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Old September 17th, 2012, 02:25 PM
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Yellow, not sure if you noticed, but Creed briefly interacted with Amethyst at the end of my last post.
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Old September 17th, 2012, 03:42 PM
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@Machomuu: Oh. Guess I got left behind a bit. There you go. Hope that post is less conflicting.
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Old September 18th, 2012, 08:38 PM
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@WolfOfEve: The only thing that comes to mind is that the only proper way to reach you is through that dystopian social networking site. The one with the book of faces.
Even so. You know what'd be even easier? Text messaging. That way it'd be open even when away from a computer.
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Old September 22nd, 2012, 09:11 AM
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So... who here is getting Black and White 2? I ask because the story of Pokemon Fallout was based on Black and White 1 and does not account for BW2 and for all I know, though I doubt it since Fallout doesn't even take place in Unova, BW2 could throw a wrench in the story of Fallout.

I for one will be playing through BW2 the moment it comes out in English, and I'll be making a point to observe the story and how it might affect the world as we know it. This is also conveniently a good excuse for us to discuss BW2's story and other changes from BW1 when it comes out. Yay excuses.
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Old September 22nd, 2012, 09:54 AM
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I've played a few hours of BW2 (then a Sewer level happened and I stopped, no way I'm trekking through that; I hate sewer levels), I probably won't buy it, though. I'll probably look up the story for RP sake (I might be able to find it, now). Technically, it's better than its older brother, and the story's not bad, either; I certainly appreciate the work and time put into animations and sprites, and the characters work well, as well as the changes to the interface.
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Old September 22nd, 2012, 10:48 AM
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I already have BW2 preordered, so I'll be playing the day it comes out.
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Old September 24th, 2012, 11:52 AM
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Uh...I mean...nope. I'm definitely n-not going to play it again. My hate for sewer levels...outweighs...

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Old September 24th, 2012, 02:12 PM
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So, Yellow, have you decided who the 2nd GM is? If you're still waiting, I understand, just want to know if I will have to put more time into this RP. Now GMing one other RP (Pokemon: Revolution) and I am reasonably inactiv if you hadn't noticed... I'm not pulling out, I just need to know the general schedule that I'd be on if I am chosen.
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Old September 24th, 2012, 02:27 PM
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@Icefyr: I would need someone who is active on a daily basis. I think I'll be looking at my other options, so don't worry about it.
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@Icefyr: I would need someone who is active on a daily basis. I think I'll be looking at my other options, so don't worry about it.
I am on daily, except weekends (Mostly)... I'm hoping I won't be handicapped from the internet for too long.
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Old September 24th, 2012, 03:37 PM
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@Yellow: Gotcha. I think I'm gonna have my work cut out for me w/ Revolution anyways.

EDIT: I have noticed that the pace to this one is much slower than PTA...
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My characters have abandoned a group of children in oreburgh (non-spirit kids/wants to become them) and there is a girl named Kalie heading to Children's city to get an escort to the mountain. If anyone cares they are there (My character abandoned them because it is her nature)
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Name: Luna Cassidy French

Nickname: None

Age (10-13): 13

Sex (Male or Female): Female

Appearance: Luna has deep red hair, which extends until the back of her neck. They cover her ears, and she has dark blue eyes. She has a slightly tanned skin-tone, and has a slim frame like a child. She has strong calves, due to her running away from thieves at every corners. Luna wears a dark blue dress, with a light blue tank top on top of the dress. The dress is sleeveless. For footwear, she wears a pair of red boots, that end at her knees.

Personality:

Luna is quite a loner, as she doesn't trust anyone except for herself. She doesn't like other people, and will often try and trick them in order to flee from them. She loves it when other people don't know a thing about her, so she can stab them in the back. The reason for this is that she is used to the way of living on her own, and actually enjoys it. Plus, the last time she trusted someone she loved (her parents), they let her down, as she believes, because they died, and left her alone. Luna swears to never make the same mistake of giving her heart to anyone, in order to protect herself from the pain of losing them if they go.

Luna is also rather manipulative, getting people to do what she wants without ever so having to give anything in return. She has no qualms about blackmailing, or any other type of that nature. Luna can read people like an open book, and can figure out what they're emotions are, and if they're lying. Using the emotions, Luna can essentially manipulate them into doing whatever she wants, without having to do anything on her own. She can also psyche them out, in order to get them paranoid and slip up.

She doesn't believe that her ways are wrong, as she only cares about herself. Luna will do anything, despite the consequences of her actions, in order to get what she wants, or to fulfill what she needs to do. Luna just thinks she's doing what it takes to survive in the world. Luna is a thief, often stealing everything she needs, rather than everything she wants.

Luna can be a bit sadistic, not really caring about what happens to her victims. In fact, sometimes she may go and try to inflict enough injuries in order for others to think she's a maniac. Luna loves it when people are afraid of her, causing some people to think she's not very right in the head; however, they're wrong, as she's intelligent enough to cause people to forget.

Luna's quite determined; once she's set her mind to do something, she won't stop at anything to do it. Luna does not have enough of a moral compass, as she's willing to do anything, such as kill, hurt, and destroy in order to get what she needs.

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Luna was born near Solaceon Town inside the Pokémon Tower. Her mother died after childbirth, and her father became increasingly depressed. Soon, he was so depressed that he committed suicide by hanging at the Pokémon Tower when Luna was seven.

Born of hard knocks, Luna quickly learned that stealing was one of the options that she had in order to get food, and other supplies that she needed. She believed that stealing had a high success rate for finding the supplies she needed, and, while most people fought to defend their things, Luna easily evaded them, and fled. The thought of killing another for meat occasionally crossed her mind, but she felt that by the time she would...er..."prepare" the body, someone would find her. Also, the rumors she's heard of people going on murder sprees have disturbed her, to the point where she didn't want to risk the chance of becoming a mindless killer. She ended up starting out as an amateur thief, often stealing things like apples and pears from the people in Solaceon Town. Her current home was the Pokémon Tower, where she found peace with the silence.

However, as she grew older, she became quite an experienced thief, stealing valuables without any clues to leave behind. Luna had a craving for action then; when she fought, the adrenaline was something she was addicted to, like it was her own drug. Luna didn't believe that she was doing anything wrong, as she needed to survive, and people needed food and other supplies. She just had her own way of getting things.

The adults were the few people that Luna finds a deep hatred for. She hates how they've abandoned their children just to save their own lives. Shouldn't adults hold unconditional love with their children, regardless of apocalyptic measures? Luna realizes she may be overreacting, but she holds no regrets for stealing from, or killing adults.

After stealing from some people in Oreburgh City, she decided to travel to Mt. Coronet. Why? Because it was there. Luna wasn't informed of the giant quaking, as she figured it was just a an earthquake of high magnitude near Solaceon. When she got there, she found the crystal, and read the sign. She scoffed at it, wondering how people can bring themselves to justice if there are so many evil people in the world. Suddenly, the crystal shimmered as she was given the power of Breloom, a sneaky, and a hit-and-run specimen, just like Luna. Even though her PokéSpirit gave her immunity to toxic/poison, she still sticks with stealing rather than scavenging. Why? Luna believes that you could get a lot more from stealing, and a lot of those items could be useful. However, if you scavenge, she believes there is almost nothing useful in the items left behind by people.

Pokéspirit Species: Breloom (Blue instead of the green) (female)

Nickname: Spora

Personality: Before Spora became a spirit, she was living as a Pokémon in a normal world. Before, in the real world, Spora was similar to Luna in many ways. She tricked people, into trusting her, and then Spora would stab them in the back. The misery of others gave happiness to Spora, as she enjoyed the fact that she knew others well enough to twist and taint their emotions to cause them. She is somewhat of a sociopath, like Luna. Like Luna does today, she uses the Spore-Then-Run technique in order to make a quick getaway, or to mess with some people. Whatever came first inside her mind. Spora encourages Luna to get thrills out of stealing or attacking.

Moves:
-Spore
-Synthesis
-Mach Punch
-Mimic
-Seed Bomb
-Bulk Up

Other: Spora often gives off many physical traits to Luna, such as enhanced agility. Luna gets somewhat tanner, similar to the color of Spora's head, neck, and tail. Luna's fingernails are also grown a bit sharper, to the point where touching one a little harder can prick your finger. Luna has the mushroom-like cap that most people mistake for a hat, which is blue in color. She also grows a tail with the blue spore-releasers.

One characteristic that Spora gives to Luna is that, like a Breloom normally would, she will not hesitate to fight, or attack anything or anyone that threatens her. With Spora, Luna will attack those who she thinks will pose a threat to her. Luna's strategy with Spora is to attack after sprinting quickly and lightly on her feet, before punching with her hands. Luna also releases sleep spores from her tail in order to make a quick get-a-way.

Opening Post:

An apple. Good enough. Luna thought, as she rested inside the Pokémon Tower. No one else was in the tower, so she didn't have to hide; it was sickening how some people just threw the dead people in here like they didn't matter. If you're wondering about the smell, Luna took care of it. She always refreshed the scent of the tower with her abilities.

Luna breathed slowly, as her form began to change. A blue mushroom cap grew on top of her red hair, as she felt her tail grow out on her tailbone. Also, she felt her red nail-polished fingernails grow to a sharp point. She felt her senses get heightened, and her agility increase.

"You seem a bit stressed. Why not just knock out a few guys in Nicholas' empire to make yourself feel better?" Spora commented on Luna's mood. Luna sighed, as she thought for a minute before answering her PokéSpirit.

"I'm not sure. I could get caught, and I'd have to deal with Nicholas," Luna answered the blue Breloom within her. Spora shook her head. It wasn't like Luna to worry about things like "getting caught."

"Oh, come on! You've only been stealing minor things right now from Solaceon! Don't you want a thrill?" Spora protested. Luna thought about it for a moment; it would be fun to try and mess with Nicholas' "perfect utopia," and have him wanting to claw at her throat. Luna decided to go into Children's City, in order to steal some stuff, and maybe do some damage. Her craving for action and injury was too great to ignore, and Spora was completely supporting of this action.

Luna got up, and dusted off her blue dress. As her boots clicked with every step, she descended the tower onto the entrance level, and opened the doors. The ray of light shone, as Luna closed her eyes, trying to adjust to the new level of brightness. Luna headed west, towards Children's City. She found a few children outside the perimeters of the city, when a small smirk crept on her face. She would be having a lot of fun today.
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Old September 28th, 2012, 08:49 PM
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@Lunacrest: Alright... Glad to see you're interested! There are some issues with your SU, but with a little patience we can work on those and get you into the RP. Now...

The first thing I noticed is that your character seems to rely on a cute and innocent facade. Survival of the fittest is a major theme in this RP. So quiet honestly? People will see weakness and it will more provoke them to attempt to take advantage of her perceived weaknesses rather than help or trust her.

I'd compare such an act to trying to playing dead... in front of vultures. I'm not saying she can't be really manipulative, just that the people of the fallout world are more often than not terrible people compared to the normal Pokemon world, and that playing weak/innocent/helpless specifically doesn't make sense.



The second thing is... you mention that she steals... laptops. The problem here is that technology is no longer a thing. Without Pokemon physically present to generate their electricity, humanity experienced a technological collapse. At this point and time, there should not be anything remotely complex running off electricity, and it would take quite a bit of explaining to justify anything at all.



The third thing I noticed was Spora's personality: "Spora is similar to Luna in many ways. She tricks people, including her "friends" into trusting her, and then she stabs them in the back. She enjoys other people's misery, and is somewhat of a sociopath like Luna. Spora always uses a hit-and-run method, as she loves the shock of those before they fall asleep."

My immediate thought on all of this is... Spora is a disembodied spirit incapable of so much communicating with anyone other than her host. How does she /do/ /anything/? o3o Did you mean to refer to her life before being a spirit? That on the other hand would make sense.


My last concern is more of a suggestion than something that needs to be changed or elaborated on. Your character's moveset is rather offensively orientated. 4 purely offensive attacks is... a tad steep, and you might find your character somewhat crippled in both utility and combat as she is now.

Other moves to consider: Synthesis, Growth, Mimic, Captivate, Charm, Attract, Bulk Up, Mind Reader, Protect, and probably a few others I didn't bother listing.

Mimic is a very neat move in particular. With just one moveslot, your character basically has an excuse to use any non-legendary move in existence, and fight an opponent with their own attacks. For Pokemon that can learn it, there's honestly no downside to replacing another attack with it. (I tend to treat it as Sketch, only it can be overwritten.)
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Old September 28th, 2012, 10:06 PM
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Since we were on the subject of Pokemon BW2 for a moment, I will say this (a little advertisement, if you will): BW2, in terms of innovation and content, is the best game in the series. It adds...more content than you'd expect from a pokemon game, especially what is, technically speaking, a "third" (and fourth) version. So...yeah, if you can get past the overuse of the Lucario family (not saying anything's wrong with Lucario, but the amount in which they use it in this game is slightly random and unnecessary, but by no means bad) and the sewers, you'll enjoy it. It also has a good story too, (probably better than BW, so I'd say it's the best in the series in that aspect as well). Granted, I'm not really the type that can play a new pokemon game without gameplay changes on a larger scale than were introduced in recent generations (I can't really play pokemon for as long as I can play other RPGs, not the newer ones, at least), this one is probably the most enticing game to play since Gold and Silver. So yeah, try it out, it's worth the money.
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Old September 29th, 2012, 03:41 AM
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@PkMnTrainer Yellow

I decided to remove the part of her being a good actress, after realizing what you said. Then, I added in some parts of her being rather manipulative, and reading someone like an open book.

I replaced some moves with the ones you suggested (which I thank you for, as I've never thought about Mimic that way). I decided to get rid of the SubPunch combo in order to get priority and speed, while having some support.

Last thing is, I added a part in where it tells you that it was how Spora was before coming into contact with Luna.
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Old September 29th, 2012, 04:10 PM
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@Lunacrest: Not a problem. I often say this to people joining because I don't want you to get in and realize you hate the movesets you picked. My primary job is to try to avoid you... not having fun. So, y'know. ||P

Anyway, we've made progress. But you didn't address my question about your pokespirit's personality. Is it meant to reference her past life before becoming a spirit? If, so I'd like you to clarify that for me. It's a minor thing, but it needs to be done.

Two other things I noticed in hindsight was that the the flow of the history and personality leave a lot of things unsaid. Such as:

Why is she a thief? Like... what caused her to choose that route as opposed to scavenging or cannibalism? Was it the unreliability or difficulty of scavenging? I'd imagine a Breloom wielder would be immune to the toxicity of the plants everyone else wouldn't even touch. Is she a bit less corrupt than she is made out to be and would rather steal sustenance from people than make /them/ sustenance? Or was she frightened out of the idea by rumors of insanity resulting from such lifestyles? I hope you don't mind me suggesting improvements on your SU beyond what may be considered a deal breaker as far as joining goes.

Similarly. Why is she a loner? Was that a direct result of her parents dying, or more of the hostile, untrustworthy world she was born into? You tell what she is a lot, but not why.

Lastly, does your character know what "seismic" means? o3o The books remaining from a long gone era of piece are the only real means of educating oneself. I reasoned to myself that maybe that was more your vocabulary and less your characters, but an RP post generally shouldn't be in Third Person Omniscient (Because nobody, not even I, can claim to be omniscient over the world I'm writing about~)

I personally think a well-developed character is funner to play in the long run, so I hope you'll give my words some consideration when reviewing your character.
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Old September 29th, 2012, 05:45 PM
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@Lunacrest: Not a problem. I often say this to people joining because I don't want you to get in and realize you hate the movesets you picked. My primary job is to try to avoid you... not having fun. So, y'know. ||P

Anyway, we've made progress. But you didn't address my question about your pokespirit's personality. Is it meant to reference her past life before becoming a spirit? If, so I'd like you to clarify that for me. It's a minor thing, but it needs to be done.

Two other things I noticed in hindsight was that the the flow of the history and personality leave a lot of things unsaid. Such as:

Why is she a thief? Like... what caused her to choose that route as opposed to scavenging or cannibalism? Was it the unreliability or difficulty of scavenging? I'd imagine a Breloom wielder would be immune to the toxicity of the plants everyone else wouldn't even touch. Is she a bit less corrupt than she is made out to be and would rather steal sustenance from people than make /them/ sustenance? Or was she frightened out of the idea by rumors of insanity resulting from such lifestyles? I hope you don't mind me suggesting improvements on your SU beyond what may be considered a deal breaker as far as joining goes.

Similarly. Why is she a loner? Was that a direct result of her parents dying, or more of the hostile, untrustworthy world she was born into? You tell what she is a lot, but not why.

Lastly, does your character know what "seismic" means? o3o The books remaining from a long gone era of piece are the only real means of educating oneself. I reasoned to myself that maybe that was more your vocabulary and less your characters, but an RP post generally shouldn't be in Third Person Omniscient (Because nobody, not even I, can claim to be omniscient over the world I'm writing about~)

I personally think a well-developed character is funner to play in the long run, so I hope you'll give my words some consideration when reviewing your character.
I will always listen to a superior's advice, as I know it will help me.

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@Lunacrest: Alright. I'm happy to say that I'm ready to approve you for the roleplay. You can get started whenever you want.

@Everyone: BW2 really added a bunch of really awesome looking moves to Eelektross' movepool, some of which I very much wished would've been around when I'd made Arcea. Therefore I've decided to go ahead and quickly redo her moveset.

(Dragon Claw, Wild Charge, Flamethrower, Coil, Double Team, Light Screen)
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(Dragon Tail, Wild Charge, Super Fang, Coil, Double Team, Superpower)

Oh right. Before I forget--I decidedly chose Torn Zero as the second GM for Pokemon Fallout. He'll be helping me out with stuff around here, especially regarding approving SUs since second opinions are ever so useful there.
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Old September 30th, 2012, 12:46 PM
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Woot, btw this is my second fav RP, (well it has my two favorite RP characters) so I'm glad you got more help keeping it great.
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Old September 30th, 2012, 12:56 PM
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Old September 30th, 2012, 12:59 PM
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Thank you!

I'll get started straight away.
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Old September 30th, 2012, 09:02 PM
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this is my first time RPing but here goes nothing :D

the SU is incomplete but any critique is welcome :3


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Name: Timothy

Nickname (Optional): Timmy, little tim,

Age (10-13):13+

Sex (Male or Female): male

Appearance (A picture can be provided instead of a description if you so wish.): Minimum of 3 lines if no picture is provided.

Normal: he is a small child standing at only 4 feet 7 inches (139.7 cm), with short brown hair & hazel eyes. Despite his size he has a fairly muscular build. He wears dark pants that are barely off the ground, & a light short sleeved shirt. He prefer to wear a hat to help keep hidden his change when fused.

fused; his look when fused varies based on Frankie's emotions it ranges for just his hair changing to the light brown color of a primeape to long reddish hair that stands straight, he also occasionally get primeape's nose.

Personality (How does your character act and react to others? Their mental state? Flaws and/or personal weaknesses?): 4 lines minimum

History (Where did your character grow up? Who did they grow up with? What have the been doing before this? Any noteworthy events?): 4 lines minimum

Timothy was Born in jubilife city. His parents tried desperately to keep him a secret from the town. then when he was around the age of 3 his parents dumped him off into the cave, because the town had decided run inspections for all house holds of the town. After a day & a half of him walking blindly around the cave slave traders form the underground Picked him up eventually selling him off to an older couple in eterna city. Where he grew up abused tortured & over worked. Growing up He was the person every one bullied & because of his shy nature & circumstances he never did anything about it. Even after he got his Poke-spirit he kept it a secret, because he new all to well what would happen if it was found that he had one. Unfortunately when the found that he did have one it was decided that he was going to be punished for keeping it a secret. The punishment they had decided for him was death, because he had not fused with Frankie he was having trouble fusing. When he finally did he blacked out & Frankie took full control of his body. He instantly went into a full rage because of he had watched Timmy being treated. He used overheat which immediately burnt the four children & one adult along with the binding the had him in, killing them instantly. After killing a few other people Frankie ran off into the eterna forest, soon collapsing from exhaustion they unfused. Timothy woke up the next day sitting their as the memory of the previous days event flooded into his mind. they have since lived off the land avoiding any major place except the underground & the children's city if they couldn't help it. during this time Frankie help Timmy open up revealing his true self.

Pokéspirit (No legionaries. Alternate color schemes are allowed.)
Species: Primape

Nickname (Optional): Frankie, Frank

Personality (Can be as short or long as you want): Frankie is very compassionate spirit when it comes to those he trusts, Unfortunately its hard to come by. Al tho he compassionate he can lash out randomly because of his extreme anger problems (which all primapes seem to have to a degree). This makes it difficult for Timothy To find any one With whom he can share a mutual trust. Also His compassionate nature helps to control Timothy's indifference & general Hatred of people. He also Has a very deep sense of pride.

Moves (Maximum of 6. TM and egg moves are allowed. These are the moves your character gets when they fuse):

Rage, Closet Combat, Overheat, Workup, Rain-dance, Bulldoze (note: Overheat can only be used when he is fully enraged while fused.)

Other (Optional): This is where you put any unique traits, quirks, or additional powers your poke-spirit may give your character. If they're based on quirks or abilities the original Pokemon had, you have a high probability of being accepted.
Other: Anger Point Ability

Opening Post (This will be what we use to determine whether your writing skills are good enough. If accepted, you may feel free to copy paste your post here into the IC thread.): I would recommend a minimum of 8 lines and a maximum of 20, but it's your choice.


updated with the appearance

Last edited by mrsnuggles; October 1st, 2012 at 12:10 PM.
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Old October 1st, 2012, 07:24 AM
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Fighting to Renew my Past...
 
Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: Elysia
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Nature: Lonely
Aww, looks like I'll have to keep my ideals to myself...

So, I have a completely hypothetical question regarding Fallout.

What happens if a wielder uses the move TRANSFORM?
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