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Old September 23rd, 2012, 02:40 PM
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{Swan}'s Game of Luck is accepted!

WolfOfEve's reposted OOC thread is accepted!

IceFyr1928's Pokemon: Revolution is declined.
It's fine, it just needs a rules section!

jasonwolf's IC thread is accepted!

manson1996's ... um, okay.
Submitting a roleplay thread around here works a little differently. I suggest reading the Rules thread to get a better idea of what to post.
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Old September 29th, 2012, 05:41 AM
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IceFye1928's Pokemon: Revolution is accepted!

ThatIceman's ... okay, so, uh
This probably isn't the right place for this. Probably in the Other Chat section!

jjx8672's Kanto: The Journey Begins is declined.
It's fine, just needs a rules section. Sorry for not replying to your PM. It's also fine if you want to do things like you originally intended. Just make sure you outline what the player will be doing!

Vato and ytfeL's SCHOOL YEARS and IC is accepted!

Steller the Raichu's One way Out is declined.
The storyline is quite vague. Maybe you should explain this Quroza, why it hit Earth and what else it impacted. Why it radiates energy like it does? Why Sentor wants to take over the world and etc.

Khawill's IC is accepted!
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Old October 6th, 2012, 01:52 AM
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Steller the Raichu's Pokemon: Shrouds of Darkness is accepted!

{Swan}'s IC thread is accepted!
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Old October 9th, 2012, 03:17 PM
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danaxe's confusion island is declined.
You'll need more of a plot line if you want this to go ahead. Why are these travellers sent to confusion island? Explain Team Galactic's involvement. There has to be a motive other than a 'secret'; is there untold riches? Rare Pokémon? Explain things more!

SwiftSign's Sword Art Online: Infinity Edition is accepted!

SkittyBot's Mystery Dungeon Adventures through Dreamland is declined.
You'll really need to explain this a little more; why was the player sent to this world? If you can't answer that, maybe explain their life before this. Are there any problems in this world? What are they?

Vato's POKéMON: A Journey Beyond Time & Space and IC thread is accepted!

WolfOfEve's IC thread is accepted!
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Old October 18th, 2012, 05:53 PM
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IceFyr1928's IC thread is accepted!


Pppgggr's Pokemon: The Walking Dead is accepted!

juniebug910's Sun and Moon, World's Collide is declined.
Your back story is stunning, but you dont really explain what the threat is now. Also, explain how the pokemon world and nippon intertwine. Unless pokemon were there from the start, worlds dont just collide for no reason!

danaxe's confusion island is declined.
You haven't changed a whole lot since last time. Though you've explained why team galactic are there, how does three pokemon like palkia, dialga and giratina live on the island? is this a newly discovered island? Your story line seems so rushed! Spend some time with it and try and develop it!

SwiftSign's IC thread is accepted!

Tman109ner's Revolution is accepted!

xcoser123...
This is roleplay, not cosplay! Try this section of the forum.

gimmiepie's Pokemon Survival Challenge is accepted!

Zacax: The Gunsmith's Pokemon: Clash of Dragons is accepted!
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Old November 4th, 2012, 03:07 PM
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Fuyu's The Children are Hunted is accepted!

fantasykisala's Pokemon: A Soulless World is accepted!

Xlugon Pyro's P3K Knato: Varidia Ranger Corps is accepted!

darkpokeball's Pokemon: The Pulse is accepted!

miley810's Rising Rebellion is accepted!

Miss Doronjo's I N N O C E N C E ☆ is accepted!

Crystar500's Pokemon Zombie Apocalypse is declined.
The roleplay's storyline is too vague to really hold its own. Instead of making a new RP, why don't you join this one? It's also a Pokemon Zombie RP!
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Old November 11th, 2012, 02:54 PM
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Pppgggr's IC thread is accepted!

Miss Doronjo's IC thread is accepted!

CJBlazer's Pokemon: Shadow Apocalypse is declined.
There's not enough depth to your storyline! Where did the virus come from? Is there a reason why these Pokemon are immune to it? Where is it set? What is the human's response to this virus? Anyway, it's very similar to a zombie type roleplay, which we already have one of. Why don't you join that?

~Genevieve~'s Legendary Guardians is declined.
You really need to describe this rebellion more and why they are chosen by Legendary Pokémon. Players have to know who they are and what they are doing before they join!

Nideous' IC thread is accepted!
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Old November 19th, 2012, 02:55 AM
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Detwak's Digital Destruction is declined.
The story is really vague. You'd have to explain where digimon came from in the first place, why they attacked, why they were chosen. You'd also have to explain who the new threat is and what kind they pose as normal people wouldn't fight someone just because they were 'evil'. d:

~Genevieve~'s Legendary Guardians is accepted!

Flydro's Tainted Waters: The Wrath of Suicune is accepted!

Manganum's Pokémon: Aether's Edge and IC thread is accepted!

Zero Darkness Imagination - When dreams comes true is declined.
The concept is good, but it doesn't make much sense. Why are these things happening? You'll need to explain more of a back story.
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Old December 2nd, 2012, 03:04 AM
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OrangeNess' Professor Layton and the Gypsy Tales of Doom is declined.
As you are making a roleplay about a series outside Pokémon, you'll need to write up a backstory of Professor Layton and how puzzles and the storyline are important!

AlexOzzyCake's La Storia della Arcana Famiglia is accepted!

aipharomeo's ... okay!
This isn't the hack section, this is the roleplay section! Click here to go to the emulation boards~

Flydro's IC thread is accepted!

Ash_Ketchum123's Another New Game is accepted!
You can add in the sign-up sheet you PM'd me. d:
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Old December 8th, 2012, 12:35 AM
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Ash_Ketchum123's OOC thread is accepted!

Curious. Pokemon: Tournament of Life is accepted!

Lokiepie's... okay, so...
That question is best asked in the Roleplay Discussion Thread.

Leaf Storm's Super Smash Bros. Augustine Rush is accepted!

Elite Killer's Elder Scrolls: Akatosh's Hourglass is accepted!
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Old December 9th, 2012, 06:22 PM
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AlexOzzyCake's IC thread is accepted!

Aquataris' Dimension's Collide is accepted!
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Old December 12th, 2012, 03:02 PM
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Curious. IC thread is accepted!

Leaf Storm's IC thread is accepted!

gimmiepie's The Ultima Cup is accepted!
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Old December 17th, 2012, 04:51 AM
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Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' Monster Art Online and its OOC is accepted!

Xlugon Pro's One Piece: Raiders of the Grand Line is accepted!
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Old December 27th, 2012, 02:25 AM
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gimmiepie's IC thread is accepted!

WolfOfEve's HYRULE The Golden Era is accepted!

aspie3000's World War Three: SI is accepted!

gimmiepie's Aeterna is accepted!

Fusion200's Adventure Time! Pararell meetings is declined.
Alright, so, when you're making a roleplay based on a series that isn't Pokémon, you need to write more of a backstory about the series so those who haven't seen it understand what it's about. Also, you need more of a plot anyway. How about you explain why it happened? How? When? Where? Why? Go into more detail! And just from a roleplayer's point of view, having people constricted to using only characters from the story isn't really appealing at all. ): Why don't you include the idea to let people create their own characters?

Ryker's The Life of a Pokémon Ranger is declined.
So you'll need to go more into depth about this new threat as well as explaining why the students are chosen to overcome this thing and just... explain things more. Same as above! How, where, when, why, who etc, etc etc.

{Swan}'s REBOOT: Game of Chance and OOC thread is accepted!

CharmingAngel30's Link Artes Exhibition : Symphony of the Graces is accepted!

Za_Destroyer's Transformers: The Dying God is declined.
Like I said to Fusion200, you need to properly explain a back story of a non-Pokémon roleplay. Also, explain the virus, how it effects Primus, who was involved in it and how it effects everyone else.

jov0006's Rising Shadows is declined.
Um... you really need to explain who these people are and how they are bad! It's like you've begun writing in the middle of the plot! Can you write a background about all the organisations? d:
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Old December 28th, 2012, 12:21 AM
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Supervegeta's Aerion is accepted!
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Old January 1st, 2013, 06:33 PM
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Fusion200's Adventure Time! Parallel meetings is accepted!
I will accept this because it meets the basic standards but please keep an eye on your sentence and paragraph structure. And spacing.

PinkSapphire's Pokemon MMO is declined.
Um... the sign up is definitely way, WAY too personal. In a forum like this, you cannot ask people for personal information like this. Also, I'm still deciding on the similarities between this and Red's Monster Art Online and if it's too similar but in the mean time, please change that sign-up. I can assure you every single person is going to feel very uncomfortable giving personal information such as a first, middle and last name as well as real birthdate.

zid_sen's Pokemon Stars Family is declined.
I don't... think I understand this plot very well. Is... there even a plot? All you have is a setting. Would you be able to include why this place exists or the purpose of it? XD

Skymin's CLOUD v6.66 is accepted!
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Old January 7th, 2013, 02:55 PM
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PinkSapphire's Youkai Academy is accepted!
Just keep on top of your spelling/punctuation, okay? d:

fortworth96's Fargona: The Land of Dragons is accepted!

Cirrus' l i t a n y :: an anthem of worlds is accepted!

1ninjadude1701's Pokemon Total War is declined.
The plot is kinda confusing to understand. How does one join the Band of Light or Team Demise? What region is it set in? What has Team Demise done that is so evil that people have noticed them? And the same with the Band of Light? Remember the 5 Ws; who, what, when, where, why (and how).
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Old January 15th, 2013, 05:14 AM
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WolfOfEve's IC is accepted!

Skymin's IC is accepted!

Drago Dragonite's Pokemon Nightmare's Ascension is declined.
When posting roleplays in this forum, they need to meet a certain level of spelling, grammar and punctuation. Though your spelling is fine, your grammar and punctuation are not. For specifics on the issue, you can PM me. Also, you really need to go more in depth. What is the role of the people roleplaying? And what fuels this drawing's power? How does it plan on taking revenge on the entire world? Please, explain further~

TheUglyDucklett's Shattering Worlds is accepted!

Rafael p's Kingdom Hearts: Seperate Fates is declined.
The storyline is fine, but as this is a non-Pokémon roleplay, you'll need to supply a sufficient amount of back story for those who have not played the game but can still understand what is going on.

Pink Sapphire's IC thread is accepted!

VeganMacAndCheese's Hunger Games x Pokemon Crossover is accepted!
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Old January 16th, 2013, 03:40 PM
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TheUglyDucklett IC thread is accepted!

Drago Dragonite's Pokémon: Nightmare's Revenge is declined.
You may have improved the storyline but your punctuation is still quite poor. Don't forget to add spaces after full stops and commas and try to make use of paragraph structuring.

jov0006's Pokémon: The Five is accepted!
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Old January 21st, 2013, 03:05 AM
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Rafael p's Kingdom Hearts: Seperate Fates is declined.
Though you've explained more, you'll need to do a very general sum up of the series, like the role of Sora and why their battle is so important, and perhaps what they are fighting for altogether.

darkpokeball's Pokemon: Twist of Fate is accepted.

VeganMacAndCheese's Family is Hell is accepted!
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Old January 22nd, 2013, 03:50 PM
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Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers' echo; A KANTO JOURNEY and its OOC are accepted!
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Old January 28th, 2013, 05:34 AM
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1ninjadude1701 Pokemon Domination is accepted!
I was very much sceptic about accepting this, but I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt. Just don't let it be in vain!

Klar's The Hunt for Regivale is declined.
Though you've got your setting all worked out, you'll need to iron out what exactly the players will be doing and how Professor Palm's death and the email is relevant to the grand scheme of things.

123mew2's Pokemon Mystery Dungeon is declined.
Please read the Roleplay Rules thoroughly before posting a roleplay. You'll need a sufficient plot, rules section and a rating before getting accepted.

OrangeNess' ~Sinnoh~ is declined.
You'll need to outline what the players will actually be doing in the roleplay. A little more detailed than "taking down Team Galactic". d:

fortworth96's IC thread is accepted!

gimmiepie's Reapers: Keepers of the Balance is accepted!
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Old February 6th, 2013, 03:28 PM
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1ninjadude1701's OOC is accepted!

gimmiepie's IC thread is accepted!

Manganum's Pokémon: Azure and its IC is accepted!

Riveria's Pokemon Roleplay: The Fernski region is declined.
Um... I'm not sure what's going on. All of your information is very much jumbled together. To post roleplays here, you need a plot and in your case, you really need to outline more of each character and what players are going to be doing.

雷影 イチロ's America's Next Top Superhero is accepted!
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Old February 16th, 2013, 04:48 AM
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gimmiepie's Pokemon: Journeys through Novia is declined.
Everything's fine, you just don't have a rating. Please PM it to me or VM or whatever you want!

WolfOfEve's F O R S A K E N is accepted!

Jake♫'s Pokémon: The Zeta Emergence is accepted!

T-Zombie's Pokemon eevee adventures is declined.
Definitely check out the Roleplay Corner's rules before posting a roleplay. To get a roleplay accepted, you need a sufficient storyline, a rating, a rules section and a sign up sheet.

Fossil Fusion's Pokemon Rainbow Canyon is declined.
Everything is all good, you just need a rules section and a rating, which you can VM or PM to me.
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Old February 17th, 2013, 06:55 PM
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