[Developing] Pokemon Morning/Night

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Announcing Pokemon Morning Night
Made by the bw font.

Meet the characters!

Spoiler:

Clarie
Age 15
Personality: Bossy
Description: Clarie is your long time, friend if you play as Clarek
She is kind. But she has a short temper . She scolds everyone when she gets
angry!
She is arch enemies, with Sarah from the start.
P.s don't tell anyone that she has a Crush on clarek!


Clarek
Age 15
Personality: Clumsy Clownish.
Description: He is your best friend, if you play as Clarie. He often tends to
play joke on his friends. But they don't end, very good. Also he sometimes
spills juices or any, liquid on Claire. He is the perfect man in Sarah's eyes.
P.s he likes Claire!


Sarah (Insert a name of your choice here)
Age 15
Personality: spoiled
Description: She is a billionaire! Her family has a mansion in every, region!
She thinks she's the queen of the world.
She is so spoiled that one day. She wanted to kill someone.


Maple
Age 18
Personality: Conscious. Caring
Description: She is Sarah's or whatever you like to call her, sister. For 17
she was studying, out of the region.
She helps Professor Palm. She doesn't forgive herself when she makes a
mistake. She helps you during your adventure.
P.s she has her own oversold sprite.





Professor Palm
Age 32
Personality: Like a professor
Description: He is the designer of the Visual/Smart Pokedexes. He, also owns
a juice shop in Hariona beach (Which competes with the Bruno's bar). He doesn't
spend his time own his lab as much as, he spends in the coconut shop. Also, his
juices are the best selling in the whole Lenaroh!


Dad
Age 47
Personality: Very Strict
Description: Your dad plays a major role, in the game. He doesn't want you to
become a Pokémon trainer (Because he doesn't want you to go on a journey alone!
He cares for you a lot, thats why he's so strict to you.)
He Often comes to help you, Sometimes he battles you. Sometimes he gives you
useful items.
P.s He is a Pokémon trainer to, but he didn't tell anyone!


Samuraja
Age 51
Personality: Silent
Descirption: He is Sarah and Maple's dad. He has more than 10 servants
working on each, of his house. It is unknown why is he silent also how does he
earn this much money? His real name is Samuel. But, People call him Samuraja
(Raja means king in urdu.)
P.s After his wife died his personality has changed alot.

The story

Spoiler:

you’re an average teenager living in Newbud town who has been forbiddenfor 15 year's not to become a Pokémon trainer, you choose from the two player characters Clarie and Clarek.
On one special day, you go to the Pokémon lab to help the Professor’s assistant Maple who's in trouble, A thief stole a Pokémon egg that is not commonly found in the Lenaroh region. You've been send to catch that thief almost after a second when you go inside the lab! After you've recovered the egg, the professor gives you Pokémon and a Pokédex as a reward. When you return to your home to tell that you want to be a Pokémon trainer but you're father is against it, after a long argument between your mom and dad. Your father agrees and lets you become a Pokémon Trainer (with dad coming out on some events to help you). Meanwhile when you're just about to step on the first route, your rival Sarah comes and cries out loud that why did you got a Pokémon before her!... More coming soon

The starters

Spoiler:

Chwittle the Grass type




Side note: It's based on a wood pecker.



Flauri the Fire
type.



Side note: It is meant to attract more female Players.





Eqhua the Water type



Side note: I don't know what kind of creature is this?

New features

The next gen pokedexes

The visual dex (resembles the Nintendo 3ds )
Having clear and bright visuals it also Comes with beginner apps like Town map, Dream viewer with more installable.

The smart dex (resembles the Sony Ps vita)
With an speedy cpu and sleek design it also comes with a Happiness And Effort sensor
And built in apps like town map with more installable.

The Ppc box app

wowzers! A pocket pc box app which can store ten Pokémon at a time but, you have to pay the rent: 10 Pokédollars per 100 steps per Pokémon.

Seasonal Tiles

Raging Afraid and Happy Wild Pokémon.

It's a new Mechanic this deals with the wild Pokémon's emotions.

Raging Pokémon will try to destroy Pokéballs. Depending on strength and level of the Pokémon. Also it's harder to run from a Raging Pokémon.

Afraid Pokémon will try to dodge Pokéballs. Weaker the strength and level, the more the Pokémon is a coward.

Happy Pokémon are easier to catch.




The Lenaroh region

Spoiler:

Once
upon a time Lenaroh was the poorest region in the Pokéarth, Every farm there was
either burned or frozen because of the unbalanced Solar and lunar energy there.
The 7 warriors of Lenaroh were the main cause of the unbalanced solar and lunar
energy, they used their dark powers to Control the sun and the moon until one
oracle who created the guardian of Sun and Moon. All of the guardians together
sealed the 7 warriors Of Lenaroh Energy to an object which was kept safe. And
now Team Asteroids want to control the solar and lunar energy to once again
unleash terror upon not only Lenaroh but over the world!










The Cities of Lenaroh.

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Legend: Blue spots means theres a gym in this city.
Red cricle means this, area is unlocked after, beating the champion.
Yellow spot means. That its the elite four.


1. Newbud Town: Where Something big Happens.
2. Hariona Beach: Where fun comes!
3. Greengurff Farm: The geenery is here.
4. Higlight City: The eyes of every tourists.
5. Crossroad City: Coming soon.
6. Tears Village: Coming soon.
7. Seashore Town: Coming soon.
8. Mystoria City
9. Coming soon.

The gym leaders!

Spoiler:

1. Grassagh.
City: Greengurff Farm
Type: Grass
Description: The gym leader of Greengurff farm. He's very obsessed with plants. Don't even talk about picking a flower, In front of him.

2. Colerta
City: Highlight city
Type: Fire
Description: She's the gym leader of Highlight City. Her gym is a resturant so you'll have to go all the way to the kitchen, To battle her.

3. Chill
City: Crossroad City
Type: Ice
Description: He's cool, He's tough, He's brave. He's a member of the Lenaroh's rescue squad. He's the star of Crossroad City!

4 and 5. Crystal/Derek
City: Mystoria city.
Type: Phychic/Dark.
Description: She has the power to see future ad moniter it on her crystal ball.
Description: He is a magician. He uses his dark powers to amuse people.
It's your choice to chose which one of them you'll battle first. Cause both have their own gyms in the same city!

6.Coming soon. Very soon. Just let me decide their names

The new items

Spoiler:

Ultra restore
Restores all fainted Pokémon in party with restoring their Pp. but there’s only one in game!

Ultra Repel

Repels Pokémon for 500 steps. Mart price 1235 Pokedollar's.

Champion ball
You get 10 by deafeating the champion. It has a little more catch rate than the Ultra ball.




Emperor's ball
A luxuray ball that has a built in screen. It has a catch rate of ultra ball but it's screen shows capture strengnth which might come very useful for catching legendarys!

more coming soon....

The evil team.

Spoiler:

Team asteroids! They want to use technology to control the Lunar and Solar energy to rule the world. They steal pokemon to extract their DNA and power their machines!

There are seven leads of team Asteroids

The leader of them all: Astrus
A little about his past

Long ago in his childhood, he was a gentle patient kid, he really liked his parents. He also wanted to be an astrobiologist, but that day ruined it all ( this part is getting interesting).

One day He was coming back from his regular eye checkup ( he had damaged his left eye when he was a baby) with his parents, a strange group of men kidnapped them and took them somewhere far. Astrus followed them all the way through a mountain. Inside the men were activating a strange machine made of precious metal, the sign stated human manipulation machine! Astrus ran to seve his parents from manipulating but unfortunately he was captured as bait for his parents, so they listen they're orders.
Astrus' s parents agreed to go inside the machine.
A strange scientist powered the machine. It was a horrifying moment with Astrus willingbto free his parents while crying becaise of listening they're screams.
After minutes the manipulation process stopped and ir suddenly started to overpower human cells resulting in an... explosion inside the machine... Astrus was covered with blood of his parents. He decided to take revenge with the creator of the manipulation machine, but he wasn't able to. Soon after he thought of using lunar and solar energy to power jimself so he could take revengenon those who are affiliated with the human manipulation program. And then rule the world!

The mascot legendaries!
Sunkneil the guardian of sun!
Moonkneil the guardian of moon!
and the hidden oneS found later ingame.

aditional note they are not dragons!

Screens

Spoiler:

The overworlds are place holders.

Credits
FlameGuru Original Pokèmon Starter kit
Poccil Pokèmon Essentials
P-Sign Ultimate BW Pack
Clowcardruler Ultimate BW Pack
Maruno Ultimate BW Pack and Pokèmon Essentials
Venom12 Ultimate BW Pack
FL . Ultimate BW Pack and pokemon selection script
help 14 Season script and gen 5 recieve item script and the new textbox
Rayquaza. for the autotiles
king snivy for the pokecenter and mart tiles and bw indoor tiles
Bengamesfilmsandmore BW Indoor tiles.
Ultimospriter for the outside tiles
Niknaks93 for the great map
IceGod64 for some help
Boomxbig for Some tiles
Lukasj. For the awesome Vsbar script
Carmaniac Bw load screen and Bubble message system.
Saving raven For the tiles
Za_ destroyer my spriter


Needs help
you can send me an pm if you want to help me.
People i need are Scripters, Musicians and a trainer over world spriter.

[IceGod64]

It's still a WIP I know, but one thing I'll tell you.

A lot more people will want to play your game if you at least try to type properly in the textboxes. Here's a few tips:

End statements in either a . or a !
The word I is always capitalized. This includes in conjunctions like I'd, I've, I'm, etc.
To type the accented e in Pokémon, hold alt, and press 0, 2, 3, and 3 again on the numpad. é_é

Not trying to be rude or anything, it would just make your game look much better.

On the starter select screen, there are a lot of artifacts around the Poké Balls. Try to fix that.

Also, I'd recommend waiting until a textbox has finished adding text before you take your screenshot.

[Nintendork15]

Originally Posted by IceGod64

It's still a WIP I know, but one thing I'll tell you.

A lot more people will want to play your game if you at least try to type properly in the textboxes. Here's a few tips:

End statements in either a . or a !
The word I is always capitalized. This includes in conjunctions like I'd, I've, I'm, etc.
To type the accented e in Pokémon, hold alt, and press 0, 2, 3, and 3 again on the numpad. é_é

Not trying to be rude or anything, it would just make your game look much better.

On the starter select screen, there are a lot of artifacts around the Poké Balls. Try to fix that.

Also, I'd recommend waiting until a textbox has finished adding text before you take your screenshot.

Or, just press Altgr + e to make é.

Same as Icegod said, lots of grammar and spelling to be done.

One thing that bugs me alot, so much it's biting my head off, the grass starter.
What is it?! I can't honestly tell... :/

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Ok i'll try to fix that and btw it is an woodpecker it's feet don't appeal much in the front sprite

[Anglican]

The main concept behind the game could be interesting, if this is developed in Essentials I hope for a good day/night system (including great use of events!) but yeah, grammar and spelling. If you need it, I can proofread all of the text and just check, because that can really turn people off a game.

[Rayquaza.]

Where did you get the water in this screenshot from? Cause I'm almost certain that it looks like the one on my Da. Which specifically asks that you request permission to use AND give the credit, in which you have done neither.

Your screenshot:

Spoiler:

My autotile (do not use unless you request to):

Spoiler:

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Originally Posted by Anglican

The main concept behind the game could be interesting, if this is developed in Essentials I hope for a good day/night system (including great use of events!) but yeah, grammar and spelling. If you need it, I can proofread all of the text and just check, because that can really turn people off a game.

@Anglican Ok you can if you like! and btw which concept of my game did you like the most?

@Icegod actually im not a native English speaker so my English may not be that good but im trying hard to make every bit perfect.

[IceGod64]

Originally Posted by ppooookkkkkkk

@Icegod actually im not a native English speaker so my English may not be that good but im trying hard to make every bit perfect.

I see that! You're one of the few people on PokéCommunity I've tried to help (abliet in a slightly cynical fashion perhaps), that actually took my advice.

Here's some other tips you might find useful, since you're actually putting in some good effort:

1: Try putting \b or \r before the textboxes of NPCs. \b is for a male speaker, and will make the text blue. \r is for for females, and makes the text red(Since pink would be difficult to read).

2: Your text looks a lot better already. One recommendation I'd say is to keep in mind where one sentence should end and a new one starts. For example:

"I wove this place its so peaceful here."

Here is a fully correct typing, with an explanation on why:

"I wove this place. It's so peaceful here!"

a)The word "Its" means belonging to, for example: Its book is green.
The more common, and correct word in this case is actually "It's", which is literally the same meaning as "It is". It's weird, I know.

b)The period after "I wove this place" means that one sentence is ending, and a new one is about to start. The next sentence begins a new complete thought, and thus would normally start a new sentence. If you want to be crazy, you could also use a semi colon ";" in that instance, because really, in that particular scenario, "It's so peaceful here!" could be a continuation to the first sentence.

c) The "!" is just like a period, except it indicates excitement, like "No way!" Really, it's just an expressive period.

On a final note, commas are a lot of fun. I've used a lot of them here, so that's something else you could use to improve.

Well, that was long. Sorry, I love my English language.

Your game is looking better! Keep up the good work.

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Thx for helping me defenatly add your name in the credits and btw sorry for no progress busy with school and tutors.

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Added new screens as well as info

[DaSpirit]

Originally Posted by ppooookkkkkkk

There is a typo here. It should be "I know you, you're Sarah's friend Red."

You're = you are.
Your = something is yours (like an item).

The comma just adds a breath between the two statements.

By the way, I'm not a huge fan of the font.

[JNathan]

Well i like the concept but one thing bugs me : How are you going to stop the thief? I think you should get a pokemon before that.

[Zephyr+]

I don't know how productive it will be to correct grammar on a screenshot-per-screenshot basis. ppooookkkkkkk, your first language isn't english and you're only 11, so it's understandable that you'll make mistakes. If you really want help with it, maybe get someone else to write your game dialogues for you?

You sound like you have a lot of cool ideas, so keep working! I'd love to see the fakemon that you make. Remember to zoom in, and don't resize and stretch the sprite. Look up some spriting tutorials, maybe? You can also post your sprites in the spriter's showcase thread and get feedback and suggestions on how to improve.

good luck!

[ppooookkkkkkk]

@JNathan you actually borrow one of the Starters from the lab. so you can cross Route 1

@Zephyr+ Thank you very much. If you want to see more of my fakemon go at My DA Page

http://ahmad2334.deviantart.com/

[SuperTreaz]

I noticed that your tiles on the beach/swimming pool area are really old looking, yet your overworlds are gen 5.

If you give permission to Darkdragon on devianart, you can use this tile set http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&se...leset#/d34gsp7

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Theres an update on the thread. I've added new screens and all the starters!

I'm going to add charector bios soon. As well as, More detailed info on the map.

Btw which starter are you gonna keep, if you play my game?

[JNathan]

You should improve the starter's sprites. They aren't very good looking. I like everything else about your game. And if i had to choose a starter, i'd pick the fire type. I always take them. Fire is my favorite element.

[ppooookkkkkkk]

What needs improvement I'll fix them right away .

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Ok I have Updated The thread. With, the cities of Lenaroh. In the, Lenaroh regions spoiler.
I also added the characters and their, personalities.
I also made the, champion ball.

[ppooookkkkkkk]

I don't wanna triple post but no one has posed in here.

Update i added the gym leaders. I'm just done with the route 2's events after this i'll start making the next map.

[Saving Raven]

how rare is the champion ball? its a really cool idea and i like it, but after the ultra ball, it doesnt seem very necessary to have a ball with an even higher catch rater, it just seems superfluous, but if there are only a few, or if they are really expensive, or if there are really high level pokemon or something i guess it makes sense to do that

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Originally Posted by Saving Raven

how rare is the champion ball? its a really cool idea and i like it, but after the ultra ball, it doesnt seem very necessary to have a ball with an even higher catch rater, it just seems superfluous, but if there are only a few, or if they are really expensive, or if there are really high level pokemon or something i guess it makes sense to do that

You get 5-10 by beating the champion.

[Saving Raven]

Originally Posted by ppooookkkkkkk

You get 5-10 by beating the champion.

thats pretty cool, I like that idea

[Nintendork15]

Originally Posted by ppooookkkkkkk

You get 5-10 by beating the champion.

If you add a Battle Frontier I'm sure you could have them for a large BP price.
BPs are hard to get.

[ppooookkkkkkk]

Originally Posted by Nintendork15

If you add a Battle Frontier I'm sure you could have them for a large BP price.
BPs are hard to get.

Yes I am, they're 12 bp

And you only get 5 by defeating the champion. One by per elite 4

Originally Posted by Nintendork15

If you add a Battle Frontier I'm sure you could have them for a large BP price.
BPs are hard to get.

Yes I am, they're 12 BP.

Since you only get 5 by defeating the champion. One by per elite 4.

Also the ultra restore will be there to for 100 BP!