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Old August 7th, 2012 (11:25 AM).
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Long Ago....in Jhoto, there was a Tower. This Tower was home to the Great Pokemon of the Sea, Lugia. There Also Were Other Pokemon who Dwelt there, 3 nameless Pokemon... One Day, a Pokemon Named Ho-oh. Now Ho-Oh One Day got jealous of Lugia so it Burned Lugia's Tower. Thus Forcing Lugia to Take Home in The Whirl Islands. But the 3 Nameless Pokemon Perished in the Fire... But Ho-Oh Reincarnated them. Those Pokemon Are Now Known As..
ENTEI, RAIKOU AND SUICUNE!

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Old August 7th, 2012 (01:15 PM). Edited August 7th, 2012 by DarkIceForever.
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Oh noes! You mispelled Johto. It's not Jhoto. Heh heh, joto means gay in Spanish. I don't know if this is a troll story or not. Crossing my fingers though. Probably just a coincidence? Can we get a correction here Mr. Mod? Hope it doesn't break any rules. *Checks FF&W rules.*
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Old August 7th, 2012 (03:44 PM).
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~5 Years Later~

"Well,well....if it isn't our favorite Pokemon...Entei." Entei: "Laugh all you want...Ho-Oh is coming soon...and won't be pleased RAIKOU! Raikou steps forward. "I will destroy Ho-Oh"!

Suicune: Then Join Me brothers! I will destroy HO-OH!

*Ho-Oh arrives*

SO THIS IS HOW IT MUST BE?!?!

I MADE YOU!

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Old August 8th, 2012 (11:29 AM).
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It's not a troll story. You'll be surprised how many people can't spell Johto correctly. rpg man just needs to take a little extra time adding more to his chapters. I could close the thread because the last chapter has script in it, but at other times it doesn't, so I don't know how rpg man is writing this.

Please take your time writing, rpg man. Your fic is close to breaking the rules, and I don't wish to close it. Check your spelling, your grammar, add more description. Like why do the Legendary Beasts want to destroy Ho-Oh? Ho-Oh gave them life.
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Old August 9th, 2012 (04:09 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Astinus:
You'll be surprised how many people can't spell Johto correctly.
Guess what? When I was younger, I pronounced Johto wrong. I knew how to spell it then, but I was clueless about how to pronounce it! Of course, now I have solved that problem and I can now say Johto correctly.
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