tha upcomng buildng, plowng a hole right through it and crashng nta someone n tha process. Dizzily, she growled slightly at Blade. "That was not funny, Blade..." Laughter was his reply. bey, you need ta pay attention. Dis was only a lesson fo you ta learn. You're gong ta have ta takes thngs seriously and grow up if you want ta survive. She staod up, and looked apologitically up at tha girl she just T-boned while gong past tha speed limit ran nta at full sprnt. She was abusng her child-like looks by usng tham ta her advantage. At tha sbee time, she was rapng at a rathar quick pace. "I-I'm sorry, miss, you see, I was out and bout when I saw dis city, so I cbee n ta look, but than Blade started rapng ta me and gots me all distracted and befoe I knew it I--" *GROOWWWWWWLLLLLLLLL* Oh wonderful. Now I'm just a 'mouth ta feed'...



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Marn's postng n anothar RP befoe she looks it over; I was rapng wit her bout it While I buggine bey. And I enjoy makng nterestng characters. N fact:

It's mah busness...

... Ta make tham sharp.
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Nterestng, quite a bit. I like tha work put n as a Weavile user. However... actually, I'll leave tha comments ta Yellow/Sir Bastian, snce thay'll likely pick up on everythng I noticed and than some.
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Nterestng, quite a bit. I like tha work put n as a Weavile user. However... actually, I'll leave tha comments ta Yellow/Sir Bastian, snce thay'll likely pick up on everythng I noticed and than some.
Actually, I was speakng ta Marn as I was buildng tha Sign-Up, gittng yes and no from various ideas as I cbee up wit tham.
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Anyway, dis OOC thread needed ta be revived so let me ask you homeys; how is y-aw feelng and what's up? I just posted an ad n tha RPD. While it's funky ass and comfy here as it is now, I felt like it was fo tha best that we attempted ta grow a bit. |P
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